
2/7/2023 c12
4RCKBNFSK
This is one of the most interesting and complex backstories for Rick that I have ever seen. The references to other shows is almost like solving a puzzle in the middle of a story, which adds to the fun. Demming was an interesting add, seeing as we are seasons beyond his involvement. Pointing out of the team bullied Castle at that time was a interesting addition (although I hope that in three years Ryan and Espo have done enough to repair that relationship). Gate's irritation is enjoyable. My last, and most important, comment is: isn't a very crucial character, a main focus of this story, missing? Will she be back soon?
Looking forward to more.
Best

This is one of the most interesting and complex backstories for Rick that I have ever seen. The references to other shows is almost like solving a puzzle in the middle of a story, which adds to the fun. Demming was an interesting add, seeing as we are seasons beyond his involvement. Pointing out of the team bullied Castle at that time was a interesting addition (although I hope that in three years Ryan and Espo have done enough to repair that relationship). Gate's irritation is enjoyable. My last, and most important, comment is: isn't a very crucial character, a main focus of this story, missing? Will she be back soon?
Looking forward to more.
Best
1/30/2023 c12 JAG'ed Bones in the Casckett
always love your siltation though if I'm honest it's rare that I don't at least have some knowledge about what your referring to. Now if you manage to find a way to reference "7 days" in this story I'll be shocked. Frankly I'd be a little surprised if you know it. It was a syndicated TV show that was short lived but ran in reruns on spike tv back in the day. The actor who played lead corrector "Frank B Parker" on that show was also in the District. I'm so glad to see you back posting and I loved the chapter especially Deming's appearance.
always love your siltation though if I'm honest it's rare that I don't at least have some knowledge about what your referring to. Now if you manage to find a way to reference "7 days" in this story I'll be shocked. Frankly I'd be a little surprised if you know it. It was a syndicated TV show that was short lived but ran in reruns on spike tv back in the day. The actor who played lead corrector "Frank B Parker" on that show was also in the District. I'm so glad to see you back posting and I loved the chapter especially Deming's appearance.
1/30/2023 c12 cabreradepartamento
A good way for many to believe that the affable writer is someone you don't want to be after you upset me that the one who messed with the younger brother learned that he should have gone looking for the tigers at the zoo before messing with the younger brother of castel everyone is learning who was the one who really directed the 12.
A good way for many to believe that the affable writer is someone you don't want to be after you upset me that the one who messed with the younger brother learned that he should have gone looking for the tigers at the zoo before messing with the younger brother of castel everyone is learning who was the one who really directed the 12.
1/30/2023 c12
19wendykw
I still find this story fascinating, as well as being educational. I've always loved stories that have Rick as a smart, accomplished guy.

I still find this story fascinating, as well as being educational. I've always loved stories that have Rick as a smart, accomplished guy.
1/5/2023 c11 scorpio38457
Really enjoying your story. Its great to see Castle not being a rug that people walk all over.
Really enjoying your story. Its great to see Castle not being a rug that people walk all over.
12/30/2022 c11
4RCKBNFSK
An interesting, well researched and well written chapter. Fascinating historical references. Nice theory about LokSat's possible motivations. An enjoyable and complex father/son dynamic.
One question: Kate?

An interesting, well researched and well written chapter. Fascinating historical references. Nice theory about LokSat's possible motivations. An enjoyable and complex father/son dynamic.
One question: Kate?
12/27/2022 c11 iHaz
Lucifer (Iblees or Shaitaan, as he is known in the Qur'an) was never an angel according to the Islamic tradition. He is from the 'Jinn', a creation made from smokeless fire unlike angels who are made from light. According to the Islamic tradition, angels don't have freewill and is incapable of rebellion. They simply do as they are told but that doesn't mean they can't speak their mindthey are not robots. Humans and Jinn are the only 2 beings, that we are made aware of at least by God, who possess the capacity to either submit their will to God or rebel against Him. They can choose to do whatever they want, but will be questioned and judged about it all in the hereafter.
Iblees failed to follow a direct command of God, which all the angels followed in an instance, thus becoming the accursed devil aka Shaitaan (Satan).
Kindly avoid including any misinformation. Thanks.
Lucifer (Iblees or Shaitaan, as he is known in the Qur'an) was never an angel according to the Islamic tradition. He is from the 'Jinn', a creation made from smokeless fire unlike angels who are made from light. According to the Islamic tradition, angels don't have freewill and is incapable of rebellion. They simply do as they are told but that doesn't mean they can't speak their mindthey are not robots. Humans and Jinn are the only 2 beings, that we are made aware of at least by God, who possess the capacity to either submit their will to God or rebel against Him. They can choose to do whatever they want, but will be questioned and judged about it all in the hereafter.
Iblees failed to follow a direct command of God, which all the angels followed in an instance, thus becoming the accursed devil aka Shaitaan (Satan).
Kindly avoid including any misinformation. Thanks.
12/26/2022 c11 JAG'ed Bones in the Casckett
another strong chapter would have liked to see a little more of what was going on off the plan but good chapter, it felt like you were getting a lot of heavy lifting out of the way.
another strong chapter would have liked to see a little more of what was going on off the plan but good chapter, it felt like you were getting a lot of heavy lifting out of the way.
12/26/2022 c11 Manxkid
I found this chapter extremely interesting from a historical point of view- thank you.
I found this chapter extremely interesting from a historical point of view- thank you.
12/26/2022 c11 MrsChabie
You capture Castle's tough side (masculine and ruthless) very well! I always love reading this! Merry Christmas!
You capture Castle's tough side (masculine and ruthless) very well! I always love reading this! Merry Christmas!
12/25/2022 c11
70TankW1
An interesting chapter as an intelligence history lesson, but might be considered over kill just to provide a means for Castle to 'show off'.
stay safe
Tank

An interesting chapter as an intelligence history lesson, but might be considered over kill just to provide a means for Castle to 'show off'.
stay safe
Tank
12/24/2022 c11 cabreradepartamento
First of all, a very Merry Christmas and you are really making it difficult for the detective to keep up with the writer's rhythm because at this rate, not even as an assistant does she measure is emerging as the executing fist of the commissioner and successor and you could create a whole saga of the new deputy commissioner with his brother, for sure it would be epic of course, his poor prosecutor sister would end up with gray hair because that appr would efficiently catch everyone who wanted will cross, skipping all the rules, but without the defense or the prosecutor being able to prove something inappropriate. If the detective can continue, she would have to face the ladies of the clan who would make the rules very clear and remember that they can bury someone and nobody finds them.
First of all, a very Merry Christmas and you are really making it difficult for the detective to keep up with the writer's rhythm because at this rate, not even as an assistant does she measure is emerging as the executing fist of the commissioner and successor and you could create a whole saga of the new deputy commissioner with his brother, for sure it would be epic of course, his poor prosecutor sister would end up with gray hair because that appr would efficiently catch everyone who wanted will cross, skipping all the rules, but without the defense or the prosecutor being able to prove something inappropriate. If the detective can continue, she would have to face the ladies of the clan who would make the rules very clear and remember that they can bury someone and nobody finds them.