for Birds of a Feather11/4/2022 c3 wolfy48
please update soon your story is very interesting can't wait to read the next chapter keep up the awesome work
please update soon your story is very interesting can't wait to read the next chapter keep up the awesome work
9/22/2022 c3 
7jh831
Hope to see Fleur transform and through some fireballs, or send some nasty hexes jacobs way
7jh831Hope to see Fleur transform and through some fireballs, or send some nasty hexes jacobs way
9/14/2022 c3 asia.joanna.7334
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9/11/2022 c2 lelesnow81
Wow just wow I didn't expect fleur to be so bold i love it. Wirh just the 2 chapters so far im hooked and can't wait for the next chapter
Wow just wow I didn't expect fleur to be so bold i love it. Wirh just the 2 chapters so far im hooked and can't wait for the next chapter
9/10/2022 c2 asia.joanna.7334
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9/9/2022 c1 asia.joanna.7334
Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it Really interesting start story i can't wait to see where you go from have to update soon please continue asap soon please continue asap soon
Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it Really interesting start story i can't wait to see where you go from have to update soon please continue asap soon please continue asap soon
9/9/2022 c1 5Sandy2348
In response to the guest review,
Jacob had to stop being friends with Bella because he shifted. In my story, I said she never found out because she never slapped Paul. So, naturally, they would’ve just kept spewing insults at her. Even though he loved her, he had to stand by as his friends destroyed any hope of getting Jacob back as her best friend.
She was emotionally torn apart, thus was physically able to run away. This is not a violent story. This is just the setup.
Sam is not saying they’ll literally kill each other. It’s just a saying when people refer to impending acts of extreme violence, but not necessarily death. They’re wolves. They fight. A lot.
Sam will be in trouble because as alpha he’ll have to deal with the drama in the pack. Keep reading and you’ll find out.
A bunch of young boys bullied his daughter. The Clearwaters were in no way involved with what happened to Bella so there would be no reason for Charlie not to have fallen in love and then later married Sue.
Hope that clears up any misunderstandings.
A new chapter will be added soon. Thanks for reading
5Sandy2348In response to the guest review,
Jacob had to stop being friends with Bella because he shifted. In my story, I said she never found out because she never slapped Paul. So, naturally, they would’ve just kept spewing insults at her. Even though he loved her, he had to stand by as his friends destroyed any hope of getting Jacob back as her best friend.
She was emotionally torn apart, thus was physically able to run away. This is not a violent story. This is just the setup.
Sam is not saying they’ll literally kill each other. It’s just a saying when people refer to impending acts of extreme violence, but not necessarily death. They’re wolves. They fight. A lot.
Sam will be in trouble because as alpha he’ll have to deal with the drama in the pack. Keep reading and you’ll find out.
A bunch of young boys bullied his daughter. The Clearwaters were in no way involved with what happened to Bella so there would be no reason for Charlie not to have fallen in love and then later married Sue.
Hope that clears up any misunderstandings.
A new chapter will be added soon. Thanks for reading
9/9/2022 c1 Guest
There are many things that don’t quite make sense? Jacob is obsessed with her but let the pack tear her apart?
She was torn apart yet was able to run away?
Jacob would kill Paul over something he allowed him to do?
Why is Sam In trouble, when it’s Jacobs fault?
Why would Charlie marry into the tribe after they traumatised his only child?
There are many things that don’t quite make sense? Jacob is obsessed with her but let the pack tear her apart?
She was torn apart yet was able to run away?
Jacob would kill Paul over something he allowed him to do?
Why is Sam In trouble, when it’s Jacobs fault?
Why would Charlie marry into the tribe after they traumatised his only child?
9/9/2022 c1 Sandy2348
Answering mitkon2001, I’m unsure of who from HP will be making an appearance. They will not be having their wedding in La Push so it won’t be a HP invasion.
There are vampires. Cullens won’t be involved. There will be talks of vampires. I’m unsure if I’ll have one appear or not. If I do, it won’t be a Cullen.
I actually wrote 24 pages of this story in one go, but realized it was way to long for just one chapter. I had to cut this one short because it was the most reasonable place to stop for a 1st chapter.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! A new chapter should be up in a day or so.
Answering mitkon2001, I’m unsure of who from HP will be making an appearance. They will not be having their wedding in La Push so it won’t be a HP invasion.
There are vampires. Cullens won’t be involved. There will be talks of vampires. I’m unsure if I’ll have one appear or not. If I do, it won’t be a Cullen.
I actually wrote 24 pages of this story in one go, but realized it was way to long for just one chapter. I had to cut this one short because it was the most reasonable place to stop for a 1st chapter.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! A new chapter should be up in a day or so.