for Written in the Stars1/17 c58 kiwihipp
That was an absolutely magnificent story! I loved the way you involved Cassiopeia Black, Gellert Grindelwald and all the others we only hear about in the real HP universe.
That was an absolutely magnificent story! I loved the way you involved Cassiopeia Black, Gellert Grindelwald and all the others we only hear about in the real HP universe.
1/15 c58 kolgrim88
It was an engaging and original experience. But it has repeated continuity mistakes, spelling, pacing. Etc. Not the usual quality of his other works.
Still, I liked it very much, thanks.
It was an engaging and original experience. But it has repeated continuity mistakes, spelling, pacing. Etc. Not the usual quality of his other works.
Still, I liked it very much, thanks.
1/13 c6 MinisterBlack
When Dumbledore was having a thinku about Harry brokering a peace with Drako i couldnt help but to think what an interesting Story it would be for Harry to be raised by an old reclusive last lord but still alive Charlus Potter and Draco raised by an old reclusive last but still alive Arcturus Black on behest of Narcissa to keep him away from Lucius brand of stupid. Also only way to make Draco cool and give some credence to the Dramione ship some weirdos seem to like.
I can imagine the truce falling like troy during one year because they both get the obsessive need to muddy up with Hermione ;p
When Dumbledore was having a thinku about Harry brokering a peace with Drako i couldnt help but to think what an interesting Story it would be for Harry to be raised by an old reclusive last lord but still alive Charlus Potter and Draco raised by an old reclusive last but still alive Arcturus Black on behest of Narcissa to keep him away from Lucius brand of stupid. Also only way to make Draco cool and give some credence to the Dramione ship some weirdos seem to like.
I can imagine the truce falling like troy during one year because they both get the obsessive need to muddy up with Hermione ;p
1/13 c28 unJoy
Harem flick withiut a harem. Harry both gulible and doesnt get "icky weird gurls" while also paradoxically hitting on every single female in the story... so obnoxious and offputting.
Also the "All women are good but might be forced by men to do evil, all men are evil" dychtomy has grown stale and boring due to feminazi fanboys shoving it everywhere, i dont mind fantasy, we all know its thr exact opposite but its fiction so its fine but... boring, too much, change your opinion for pretends at least to be able to write well.
The absolute worst story from this author, seems to have had a stroke.
Harem flick withiut a harem. Harry both gulible and doesnt get "icky weird gurls" while also paradoxically hitting on every single female in the story... so obnoxious and offputting.
Also the "All women are good but might be forced by men to do evil, all men are evil" dychtomy has grown stale and boring due to feminazi fanboys shoving it everywhere, i dont mind fantasy, we all know its thr exact opposite but its fiction so its fine but... boring, too much, change your opinion for pretends at least to be able to write well.
The absolute worst story from this author, seems to have had a stroke.
1/11 c3 kiwihipp
Harry certainly does not take the easy way out, when it comes to choosing which school to attend. Good that he did not choose Hogwarts, Dumbledore would not have given him the right education, for what he has to do when he is old enough.
Harry certainly does not take the easy way out, when it comes to choosing which school to attend. Good that he did not choose Hogwarts, Dumbledore would not have given him the right education, for what he has to do when he is old enough.
1/11 c2 kiwihipp
Good progression of the story, allowing the reader to learn more about Harry and Cassiopeia.
Harry must be quite the wizard to manage to make a wooden toy able to fly around!
Good progression of the story, allowing the reader to learn more about Harry and Cassiopeia.
Harry must be quite the wizard to manage to make a wooden toy able to fly around!
1/9 c25 Raziel88
i have read all of your works and this story while interested with this chapter and the ending... this isn't your usual quality.
i have read all of your works and this story while interested with this chapter and the ending... this isn't your usual quality.
1/6 c58 Lucifer-Satani
Ok, I need a sequel detailing all the shenanigans Harry would get up to with eternal life. That sounds hilarious and I need it.
I loved this story, so, so much. This has quickly become one of my favourite Harry Potter fics I've ever read, and that's a high bar. Everything about it was new, there was no copying of any other fic I've read, even tropes that have been in other stories (Harry's Deathly Hallows and Immortality) was done in a completely different way. I'll be heading on to your profile to read yet more fics like this. I can't wait
Ok, I need a sequel detailing all the shenanigans Harry would get up to with eternal life. That sounds hilarious and I need it.
I loved this story, so, so much. This has quickly become one of my favourite Harry Potter fics I've ever read, and that's a high bar. Everything about it was new, there was no copying of any other fic I've read, even tropes that have been in other stories (Harry's Deathly Hallows and Immortality) was done in a completely different way. I'll be heading on to your profile to read yet more fics like this. I can't wait
412/26/2024 c2 Darren Jaguar
Grindelwald saying "I feel like I should know that name", bwahahaha love it.
Grindelwald saying "I feel like I should know that name", bwahahaha love it.