for Teams RWBY and JNPR Watch the Show6/30/2023 c31 
1JazzyReader
Okay, Things are going well! As much as I would like to see the more Serious and important parts, such as The FoB, we're here to see the Reactions to the entire thing, not just pick and choose what we want. Also, really, my guy Oobleck isnt that bad, I actually rather like him as a Character. Ah, Ruby will sometimes suggest the most ridiculous things, its part of why I really like her. If they think this is serious, then man are they in for one hell of a ride. I understand everyone is gonna be hit by both Penny and Pyrrha getting killed, but Ruby is undoubtebly going to be hit the hardest. She was after all the only who witnessed both die, and couldnt even really do anything about either. Well, for now we'll have the shenanigans at Mt. Glenn, and then things will get more serious. Looking forward to the Next Chapter!
1JazzyReaderOkay, Things are going well! As much as I would like to see the more Serious and important parts, such as The FoB, we're here to see the Reactions to the entire thing, not just pick and choose what we want. Also, really, my guy Oobleck isnt that bad, I actually rather like him as a Character. Ah, Ruby will sometimes suggest the most ridiculous things, its part of why I really like her. If they think this is serious, then man are they in for one hell of a ride. I understand everyone is gonna be hit by both Penny and Pyrrha getting killed, but Ruby is undoubtebly going to be hit the hardest. She was after all the only who witnessed both die, and couldnt even really do anything about either. Well, for now we'll have the shenanigans at Mt. Glenn, and then things will get more serious. Looking forward to the Next Chapter!
6/29/2023 c31 Guest
Good chap
Good chap
6/27/2023 c30 rickochey
Really interested to see the future parts, keep up the great work! :)
Really interested to see the future parts, keep up the great work! :)
6/24/2023 c30 Lord Destroyer
To the author, regarding those trying to tell you what to do about shipping, they don’t get control how you write. It’s your story, and you’re the one writing, not them. So don’t listen to them. If they request or ask nicely through suggestions, maybe you could take it into consideration, but they are outright telling you what to do, so you don’t owe them anything.
As for the reviewers who demand the author not ship as the person sees fit, who are you trying to control how the author writes? This is the author’s story, not yours. You could make suggestions nicely, which might be considered. But the moment you try to tell an author how the story should be written, then the person doesn’t have to do as you say, since no one owes you anything. So stop being entitled, Karen.
To the author, I apologize for the non review, but someone needs to tell those assholes not to demand how you write.
That said, I’ve enjoyed the story so far. I don’t mind the potential whiterose shipping or the arkos shipping. Since this story is about the RWBY cast watching the future to change the outcome, why the heck not go ham on shipping.
Again, your story, your writing, not theirs. You don’t owe them anything at all if they demand you on how to write.
Again I apologize for using the review to go off at those entitled moronic assholes.
To the author, regarding those trying to tell you what to do about shipping, they don’t get control how you write. It’s your story, and you’re the one writing, not them. So don’t listen to them. If they request or ask nicely through suggestions, maybe you could take it into consideration, but they are outright telling you what to do, so you don’t owe them anything.
As for the reviewers who demand the author not ship as the person sees fit, who are you trying to control how the author writes? This is the author’s story, not yours. You could make suggestions nicely, which might be considered. But the moment you try to tell an author how the story should be written, then the person doesn’t have to do as you say, since no one owes you anything. So stop being entitled, Karen.
To the author, I apologize for the non review, but someone needs to tell those assholes not to demand how you write.
That said, I’ve enjoyed the story so far. I don’t mind the potential whiterose shipping or the arkos shipping. Since this story is about the RWBY cast watching the future to change the outcome, why the heck not go ham on shipping.
Again, your story, your writing, not theirs. You don’t owe them anything at all if they demand you on how to write.
Again I apologize for using the review to go off at those entitled moronic assholes.
6/24/2023 c30 1JazzyReader
This is really Good! Now, im not the biggest on shipping, not something im that serious about, but seeing Ruby so defensive over Weiss and then just being confused is funny to see. Also, they are going to be in for one hell of a ride. I know its gonna be way in the Future, but I do really wanna see their Reaction to Volume 9. Thats not to say that the previous Volumes are bad or anything, hell theres gonna be who knows how much Trauma from those alone, but the whole thing with Ruby's Mental Health just drastically getting Curb-Stomped in the Ever After whilst she has an Existential and Identity Crisis is most definitely going to Hit hard, what with the Whole 'getting essentially completly Abandoned by her Team and then having a full on Breakdown'. Also, since this is basically fully following Canon, do you plan on stuff like Ruby's Silver Eyes activating to still happen, or will that just be in the Episode? Because it feels like her Eyes would still go off. Well, guess we gotta wait till then. Love the whole thing, never thought id be interested, but I guess them having to witness everything they go through in a Third-Person perspective is going to really hit them in the Feels. Excited for the Next Chapter!
1JazzyReaderThis is really Good! Now, im not the biggest on shipping, not something im that serious about, but seeing Ruby so defensive over Weiss and then just being confused is funny to see. Also, they are going to be in for one hell of a ride. I know its gonna be way in the Future, but I do really wanna see their Reaction to Volume 9. Thats not to say that the previous Volumes are bad or anything, hell theres gonna be who knows how much Trauma from those alone, but the whole thing with Ruby's Mental Health just drastically getting Curb-Stomped in the Ever After whilst she has an Existential and Identity Crisis is most definitely going to Hit hard, what with the Whole 'getting essentially completly Abandoned by her Team and then having a full on Breakdown'. Also, since this is basically fully following Canon, do you plan on stuff like Ruby's Silver Eyes activating to still happen, or will that just be in the Episode? Because it feels like her Eyes would still go off. Well, guess we gotta wait till then. Love the whole thing, never thought id be interested, but I guess them having to witness everything they go through in a Third-Person perspective is going to really hit them in the Feels. Excited for the Next Chapter!
6/24/2023 c30 SoulDevils
Please I beg you don’t make Arkos be honest Pyrrha is extremely dumb. Bitch pushed Jaune into a locker after kissing him .He literally told her not to go back. But no she did it anyways. And she said she died for they to live. She could lived with they through this hell. Instead she left Jaune for honor. And to make matters worse she proven how little faith in Jaune.
Please I beg you don’t make Arkos be honest Pyrrha is extremely dumb. Bitch pushed Jaune into a locker after kissing him .He literally told her not to go back. But no she did it anyways. And she said she died for they to live. She could lived with they through this hell. Instead she left Jaune for honor. And to make matters worse she proven how little faith in Jaune.
6/24/2023 c30 1SupremeVegeta15
Great chapter, but I'm a little disappointed that no one noticed Penny dancing the Robot.
1SupremeVegeta15Great chapter, but I'm a little disappointed that no one noticed Penny dancing the Robot.
6/23/2023 c30 Zenhope
The reactions were good as always but a word of advice. Don't try to react with each and every episode it will simply take you too long. Try to show only the key and important episodes or you can stitch together important scenes from different episodes into one chapter.
Ignore the filler episodes and focus only on the ones that advances the story. I think that way you will be able to cover more ground.
The reactions were good as always but a word of advice. Don't try to react with each and every episode it will simply take you too long. Try to show only the key and important episodes or you can stitch together important scenes from different episodes into one chapter.
Ignore the filler episodes and focus only on the ones that advances the story. I think that way you will be able to cover more ground.
6/23/2023 c30 Ceo160
Oh the optimism before Vol. 3
This had me in a giggle fit XD
"Introducing…"
"Yang…"
"His Royal Majesty!"
"Yang!"
"Princess Jaune Arc!"
"Yang Stop!" Jaune yells
Oh the optimism before Vol. 3
This had me in a giggle fit XD
"Introducing…"
"Yang…"
"His Royal Majesty!"
"Yang!"
"Princess Jaune Arc!"
"Yang Stop!" Jaune yells
6/23/2023 c30 4Monster King
Awesome work just for the record while I despise the person cinder fall was by that point after watching episode 6 of volume 8 midnight I do pity the slave she once was. In fact i uspect that what was revealed about her past only touches the tip of the iceberg of how bad her past was. Though she is a victim of circumstances and likely can't see how bad her actions are and pass redemption I belive there was a point in her life cinder could have been saved from her current path can't wait for thay reveal oh and please keep up the awesome work I love this reaction fic
4Monster KingAwesome work just for the record while I despise the person cinder fall was by that point after watching episode 6 of volume 8 midnight I do pity the slave she once was. In fact i uspect that what was revealed about her past only touches the tip of the iceberg of how bad her past was. Though she is a victim of circumstances and likely can't see how bad her actions are and pass redemption I belive there was a point in her life cinder could have been saved from her current path can't wait for thay reveal oh and please keep up the awesome work I love this reaction fic
6/16/2023 c27 AkumaReap3r
Another fun chapter, hopefully with more to come in the near future considering it's still volume 2.
Another fun chapter, hopefully with more to come in the near future considering it's still volume 2.