
5/28 c11 the raging chicken
I'd love to see something take place in overlord, maybe have the Mc start off in yggdrisil to allow for power building rather than being instantly op, although it would require a lot of world and story creation on your part.
It could be interesting to have the npc's be alive in the background to allow for some known characters and dungeon building while guild members are offline or what not
I'd love to see something take place in overlord, maybe have the Mc start off in yggdrisil to allow for power building rather than being instantly op, although it would require a lot of world and story creation on your part.
It could be interesting to have the npc's be alive in the background to allow for some known characters and dungeon building while guild members are offline or what not
5/28 c11
1MasterDarkElf
It is oddly amusing and satisfying seeing others constantly fall to Kuro's little tricks, haha. Especially since, in most cases, he's being forced to get involved, in a way. Looking forward to more.

It is oddly amusing and satisfying seeing others constantly fall to Kuro's little tricks, haha. Especially since, in most cases, he's being forced to get involved, in a way. Looking forward to more.
5/28 c11
6helpusobi1kenobi
I have read this entire rewrite till this chapter. I usually like your stories. But this one in my opinion is just terrible. I tried to keep an open mind about it but now i just cant keep reading. Good luck with the test of the story.

I have read this entire rewrite till this chapter. I usually like your stories. But this one in my opinion is just terrible. I tried to keep an open mind about it but now i just cant keep reading. Good luck with the test of the story.
5/27 c11 Guest
love it
love it
5/27 c11 Guest
I love how he played everyone to get his way and crush riser. Can’t wait to see how the situation unfolds when he picks ravel
I love how he played everyone to get his way and crush riser. Can’t wait to see how the situation unfolds when he picks ravel
5/27 c11 Flixie
Kuro scheming and bargaining like a fae was hilarious. This is good stuff
Kuro scheming and bargaining like a fae was hilarious. This is good stuff