for Seducing Destiny6/12/2024 c16 TrumpasaurusRex
"Must be. You're sixteen. Anyway, you've got to lean on me to get stuff done."
He’s sixteen in his third year?
This is another horrible decision in the number of AU changes in this fic.
"Must be. You're sixteen. Anyway, you've got to lean on me to get stuff done."
He’s sixteen in his third year?
This is another horrible decision in the number of AU changes in this fic.
6/12/2024 c6 TrumpasaurusRex
The MC is a horrible negotiator. His performance at Gringotts is embarrassing.
The MC is a horrible negotiator. His performance at Gringotts is embarrassing.
6/12/2024 c2 TrumpasaurusRex
Forcing him to sleep with a bunch of people in a short period of time by the system? Or he will literally be forced out of this reality?
That’s the flimsiest, most forced harem shenanigans I’ve ever heard.
And it’s like a slave system.
I don’t like any system that forces actions and punishes the user.
Forcing him to sleep with a bunch of people in a short period of time by the system? Or he will literally be forced out of this reality?
That’s the flimsiest, most forced harem shenanigans I’ve ever heard.
And it’s like a slave system.
I don’t like any system that forces actions and punishes the user.
6/12/2024 c1 TrumpasaurusRex
I don’t like ANY of the AU changes.
Killing Sirius, making Hermione a werewolf, etc.? Horrible decisions.
I don’t like ANY of the AU changes.
Killing Sirius, making Hermione a werewolf, etc.? Horrible decisions.
6/11/2024 c86 GodudamaMaker
What a scene! The inner train of thought was so descriptive, I could feel the weight of the situation. I love the character development of our Harry as he grows to slowly care for his women. Keep up the great work.
What a scene! The inner train of thought was so descriptive, I could feel the weight of the situation. I love the character development of our Harry as he grows to slowly care for his women. Keep up the great work.
16/7/2024 c97 Martin-di-Arcov
damn... always loved the "pulling secrets on each other" scene... it's always an incredibly entertaining bit of intrigue
also: it's hilarious that someone just drank the glass of cum out of nowhere. no matter who it is. just fucking out of nowhere. funny how neither Harry nor Emmeline considered what else the "feet movements" could've meant...
damn... always loved the "pulling secrets on each other" scene... it's always an incredibly entertaining bit of intrigue
also: it's hilarious that someone just drank the glass of cum out of nowhere. no matter who it is. just fucking out of nowhere. funny how neither Harry nor Emmeline considered what else the "feet movements" could've meant...
6/7/2024 c97 millerb82hotmail.com
have you given up on progressing the story? There practically no difference between the last 10 chapters.
have you given up on progressing the story? There practically no difference between the last 10 chapters.
6/7/2024 c97 Zithoro
just wanted to let you know that I appreciate your story and that you can take all the breaks you need
just wanted to let you know that I appreciate your story and that you can take all the breaks you need
5/16/2024 c96 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre