for The Spine
329/27/2022 c5 Madhatter
I like the story so far, but you need longer chapters. Keeping them short leaves out of details and character development. I think if you wrote around 2k words per chapter it would make it even better to read. Good luck!
I like the story so far, but you need longer chapters. Keeping them short leaves out of details and character development. I think if you wrote around 2k words per chapter it would make it even better to read. Good luck!