12/7 c9 cobin.michael
I really enjoyed this. Plus, this is the first time I've seen Vizer get more than one scene, so that's nice.
I really enjoyed this. Plus, this is the first time I've seen Vizer get more than one scene, so that's nice.
11/24 c9 3Simon D. Uzumaki
lol
tease me with a rewritten story that is massively different but still i would say even better then the original you had.
i do so hope there is more coming brodda mon
lol
tease me with a rewritten story that is massively different but still i would say even better then the original you had.
i do so hope there is more coming brodda mon
11/5 c1 Yomugan
Ignore the morons clambering for more chapters, they’re just degenerate fucking morons with less IQ than a dirty diaper, who have no Idea how stressful and Time consuming writing is. Take care of yourself big man!
Ignore the morons clambering for more chapters, they’re just degenerate fucking morons with less IQ than a dirty diaper, who have no Idea how stressful and Time consuming writing is. Take care of yourself big man!
9/3 c9 Sphygmus
Is Kuro going to be getting squads of Guardian Fallen Angel and Devils from small time Houses?
And considering his tastes, all of the bodyguards female?!
Is Kuro going to be getting squads of Guardian Fallen Angel and Devils from small time Houses?
And considering his tastes, all of the bodyguards female?!
8/13 c2 Guest
To paraphrase a quote from another fanfic where hyenas played a prevalent role, "Those guys who wrote the Lion King should be shot for how they portrayed hyenas in that movie. The hyena is not some bumbling idiot. Those guys are smart. Smarter than lions. Even smarter than chimpanzees. This was a predator that faced its main competitor and other predators that saw it as prey and, more often than not, won. They weren't scavengers, either. Sure, striped hyenas may prefer that, but the spotted hyena, preferred to, and most often did, hunt food for itself." If you want deadly, you can't get much better than hyena, that's for sure.
To paraphrase a quote from another fanfic where hyenas played a prevalent role, "Those guys who wrote the Lion King should be shot for how they portrayed hyenas in that movie. The hyena is not some bumbling idiot. Those guys are smart. Smarter than lions. Even smarter than chimpanzees. This was a predator that faced its main competitor and other predators that saw it as prey and, more often than not, won. They weren't scavengers, either. Sure, striped hyenas may prefer that, but the spotted hyena, preferred to, and most often did, hunt food for itself." If you want deadly, you can't get much better than hyena, that's for sure.
8/9 c9 Shadow4479
Great as always. Looking forward to seeing more chapters for this story
Great as always. Looking forward to seeing more chapters for this story
8/7 c9 1Lycanzaru
Dang... to think it was four years ago... when I read though the originals...!
And honestly—yeah, there are lemons a plenty, but I most definitely appreciate this newer blend of more narrative and wit focus!
I definitely felt the refreshed freedom behind the words this time since there was no need to focus on very specific game stats and percentages. I understand that feeling to a solid degree; like, a simplified game system is so much easier to write a story from, isn't it!
Anyway, I'm enjoying this remastered edition. It is partly nostalgia (oddly enough), partly excited at this more streamline process, and partly refreshed at seeing unabashedly natural A/N's. Or maybe I'm just weird, pft.
Anyway, you do you, Dark Wolf! I'm enjoying this story. Sure, my opinion doesn't really matter here, but still—keep updating this as you have been, por favor!
Dang... to think it was four years ago... when I read though the originals...!
And honestly—yeah, there are lemons a plenty, but I most definitely appreciate this newer blend of more narrative and wit focus!
I definitely felt the refreshed freedom behind the words this time since there was no need to focus on very specific game stats and percentages. I understand that feeling to a solid degree; like, a simplified game system is so much easier to write a story from, isn't it!
Anyway, I'm enjoying this remastered edition. It is partly nostalgia (oddly enough), partly excited at this more streamline process, and partly refreshed at seeing unabashedly natural A/N's. Or maybe I'm just weird, pft.
Anyway, you do you, Dark Wolf! I'm enjoying this story. Sure, my opinion doesn't really matter here, but still—keep updating this as you have been, por favor!