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1Usagi Uchiha Yuy
lol.XD Usagi's hilarious! can u plz tell wat happened to Usagi in da later chapters? I really want to no. are u doing a poll on voting or is Usagi gonna by like...liked by all of them? and like all fo them back. CAN U PLZ ADD MORE HEERO AND USAGI moments...plz plz! UPDATE sOON! I really wanna c da next chapter up!@!Keepwriting!1
Bibi
Usagi_Yuy
1Usagi Uchiha Yuylol.XD Usagi's hilarious! can u plz tell wat happened to Usagi in da later chapters? I really want to no. are u doing a poll on voting or is Usagi gonna by like...liked by all of them? and like all fo them back. CAN U PLZ ADD MORE HEERO AND USAGI moments...plz plz! UPDATE sOON! I really wanna c da next chapter up!@!Keepwriting!1
Bibi
Usagi_Yuy
6/29/2004 c5 Queen LuvBunny
Hey there just wanted to say that this is really good keep it up hope to see a new chapter out soon bye!
Hey there just wanted to say that this is really good keep it up hope to see a new chapter out soon bye!
5/15/2004 c5 Fire Dolphins
PLease continue i think that
this story is going some where great and
i hoope to read more of it soon. bye
PLease continue i think that
this story is going some where great and
i hoope to read more of it soon. bye
4/9/2004 c5 3muffers-person
Hm, BWUAHAHAHAH! Ah, good story *frosty*! Yay, fluffy romance! wooho! You'd better update or i'll come after you. Gr, i know where you live . . . maybe not, but UPDATE!
3muffers-personHm, BWUAHAHAHAH! Ah, good story *frosty*! Yay, fluffy romance! wooho! You'd better update or i'll come after you. Gr, i know where you live . . . maybe not, but UPDATE!
1/29/2004 c5 FireDevil-IceAngel
O.o I WANT MORE
O.o I WANT MORE
1/19/2004 c5 CosmicBunny18
Hey I love your story. I hope that you update is soon. And is there going to be specific couples? Well, hope to read mor soon. Ja Ne!
Bunny-Chan
Hey I love your story. I hope that you update is soon. And is there going to be specific couples? Well, hope to read mor soon. Ja Ne!
Bunny-Chan
1/18/2004 c5 26Bright Anarchy
Yes, I am that critical of all the stories I read ( I'm even worse with my own work), however, I don't usually review unless there is something I like about a story.
Depending on the apparent age and maturity of the author my reviews will be more or less picky. (I wouldn't pay to much attention to my favorites list though. I usually put stuff I just didn't get around to finishing reading in there.)
One thing I do like about your work is it is very well edited. So far it has had a fairly light humorous feel. The characters have stayed inside the models you created for them.
I have found Usagi to be rather unlikable and mean spirited as she is being portrayed but that doesn't really say anything about the quality of the writing. She certainly fits the image of a teen that thinks the world owes her something. That is a very specific role.
If you have ever read the Thomas Covenant series now there is an excellent set of books with a main character that it is easy to despise. (No, Usagi is not that bad.)
It is not necessary for me to like each of your characters in order for me to appreciate your story.
I think the bit about Usagi thinking Trowa is stalking her is hilarious.
26Bright AnarchyYes, I am that critical of all the stories I read ( I'm even worse with my own work), however, I don't usually review unless there is something I like about a story.
Depending on the apparent age and maturity of the author my reviews will be more or less picky. (I wouldn't pay to much attention to my favorites list though. I usually put stuff I just didn't get around to finishing reading in there.)
One thing I do like about your work is it is very well edited. So far it has had a fairly light humorous feel. The characters have stayed inside the models you created for them.
I have found Usagi to be rather unlikable and mean spirited as she is being portrayed but that doesn't really say anything about the quality of the writing. She certainly fits the image of a teen that thinks the world owes her something. That is a very specific role.
If you have ever read the Thomas Covenant series now there is an excellent set of books with a main character that it is easy to despise. (No, Usagi is not that bad.)
It is not necessary for me to like each of your characters in order for me to appreciate your story.
I think the bit about Usagi thinking Trowa is stalking her is hilarious.
1/17/2004 c4 loves like poison
COME ON how long do it take you to wirte a story gesh Im starting a story and got 7pages done in a week and thats with the little time I had. I've kept an eye out for this one and it doesn't seem to be speeding up. Wel I if theres anychance of you taking my opinon its that Q-man an bunny get toghter. I Know after telling you your slow and so on but just think about it. please! 'I think she ignoring me'
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COME ON how long do it take you to wirte a story gesh Im starting a story and got 7pages done in a week and thats with the little time I had. I've kept an eye out for this one and it doesn't seem to be speeding up. Wel I if theres anychance of you taking my opinon its that Q-man an bunny get toghter. I Know after telling you your slow and so on but just think about it. please! 'I think she ignoring me'
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1/13/2004 c4 1Lady-Slytherin-Snape
i loved this story and i hope to read next chappie soon well
Ja Ne
1Lady-Slytherin-Snapei loved this story and i hope to read next chappie soon well
Ja Ne
11/24/2003 c4 Himeno Midori
YAhh! a little comic relefe. about time. there all so serious now a days. pout. and i stink at comidy. and spelling. cough. oh well. no crying over misspelled silk. heheh. okay. well ill be looking forward to the next chapter. barrows heero's gun. omea wo korosu. well... maybe... not. you might prove to be an interesting specimen. ...
cough. oum... im done now.
Midi
YAhh! a little comic relefe. about time. there all so serious now a days. pout. and i stink at comidy. and spelling. cough. oh well. no crying over misspelled silk. heheh. okay. well ill be looking forward to the next chapter. barrows heero's gun. omea wo korosu. well... maybe... not. you might prove to be an interesting specimen. ...
cough. oum... im done now.
Midi