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9/23/2022 c4 caseykam
I know he's throwing himself a pity party, but I really feel bad for Joe. I spent years working true night shifts putting myself through school. I feel his pain. 'Day people' just don't get it. So...how is Joe going to get his confidence back? Callie just became a target, didn't she? Oh, you are evil! Good chapter. :)
9/23/2022 c4 max2013
So, is Darcy the murdered girl or the one who left the roses?!
9/23/2022 c4 8ErinJordan
please update soon enjoying the story so far...
very interesting
9/23/2022 c4 MargaretA66
You are promising darker day? Oh my.
9/23/2022 c4 Candylou
I could be wrong, but I think darcy has a bitter end to her bitter life. At least the Hardy's closest friends still have their backs, though chet needs to chill out. I mean after all, iola dumped joe first and there were issues both iola and joe has. So they were both to blame. Though not the hardy's closest friends but the ones who have shunned them ought to be ashamed of themselves. I do wonder how many of them are black rose allies. Anyway, karma does come back on people. That's why you should treat people they was you'd want to be treated. Update when able.
9/23/2022 c4 Guest
Callie should just ignore lectures about being pregnant. I mean she is married and lots of women get pregnant when least expecting to be.. Besides some of the woman callie has been staying with might realize she is, just not saying anything. If I am guessing right, then darcy was the woman killed. I wonder if she ever got a chance to mail that letter to joe. Biff can tell Joe still seems to have not faith in himself. Chet was not helping there, at least iola was more reasonable. But iola realizes she was just as much to blame for their breakup as joe was. After seeing what Maria and Katherine showed in joe's hand, he will be happy to get a ride home from chet and biff. hopefully, there is not poison around that object with the black rose. Isn't it ironic that joe is one of the first ones to find out about these objects and messages. The one who has no faith in himself to be a detective. It seems the pritos still have faith in the Hardy's. The pritos were the ones who lost tony. So, if they pritos aren't showing the Hardy's any hatred, shouldn't the rest of the community follow their examples and stop giving the Hardy's grief. It might come back on the ones in the community showing the hatred, and they might not like the results. Update when you can.
9/22/2022 c3 20angelicalkiss
I totally agree with Joe on this. If Black Rose hadn't entered their lives, none of this would have happened. But then you wouldn't have a story. I am glad to see that the brothers are back together and actually speaking to each other. I also am happy that they don't want to turn into those who performed their actions in the name of revenger. Angelo needs to attest for his wrongdoings but he doesn't deserve to die in cold blood. Electric chair might be a good out for him. And I'm not surprised that Callie is pregnant but I'm surprised you added it to this storyline. Doesn't call for a good outcome there but I'm sure it will be in the end. Looking forward to more!
9/22/2022 c2 angelicalkiss
I never thought that the whole town would turn their backs on the Hardys. They were upstanding citizens and one time they falter, they are blamed for it. Technically they are at fault. But it happened and there was nothing any of them could do about it. Tony was a target for a reason...one that you have yet to reveal. Dang you! I get it though when it comes to the town. They don't know the whole story and nor should they know. It's none of their business. I hope that by the end of this story, that changes for the Hardys. I won't be able to forgive you if it doesn't! And Iola too. That needs to change. Joe is miserable and needs her. From the sound of it though, she wants to talk to him which might actually bring back the old Joe in the end.
9/22/2022 c1 angelicalkiss
Okay, who is this chick? I have no idea but it's obvious that it's not Evangeline. She's blind and she only just got out of prison. Speaking of which, I'm a little perturbed about her being released. Is she being truthful is saying that she's been rehabilitated? Or is it a ploy to get out of jail to wreak havoc again? Is she going to go back to Black Rose or will she be targeted by them? I do feel bad for her just as I feel bad for Lisa but is it wise to let her go? As for Lisa, it sounds like she is going to be a target. Was Tony a target too in order to get to her (and not the Hardys)? So many questions!
9/21/2022 c3 Candylou
I do wonder what do the pritos and the hardy's closest friends think about all the ridicule and the hatred the Hardy's are receiving. It is just so sad after all the good the Hardy's have done, that all that is coming their way is bad and negative energy. Hopefully things will turn around for the Hardy's soon.
9/21/2022 c3 max2013
Hardy's don't drown in what ifs-it is akways darkest before the dawn.
9/21/2022 c3 Candylou
Fenton is definitely haunted by his decision to go to florida. I can understand what frank meant by most people not knowing the whole story, but it is sad that most people hating them. And you know lots of those people they probably helped at one time or another. That is when they hardys need their closest friends standing with them. I guess I was always taught, when you point your finger at someone, look at the three fingers pointing back at yourself. I just think it said, how people have turned against the Hardy's. Do the others know callie is pregnant. But anyway, with most everyone hating them, why don't frank and joe go ahead and join their father's agency, so frank and joe can learn to work as a team again. I know joe is dreading how everything will end, but I hope they hardys and radley stop black rose and Evangeline if she comes after them, so everyone who has turned on the Hardy's can eat crow. Update as soon as you can.
9/21/2022 c3 MargaretA66
I hate that the Hardys ae ostracized in their home town. But hey a baby Hardy is exciting.
9/20/2022 c2 caseykam
Hmmm. Not sure about this. I know Joe and Iola are canon. (And frankly I find Vanessa rather annoying). Still, I'm not sure Joe or Iola can handle it again. Poor Frank, I guess there has to be some reason for him to quit the force and rejoin the agency. Let's see where you take this one. :)
9/20/2022 c2 Candylou
I can understand why callie, frank, and joe blame themselves because they could not save tony. But I don't understand why others blame tony when they pritos do not blame them. Shouldn't the community and everyone else blame angelo and black rose? Sounds like the community has become shallow, and they need to be told that. I am surprise the pritos haven't told everybody that. I hope they hardys are the ones to stop black rose and I hope they also catch angelo, so the community can eat crow. I just don't see how people can start treating the Hardy's that why, when they hardys have done so much good. At least their closest friends are standing with the Hardy's family.
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