for Seducing Destiny12/15/2024 c126 Chronos
I don’t know if you’ve read it or not, but “Seducer System” by PercyPendragon3 on ffn and AO3 has a pretty similar idea to yours but is also very different. Harry having gamer powers and promiscuous tendencies are the only things I’d say your fics have in common. You should def give it a read. Same author name on both ffn and AO3.
I don’t know if you’ve read it or not, but “Seducer System” by PercyPendragon3 on ffn and AO3 has a pretty similar idea to yours but is also very different. Harry having gamer powers and promiscuous tendencies are the only things I’d say your fics have in common. You should def give it a read. Same author name on both ffn and AO3.
112/15/2024 c75 tajarim
This whole thing leeches away reading enjoyment, because either the MC fucks himself over randomly, or his "system" does. Nothing makes sense!
This whole thing leeches away reading enjoyment, because either the MC fucks himself over randomly, or his "system" does. Nothing makes sense!
12/15/2024 c126 xExzilex
im sorry been too many chapters can we stop saying third year pass out? he finished third year and is still in hogwarts why do you keep making it seem like the dude dropped out of school honestly my biggest peev even if stuff has gotten needlessly complicated for no reason
im sorry been too many chapters can we stop saying third year pass out? he finished third year and is still in hogwarts why do you keep making it seem like the dude dropped out of school honestly my biggest peev even if stuff has gotten needlessly complicated for no reason
12/14/2024 c126 gigamans57
Fights would be so much better with less talking. Why the hell would they be talking at all when a lot of the magic they use, they need to speak for? It's so dumb. If he NEEDS to be a cocky dickhead can he wait until he's won at least...
'Quippy one liner' then casts the spell by saying words, just CAST THE SPELL MAN.
Fights would be so much better with less talking. Why the hell would they be talking at all when a lot of the magic they use, they need to speak for? It's so dumb. If he NEEDS to be a cocky dickhead can he wait until he's won at least...
'Quippy one liner' then casts the spell by saying words, just CAST THE SPELL MAN.
12/14/2024 c52 tajarim
It's just so exhausting that MC constantly pulls some stupid BS that severely nerfs him. FFS! Guy is a cocky moron.
It's just so exhausting that MC constantly pulls some stupid BS that severely nerfs him. FFS! Guy is a cocky moron.
12/10/2024 c125 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
12/10/2024 c125 Lean1212
Thanks for the chapter. But yes, as it's pointed out, I too feel like this arc has overstayed it's welcome (much before this chapter, tbh). At this point I find myself skimming over unfortunately.
Thanks for the chapter. But yes, as it's pointed out, I too feel like this arc has overstayed it's welcome (much before this chapter, tbh). At this point I find myself skimming over unfortunately.
12/10/2024 c125 gigamans57
This is getting so long, just so we are clear chapter 107 is titled the world cup part 1, and we are STILL here.
This story started at the end of third year and fourth year hasn't started in 125 chapters and over 500k words.
Is it because you're selling this story?.. It's needlessly wordy and complex.
This is getting so long, just so we are clear chapter 107 is titled the world cup part 1, and we are STILL here.
This story started at the end of third year and fourth year hasn't started in 125 chapters and over 500k words.
Is it because you're selling this story?.. It's needlessly wordy and complex.
12/10/2024 c125 Rafael Rocha
Your fic is really good, you have great writing skills and a good sence of making a narrative and good grammar. But the way you needlessly make things longer is a little annoying. First time seeing more than 20 chapters to end the world cup.
Your fic is really good, you have great writing skills and a good sence of making a narrative and good grammar. But the way you needlessly make things longer is a little annoying. First time seeing more than 20 chapters to end the world cup.
12/5/2024 c124 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
12/5/2024 c124 Guest
Kinda cringe..? I don’t really even understand his motivation half the time. This story has kinda always been cringe with the rampant misogyny every chapter but recently it’s also gotten a whole new type of cringe with whatever has been going on.
Kinda cringe..? I don’t really even understand his motivation half the time. This story has kinda always been cringe with the rampant misogyny every chapter but recently it’s also gotten a whole new type of cringe with whatever has been going on.