for The Illusive Mage11/10 c6 Drag7
The story is absolute gold. It's easily your best one so far.
Believable and likable characters that are actually cunning. A main character with drive and agency. Perfect pacing and not an ounce of filler. I buy physical books that aren't half as good, let alone the Ebook mumbo jumbo on Amazon.
I just hope it doesn't get dropped, replaced, or sidelined by RL issues. Wishing you all the best: an avid reader.
The story is absolute gold. It's easily your best one so far.
Believable and likable characters that are actually cunning. A main character with drive and agency. Perfect pacing and not an ounce of filler. I buy physical books that aren't half as good, let alone the Ebook mumbo jumbo on Amazon.
I just hope it doesn't get dropped, replaced, or sidelined by RL issues. Wishing you all the best: an avid reader.
10/30 c3 BlueArk64
okay, not gonna lie, i was very iffy on this one when i started on chap one, but it has grown on my greatly and i look forwsrd to reading the next 5 chapters of this very interesting what if
okay, not gonna lie, i was very iffy on this one when i started on chap one, but it has grown on my greatly and i look forwsrd to reading the next 5 chapters of this very interesting what if
10/21 c1 
5TheFlowerOfTheCourt
It really throws me off because the actress that played Pansy in the movies, small though her roll was, turned out to be a smoke show IMO.
5TheFlowerOfTheCourtIt really throws me off because the actress that played Pansy in the movies, small though her roll was, turned out to be a smoke show IMO.
10/21 c8 TheFlowerOfTheCourt
This thing finally starts to ramp up and then I find out I’m all out of content! Take my praise and interactions and fix the issue lol! Great story so far, keep it up!
This thing finally starts to ramp up and then I find out I’m all out of content! Take my praise and interactions and fix the issue lol! Great story so far, keep it up!
10/19 c8 Rokai666
I love how this story a lot. Keep it up, but I can't say I love the grapey evil scene with Pansy. I don't mind a gray Harry or completely evil Harry but then again that's exactly the kinda thing that Voldemort would do before he went mad murder hobo. It's an interesting concept for Harry to struggle with his emotions with the memories of Voldemort and his mom flying around in his head.
I love how this story a lot. Keep it up, but I can't say I love the grapey evil scene with Pansy. I don't mind a gray Harry or completely evil Harry but then again that's exactly the kinda thing that Voldemort would do before he went mad murder hobo. It's an interesting concept for Harry to struggle with his emotions with the memories of Voldemort and his mom flying around in his head.
10/17 c3 diabolusapocaly
Beyond perfect as always
Beyond perfect as always