
6/19 c1 caroljon33
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, this work masterfully weaves heartache triumph, and self-discovery into a rich tapestry of human emotion. Each character breathes with a vitality that is both flawed and deeply authentic, inviting readers to find fragments of their own joys, sorrows, and hopes mirrored within their arcs. With every twist and revelation, the narrative doesn’t just unfold it envelops, immersing the reader in a world that feels at once timeless and intimately familiar. This is not merely a story to be read but a profound emotional experience to be felt, savored, and revisited. It leaves an indelible imprint, echoing long after the final page has been turned.
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, this work masterfully weaves heartache triumph, and self-discovery into a rich tapestry of human emotion. Each character breathes with a vitality that is both flawed and deeply authentic, inviting readers to find fragments of their own joys, sorrows, and hopes mirrored within their arcs. With every twist and revelation, the narrative doesn’t just unfold it envelops, immersing the reader in a world that feels at once timeless and intimately familiar. This is not merely a story to be read but a profound emotional experience to be felt, savored, and revisited. It leaves an indelible imprint, echoing long after the final page has been turned.
6/18 c1 hilgahilmaus
Scenes unfold with cinematic grace—moments of quiet vulnerability giving way to surges of raw emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final page. Unconfined by genre and unbound by convention, this is more than a story—it’s a journey that doesn’t just unfold, but unravels, drawing the reader into a world both distant and achingly intimate. It isn’t merely read it’s felt—an experience to be carried, pondered, and returned to like a cherished relic of time.
Scenes unfold with cinematic grace—moments of quiet vulnerability giving way to surges of raw emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final page. Unconfined by genre and unbound by convention, this is more than a story—it’s a journey that doesn’t just unfold, but unravels, drawing the reader into a world both distant and achingly intimate. It isn’t merely read it’s felt—an experience to be carried, pondered, and returned to like a cherished relic of time.
6/12 c26 JensenDaniels32
Tell me that King and Elizabeth get together as a couple. I think they'd make an adorable couple.
Tell me that King and Elizabeth get together as a couple. I think they'd make an adorable couple.
6/12 c23 JensenDaniels32
Actually, I rather liked this chapter. You don't give yourself enough credit, author. A nice cooldown chapter is excellent here, or at least it is to me, anyway.
Actually, I rather liked this chapter. You don't give yourself enough credit, author. A nice cooldown chapter is excellent here, or at least it is to me, anyway.
5/30 c28
17Ignisha
Damn, feelz bad for King. The man only wants to be left alone and play games all day every day, yet Monsters, Heroes, Aliens, Villains, and now Ghosts, Demons, and Time Travel have added to his everyday anxiety.
Rip if I ever seen one.
Now they're heading to Ancient Rome.
Oof, I can only imagine about how Nero would react around King.

Damn, feelz bad for King. The man only wants to be left alone and play games all day every day, yet Monsters, Heroes, Aliens, Villains, and now Ghosts, Demons, and Time Travel have added to his everyday anxiety.
Rip if I ever seen one.
Now they're heading to Ancient Rome.
Oof, I can only imagine about how Nero would react around King.
5/28 c28 Elga
About your worry regarding how serious you write King, I think you've been doing fine. His thoughts and motivations are in the right place, and his dialogue has never felt off. I was afraid for a while that'd you'd keep him in denial about his reason for staying, but I'm glad to see it being laid out for what it is: King being too scared and ashamed of disappointing everyone around him, which is in line with his character in OPM.
If I were to find a flaw in the character's writing though, is that you've made him a tad too dense at times, too prone to making wild leaps of logic in order to come up with funny conclusions. It was still very enjoyable, but it was beginning to run thin near the end, and I don't think I'd enjoy it as much if it continues going forward.
Now, I understand that denseness can be an extremely useful trait to establish a comedy based on misunderstandings, but it's also kind of a low hanging fruit, and in King's case, I don't think it fits him very well. Was fun the one time, but I'd find it more interesting to see how you handle King in what I see as his real self: completely lucid and aware of what he's dealing with, yet incapable of escaping the image everyone else has of him, only armed with a poker face and his own hype.
I'd also tone down the insane luck a bit, personally, but that's probably impossible given the context. Even the manga went all in on that one anyway.
About your worry regarding how serious you write King, I think you've been doing fine. His thoughts and motivations are in the right place, and his dialogue has never felt off. I was afraid for a while that'd you'd keep him in denial about his reason for staying, but I'm glad to see it being laid out for what it is: King being too scared and ashamed of disappointing everyone around him, which is in line with his character in OPM.
If I were to find a flaw in the character's writing though, is that you've made him a tad too dense at times, too prone to making wild leaps of logic in order to come up with funny conclusions. It was still very enjoyable, but it was beginning to run thin near the end, and I don't think I'd enjoy it as much if it continues going forward.
Now, I understand that denseness can be an extremely useful trait to establish a comedy based on misunderstandings, but it's also kind of a low hanging fruit, and in King's case, I don't think it fits him very well. Was fun the one time, but I'd find it more interesting to see how you handle King in what I see as his real self: completely lucid and aware of what he's dealing with, yet incapable of escaping the image everyone else has of him, only armed with a poker face and his own hype.
I'd also tone down the insane luck a bit, personally, but that's probably impossible given the context. Even the manga went all in on that one anyway.
5/28 c28 Evasiveshoeglue
I only have one word.
"F*C*ING AWESOME!"
Though it is two, but I consider it one. (Non3sense it's two).
Anyhow, Your writing and pacing is godlike! I've read tons of novels and books, (no kidding), youre's 9/10 author. How in the world you're here? So lowkey writing fanfiction my ghad.
Forget my gibberish, you're awesome dude.
I only have one word.
"F*C*ING AWESOME!"
Though it is two, but I consider it one. (Non3sense it's two).
Anyhow, Your writing and pacing is godlike! I've read tons of novels and books, (no kidding), youre's 9/10 author. How in the world you're here? So lowkey writing fanfiction my ghad.
Forget my gibberish, you're awesome dude.
5/25 c28 Guest
Thank you for the update
Thank you for the update
5/25 c28
1Echonic
Bro, I still don't understand how you made King into such an unbelievably likable character, I mean he was likable before, but this is actually insane, you are a writing god.

Bro, I still don't understand how you made King into such an unbelievably likable character, I mean he was likable before, but this is actually insane, you are a writing god.
5/24 c28
1MasterDarkElf
Nice, King. You may be cowardly, in a way, but you step up when it matters, even if you're terrified the entire time! Also, loved the Medea and King moments. Hoping for more. Yes, I am also hoping for potential romance between them, and potentially more being into King, haha. Looking forward to more.

Nice, King. You may be cowardly, in a way, but you step up when it matters, even if you're terrified the entire time! Also, loved the Medea and King moments. Hoping for more. Yes, I am also hoping for potential romance between them, and potentially more being into King, haha. Looking forward to more.
5/24 c28 Wolfe Avenrios
I’ll admit I expected him to use it, only for it to mishear him or something and send him to a different singularity. Then everyone is thinking that something major had to be going on due to King of all people going there alone and not telling anyone, furthering their awe in him xD.
I’ll admit I expected him to use it, only for it to mishear him or something and send him to a different singularity. Then everyone is thinking that something major had to be going on due to King of all people going there alone and not telling anyone, furthering their awe in him xD.
5/24 c28 Deadied
King seems to be a bit OC this chapter. Especially on the part he wanted to join those 2 OCs play SF
King seems to be a bit OC this chapter. Especially on the part he wanted to join those 2 OCs play SF