for I Might Die At The End12/7/2022 c1 
1MrSir17
Ah man as an intro I’m hooked! I’ve read all of your other fic and was desperate for more written from you. I know it’s prob unrealistic to split your attention to two fics but this definitely has potential. Thanks for writing it!
1MrSir17Ah man as an intro I’m hooked! I’ve read all of your other fic and was desperate for more written from you. I know it’s prob unrealistic to split your attention to two fics but this definitely has potential. Thanks for writing it!
10/3/2022 c1 Xenon VII
Congratulations on the new story! i like the new perspective on the original story, and the fact that this sint just a cheap knockoff of your other story. I admire the fact that you are trying to do something largely new, and am impressed that you managed to pull it off so well!
The forced awkwardness in the conversation was pulled off really well, and kinda dragged me into the story - the realism and the way i could relate to it was pretty damn good, and the relationship dynamics made the story interesting.
I hope the next chapter is similar!
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Congratulations on the new story! i like the new perspective on the original story, and the fact that this sint just a cheap knockoff of your other story. I admire the fact that you are trying to do something largely new, and am impressed that you managed to pull it off so well!
The forced awkwardness in the conversation was pulled off really well, and kinda dragged me into the story - the realism and the way i could relate to it was pretty damn good, and the relationship dynamics made the story interesting.
I hope the next chapter is similar!
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee