for Humanity's Stranger4/29/2024 c1 Guest
So, basically, Naruto is this powerful MF but despite his presence, everything is going the same as canon so far. He also seems to be awfully close to devils, judging by his actions. So much for 'humanity'.
Other than that, this story is disjointed af. It is a mess. It jumps from Devil Civil War to Akeno being reincarnated as devil then skips the issue with Kuroka altogether and hola hop, somehow, the next scene is Naruto waking up next to Kuroka in bed because they are apparently in a relationship.
And I am like, 'WTF?'.
Naruto is also some kind of assassin? Which is dumb beyond reason. It's there because the author thought it would be cool or something.
As I said, this is a massive mess. I am not saying it can't be entertaining for certain people. But holy hell, don't use your brain when reading this because it makes no sense. The MCs actions. The way the story jumps through the timeline with zero explanation. The MCs relationship that was just dropped there out of nowhere. Ugh.
So, basically, Naruto is this powerful MF but despite his presence, everything is going the same as canon so far. He also seems to be awfully close to devils, judging by his actions. So much for 'humanity'.
Other than that, this story is disjointed af. It is a mess. It jumps from Devil Civil War to Akeno being reincarnated as devil then skips the issue with Kuroka altogether and hola hop, somehow, the next scene is Naruto waking up next to Kuroka in bed because they are apparently in a relationship.
And I am like, 'WTF?'.
Naruto is also some kind of assassin? Which is dumb beyond reason. It's there because the author thought it would be cool or something.
As I said, this is a massive mess. I am not saying it can't be entertaining for certain people. But holy hell, don't use your brain when reading this because it makes no sense. The MCs actions. The way the story jumps through the timeline with zero explanation. The MCs relationship that was just dropped there out of nowhere. Ugh.
4/1/2024 c5 Minebowium
I'm really enjoying this story and i find it gripping.
I look forward to more coming.
I'm really enjoying this story and i find it gripping.
I look forward to more coming.
3/29/2024 c5 Windgeboren
Very strong chapter. The ending really makes me crave for more. Thanks for writing it.
Very strong chapter. The ending really makes me crave for more. Thanks for writing it.
3/28/2024 c5 NaruCrazy
1. Which anime are all the new characters from... his kids or whomever Naruto interacted with.
2. What was the significance of the item which Naruto gave Xenovia? Whom did he make it for?
3. Whom did Azazel kill to garner such response from Naruto and why?
4. Lastly what is Naruto's Konoha? Humanity or Kuoh or Japan or some other place or ideal?
1. Which anime are all the new characters from... his kids or whomever Naruto interacted with.
2. What was the significance of the item which Naruto gave Xenovia? Whom did he make it for?
3. Whom did Azazel kill to garner such response from Naruto and why?
4. Lastly what is Naruto's Konoha? Humanity or Kuoh or Japan or some other place or ideal?
3/28/2024 c5 Unnatural Reader
Nice use of Kokabiel’s powers, well thought out and inventive all around. Even with the change it’s nice to see Naruto treat him like a new trainee, not needing to go full force and learning restraint over is thousands of years. Can’t wait to learn more about his past and who the woman was that he spoke to Xenovia about. Keep up the great work
Nice use of Kokabiel’s powers, well thought out and inventive all around. Even with the change it’s nice to see Naruto treat him like a new trainee, not needing to go full force and learning restraint over is thousands of years. Can’t wait to learn more about his past and who the woman was that he spoke to Xenovia about. Keep up the great work
3/26/2024 c5 Guest
Loved the character hope to see the next one soon. I am also hoping to see the next chapter of ASoM soon, I waited the whole weekend thinking that the chapter would come out but sadly it didn’t. In any case I hope that it is released soon, good luck with your stories.
Loved the character hope to see the next one soon. I am also hoping to see the next chapter of ASoM soon, I waited the whole weekend thinking that the chapter would come out but sadly it didn’t. In any case I hope that it is released soon, good luck with your stories.
3/24/2024 c3 2hupedia
I do hope Issei doesn't eventually get executed by him, Issei is a lot of things and many of them are bad, but he's definitely not a bad person if that makes sense.
I do hope Issei doesn't eventually get executed by him, Issei is a lot of things and many of them are bad, but he's definitely not a bad person if that makes sense.
3/23/2024 c4 
2AlgusSadalfas
Sylvir, I meant. Took me until after the last post to realize I misspelled his name.
2AlgusSadalfasSylvir, I meant. Took me until after the last post to realize I misspelled his name.
3/23/2024 c5 AlgusSadalfas
I might be wrong, but was that Silvir’s band that was handed to Naruto at the end there resulting in Naruto essentially declaring war in Grigori? It’s been an interesting read thus far.
I might be wrong, but was that Silvir’s band that was handed to Naruto at the end there resulting in Naruto essentially declaring war in Grigori? It’s been an interesting read thus far.
3/22/2024 c5 KoPi SuSu Dingin
Damn whose death led to this war between Konoha and the Fallen. Wow the part about Naruto and who I presume is Jeanne d'Arc was really sad, they could have a happy life but it just fell under the weight of "Truth". Also hope you could make it so that Naruto will understand that Issei and Ddraig could be friends and create a better path if they understand each other. Also please expand more on Xenovia as this is a good example of how "Truth" hurts and hard to shoulder, but it isn't impossible to overcome and move on with it. Overall I love this chapter as it adds more weight to Naruto's influence and how it sharpens the world. I would love to read more of this soon, also stay healthy and safe out here.
Damn whose death led to this war between Konoha and the Fallen. Wow the part about Naruto and who I presume is Jeanne d'Arc was really sad, they could have a happy life but it just fell under the weight of "Truth". Also hope you could make it so that Naruto will understand that Issei and Ddraig could be friends and create a better path if they understand each other. Also please expand more on Xenovia as this is a good example of how "Truth" hurts and hard to shoulder, but it isn't impossible to overcome and move on with it. Overall I love this chapter as it adds more weight to Naruto's influence and how it sharpens the world. I would love to read more of this soon, also stay healthy and safe out here.
3/22/2024 c1 The Stasis Slayer
Another great and hefty read once again, I must compliment your attention to detail. not many stories are great at writing the thoughts of characters and the number of stories able to do that at your level are even fewer. The characterization is incredible and the characters seem more serious or consistent here than in the show.
I don't want to spoil anything in the reviews in case someone reads them before the newer chapter but I enjoy the world building you've been doing especially in regards to 'Konoha.' I will have to reread this and previous chapters to see if I might've missed anything that could lead to the identity of the fella who died. Unfortunately, my knowledge on the dxd universe is lacking as I haven't seen anything past the first season but I'll have to give it a watch to see what else I might be missing.
Another great and hefty read once again, I must compliment your attention to detail. not many stories are great at writing the thoughts of characters and the number of stories able to do that at your level are even fewer. The characterization is incredible and the characters seem more serious or consistent here than in the show.
I don't want to spoil anything in the reviews in case someone reads them before the newer chapter but I enjoy the world building you've been doing especially in regards to 'Konoha.' I will have to reread this and previous chapters to see if I might've missed anything that could lead to the identity of the fella who died. Unfortunately, my knowledge on the dxd universe is lacking as I haven't seen anything past the first season but I'll have to give it a watch to see what else I might be missing.
3/21/2024 c5 D-Na25
Hello.. Thanks for the fict. It was good. One of the best stories I've ever read..
Want to ask something tho. And please. I hope you answer this.
Does grayfia has a 'past' or some kind of affair with Naruto?
As far as i can reas. He's quite fond of her and Grayfia herself seems cool with naruto...
Does they have that kind of relationship in the past? Or are they still?
Thanks you.
Hope you stay healthy and happy..
See ya next chap!
Hello.. Thanks for the fict. It was good. One of the best stories I've ever read..
Want to ask something tho. And please. I hope you answer this.
Does grayfia has a 'past' or some kind of affair with Naruto?
As far as i can reas. He's quite fond of her and Grayfia herself seems cool with naruto...
Does they have that kind of relationship in the past? Or are they still?
Thanks you.
Hope you stay healthy and happy..
See ya next chap!