for Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory5/9 c1 Natalie4q6
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5/5 c107 scrappy8
great chapter Bill is always well liked
great chapter Bill is always well liked
5/4 c107 
4GinnyPotter6891
So glad to see Harry's friends there for him even though I expected it to be that way. Still, you've thrown a wrench in the goings-on before, so... :) I'm also glad to see that Owen's adding to the leadership of the Defense Club even before they're meeting. A little bit of fresh air can make a big difference.
That Slughorn was even-handed with Harry's Potions class is almost a surprise-I'd rather thought he was going to award Harry a bit more in the hope he could snag Harry as a follower. At least he's making sure that all his students are up to snuff with their potions before continuing. I know Snape didn't explain the whys and wherefores of doing things a certain way and hope Slughorn will do that, even behind the scenes.
Great chapter without much angst-what a relief! :) You've got me on pins and needles regarding those tears! I had a great weekend-out of town w/o wifi so I couldn't read/review any earlier. Hope your weekend has been lovely. With Spring break behind you, can summer break be far behind? Of course not! Take care and happy, prolific writing! Though I'm happy that the ending is coming up so we know 'everything,' I'm also sad. I hope you have something, however short, in mind for your next tale!
4GinnyPotter6891So glad to see Harry's friends there for him even though I expected it to be that way. Still, you've thrown a wrench in the goings-on before, so... :) I'm also glad to see that Owen's adding to the leadership of the Defense Club even before they're meeting. A little bit of fresh air can make a big difference.
That Slughorn was even-handed with Harry's Potions class is almost a surprise-I'd rather thought he was going to award Harry a bit more in the hope he could snag Harry as a follower. At least he's making sure that all his students are up to snuff with their potions before continuing. I know Snape didn't explain the whys and wherefores of doing things a certain way and hope Slughorn will do that, even behind the scenes.
Great chapter without much angst-what a relief! :) You've got me on pins and needles regarding those tears! I had a great weekend-out of town w/o wifi so I couldn't read/review any earlier. Hope your weekend has been lovely. With Spring break behind you, can summer break be far behind? Of course not! Take care and happy, prolific writing! Though I'm happy that the ending is coming up so we know 'everything,' I'm also sad. I hope you have something, however short, in mind for your next tale!
4/17 c106 scrappy8
great chapter congrats to Remus and Tonks
poor Ginny learning the diary was a horcrux
great chapter congrats to Remus and Tonks
poor Ginny learning the diary was a horcrux
4/16 c106 4GinnyPotter6891
The first paragraphs detailing Christmas activities were a great start to the chapter, but the news Remus and Tonks imparted was the best! Sudden engagement and quick wedding! Does that give anyone else (besides Bill & Fleur, of course) ideas? It does sound chaotic, but at least it from something good, not war injuries. And what a prank played by the Marauders on Harry-not quite fair as Harry didn't know to expect it, but I'm sure he'll find a way to get back at RemaDora! I do like Dora's suggestion to Harry regarding trying to remember everything he could about the rogue memory. Hopefully there will be progress on that front soon.
Loved Bill taking over as Head of House from Minerva-how does Ron react to that?
Good ole' Xenophilius. Hope we get to see what he wrote!
Trust Ron to break a seemingly uneasy silence with a pithy comment. Really looking forward to Chapter 107 to hear all the reactions from Harry's three friends (particularly Ginny's) and how the adults will help everyone deal with the revelations. Great, great chapter, a welcome pace from the gloom surrounding Dumbledore's death.
Thanks for the early update-was shocked when I saw it in my inbox. You did well moving us along. Take care and Happy Easter.
4GinnyPotter6891The first paragraphs detailing Christmas activities were a great start to the chapter, but the news Remus and Tonks imparted was the best! Sudden engagement and quick wedding! Does that give anyone else (besides Bill & Fleur, of course) ideas? It does sound chaotic, but at least it from something good, not war injuries. And what a prank played by the Marauders on Harry-not quite fair as Harry didn't know to expect it, but I'm sure he'll find a way to get back at RemaDora! I do like Dora's suggestion to Harry regarding trying to remember everything he could about the rogue memory. Hopefully there will be progress on that front soon.
Loved Bill taking over as Head of House from Minerva-how does Ron react to that?
Good ole' Xenophilius. Hope we get to see what he wrote!
Trust Ron to break a seemingly uneasy silence with a pithy comment. Really looking forward to Chapter 107 to hear all the reactions from Harry's three friends (particularly Ginny's) and how the adults will help everyone deal with the revelations. Great, great chapter, a welcome pace from the gloom surrounding Dumbledore's death.
Thanks for the early update-was shocked when I saw it in my inbox. You did well moving us along. Take care and Happy Easter.
4/16 c106 Misaamane10
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I greatly admire your exceptional storytelling, which left a strong impression on me. I truly believe your work has the potential to shine as a comic. As a commission-based digital artist with experience in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to discuss the possibility of bringing your story to life. If you’re interested, feel free to connect with me on Discord (ervin_mg0679) or Twitter ( kelley_lee22629).
4/7 c105 scrappy8
great chapter
great chapter
4/9 c105 7SwordOfTheGods
Harry is slowly getting into a level of politicking that I fear he is unaware of. Hopefully someone can point out that these skills will be necessary for him for gaining and appeasing allies as well as for after the Dark Lord has fallen. Excellent chapter!
7SwordOfTheGodsHarry is slowly getting into a level of politicking that I fear he is unaware of. Hopefully someone can point out that these skills will be necessary for him for gaining and appeasing allies as well as for after the Dark Lord has fallen. Excellent chapter!
4/4 c105 James Birdsong
Good in my humble opinion.
Good in my humble opinion.
4/5 c105 duvakim
Thank you for this chapter. As allways quality story lines and cool ways to develop canon events! Thank you!
Thank you for this chapter. As allways quality story lines and cool ways to develop canon events! Thank you!
4/4 c105 4GinnyPotter6891
Oh, goodness! What a chapter rife with stress! For a while, I was wondering why Harry didn't shut Daphne down when she revealed her identity to Slughorn and her concerns for Theo. I remember that Slughorn was afraid of Voldemort and therefore trying to hide from him as well as Dumbledore. I don't know why, but my hackles are up at him knowing so much about Harry's presence at Hogwarts over the break and the details about Harry's activities in the last year and a half, even with Sirius there with him. Still... I trust that even if Minerva manages to tie Slughorn into the Potions professor position, should he have loose lips you have a great plot mechanism to save Harry and his godfather. Great chapter!
I'm doing well, thanks! Spring break is ending here and we've had glorious weather this week. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us in the next chapter. Take care!
4GinnyPotter6891Oh, goodness! What a chapter rife with stress! For a while, I was wondering why Harry didn't shut Daphne down when she revealed her identity to Slughorn and her concerns for Theo. I remember that Slughorn was afraid of Voldemort and therefore trying to hide from him as well as Dumbledore. I don't know why, but my hackles are up at him knowing so much about Harry's presence at Hogwarts over the break and the details about Harry's activities in the last year and a half, even with Sirius there with him. Still... I trust that even if Minerva manages to tie Slughorn into the Potions professor position, should he have loose lips you have a great plot mechanism to save Harry and his godfather. Great chapter!
I'm doing well, thanks! Spring break is ending here and we've had glorious weather this week. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us in the next chapter. Take care!
3/22 c104 duvakim
Well written and well paced as always. It's clear you put a lot of efort in this fic. Thank you!
Well written and well paced as always. It's clear you put a lot of efort in this fic. Thank you!