for LUCK:EX11/14 c22 Dan
Goated ending. Don’t like the pre-idol arc, too jarring. Like the beginning of singularity. Love the idol and post idol arc. This chapter feels so good, great ending, it felt more real. More substance behind the text, the emotion, the motive, the characters. Reminds me of a lighter version of Overlord
Goated ending. Don’t like the pre-idol arc, too jarring. Like the beginning of singularity. Love the idol and post idol arc. This chapter feels so good, great ending, it felt more real. More substance behind the text, the emotion, the motive, the characters. Reminds me of a lighter version of Overlord
11/6 c7 
9Uraharaisgod
So...is King actually a Master, or are they just assuming he must be and not realising Ritsuka is pulling double duty in supplying so many Servants at once? If he is a Master, is King responsible for all of the 5* summons due to his Luck EX? Can the Servants actually tell which Master summoned them? Is he capable of being a Magus, just doesn't realise it?
9UraharaisgodSo...is King actually a Master, or are they just assuming he must be and not realising Ritsuka is pulling double duty in supplying so many Servants at once? If he is a Master, is King responsible for all of the 5* summons due to his Luck EX? Can the Servants actually tell which Master summoned them? Is he capable of being a Magus, just doesn't realise it?
10/30 c22 R3KT0R
Imagine if saitama actually comes over to help save the world here…but then again it’s King’s fic
Imagine if saitama actually comes over to help save the world here…but then again it’s King’s fic
10/25 c22 Saif Omar
An excellent chapter and finish to the arc. I had one question though. How did King survive when Fafnir threw him in the air and was going to roast him alive? King closed his eyes and extended his arm and then he was fine. We didn't see how he survived that situation though.
An excellent chapter and finish to the arc. I had one question though. How did King survive when Fafnir threw him in the air and was going to roast him alive? King closed his eyes and extended his arm and then he was fine. We didn't see how he survived that situation though.
10/23 c22 1Owlocki
Woah. When was the last time ANYONE wrote a unique application of Emiya's UBW? I remembered complaining years ago about how it never truly reached its fullest potential as a Noble Phantasm, that it had some of the best play-offs when combined with another Servant, in theory.
And now somebody had actually done it. You did it. By making Cu Chulain ride a rain of Gae Bolgs like the freaking maniac he's supposed to be.
Absolute peak fiction. One of the best character-driven and shonen-level hype stories—not just as a crossover, but as a FATE fanfic—bar none.
Cherish yourself, sir. You've cooked.
1OwlockiWoah. When was the last time ANYONE wrote a unique application of Emiya's UBW? I remembered complaining years ago about how it never truly reached its fullest potential as a Noble Phantasm, that it had some of the best play-offs when combined with another Servant, in theory.
And now somebody had actually done it. You did it. By making Cu Chulain ride a rain of Gae Bolgs like the freaking maniac he's supposed to be.
Absolute peak fiction. One of the best character-driven and shonen-level hype stories—not just as a crossover, but as a FATE fanfic—bar none.
Cherish yourself, sir. You've cooked.
10/23 c22 vikinggold32
Sweet kiss... I imagined it would be a good ending to the signurality ending but this is already good.
Thank you.
And I really want to see kingxjean romance lol.
Sweet kiss... I imagined it would be a good ending to the signurality ending but this is already good.
Thank you.
And I really want to see kingxjean romance lol.
10/22 c22 Reader765
You've rewrite the entire orlean arcs to be engaging, exciting, and thrilling. Not only that, you've made the servant summoned to be relevant to the plot. And with this great ending...
Bravo good sir, Bravo.
You've rewrite the entire orlean arcs to be engaging, exciting, and thrilling. Not only that, you've made the servant summoned to be relevant to the plot. And with this great ending...
Bravo good sir, Bravo.
10/22 c22 20Forsoothandconquest
The only “complaint” I could think of was that I was lost at the beginning because I didn’t take the time to catch up on what happened last, but that’s a ME issue, you’re doing PERFECT!
20ForsoothandconquestThe only “complaint” I could think of was that I was lost at the beginning because I didn’t take the time to catch up on what happened last, but that’s a ME issue, you’re doing PERFECT!
10/22 c22 Forsoothandconquest
That.
Was.
AWESOME!
I loved it! The humor! The action!
KING’S REACTION TO FINALLY CONNECTING THE DOTS!
Hahahahahahahah
That was amazing!
That.
Was.
AWESOME!
I loved it! The humor! The action!
KING’S REACTION TO FINALLY CONNECTING THE DOTS!
Hahahahahahahah
That was amazing!
10/22 c22 Guest
Honestly, this ending was great.
The rest of the arc was here or there for me, but you really stuck the landing right at the end. It was a fun singularity!
Honestly, this ending was great.
The rest of the arc was here or there for me, but you really stuck the landing right at the end. It was a fun singularity!
10/22 c22 Deadied
Congrats with finishing the orleans arc and good luck with college.
I imagine the best King and Jalter interaction would be that summer event where they have a manga competition with king and jalter as partners.
King could probably suggest making a manga based on his world.
Congrats with finishing the orleans arc and good luck with college.
I imagine the best King and Jalter interaction would be that summer event where they have a manga competition with king and jalter as partners.
King could probably suggest making a manga based on his world.
10/22 c22 Zeikie
Congrats on making it pass your first major Arc! The plot is certainly entertaining and definitely original. Superb writing and use of servants as well. Monitor even had a part to play other than slaying Fafnir which is a for me!
Overall everyone had a part to play. And it honestly feels like an adventure of servants and their masters with character development to boot! Major win for the enemy cast too, I never could have foreseen the two bosses would be that NPC all along though to D&D fans they must’ve smelled it a mile away.
Overall, an exciting end to an excellent arc. No one was missed in this story and it even got more development for some of them. Can’t wait to see who they pull next for the Septem singularity!
Congrats on making it pass your first major Arc! The plot is certainly entertaining and definitely original. Superb writing and use of servants as well. Monitor even had a part to play other than slaying Fafnir which is a for me!
Overall everyone had a part to play. And it honestly feels like an adventure of servants and their masters with character development to boot! Major win for the enemy cast too, I never could have foreseen the two bosses would be that NPC all along though to D&D fans they must’ve smelled it a mile away.
Overall, an exciting end to an excellent arc. No one was missed in this story and it even got more development for some of them. Can’t wait to see who they pull next for the Septem singularity!