for The Princess and Her Archer2/22 c2 
1dreaddragonknight
Cool intro into the rest of the Familiar of Zero cast, hope you continue this and that life treats you well
1dreaddragonknightCool intro into the rest of the Familiar of Zero cast, hope you continue this and that life treats you well
2/22 c1 dreaddragonknight
Interesting choice of Shirou, has a different overall tone then Hill of Swords
Interesting choice of Shirou, has a different overall tone then Hill of Swords
12/5/2023 c1 Shlags
Why every Miyuverse fic feels the need to start by regurgitating the last battle, I will never understand. You can just skip straight to the actual change, you know?
Why every Miyuverse fic feels the need to start by regurgitating the last battle, I will never understand. You can just skip straight to the actual change, you know?
5/30/2023 c2 Ariadne Venegas
But he is not a commoner but that world standars! He would be a Squire without means. Because he have magic, so noble.
But he is not a commoner but that world standars! He would be a Squire without means. Because he have magic, so noble.
3/24/2023 c2 Guest
I loved this store thanks for your work
I loved this store thanks for your work
3/25/2023 c2 faturandi37
Is the couple a Harem? Because I personally want to be a harem, and since this is Shirou we're talking about, he probably has his Harem EX skill.
for the Saito couple, of course with Louis and for shiro's harem, my suggestions would be Henrietta, Tiffania, Siesta, Cattleya de La Fontaine, Jessica,
Is the couple a Harem? Because I personally want to be a harem, and since this is Shirou we're talking about, he probably has his Harem EX skill.
for the Saito couple, of course with Louis and for shiro's harem, my suggestions would be Henrietta, Tiffania, Siesta, Cattleya de La Fontaine, Jessica,
3/22/2023 c2 22Vimesenthusiast
Hmm... I am not very well-read when it comes to Fate stuff, never having seen the original. I did however, read the light novels and watch FoZ. I quite enjoy that you are taking things from this angle rather than the usual Louise-centric route. I have to wonder why Henrietta isn't one of the chosen characters in your preview, and hope that is not a sign of things to come.
Good luck with this going forward!
22VimesenthusiastHmm... I am not very well-read when it comes to Fate stuff, never having seen the original. I did however, read the light novels and watch FoZ. I quite enjoy that you are taking things from this angle rather than the usual Louise-centric route. I have to wonder why Henrietta isn't one of the chosen characters in your preview, and hope that is not a sign of things to come.
Good luck with this going forward!
2/27/2023 c2 FabledLife
Gotta somewhat agree with Masterx01 there, the Mana density of the environment does absolutely nothing to Reinforcement and Noble Phantasms. Reinforcement and most Noble Phantasms ONLY use Magical Energy, aka Mana that was converted by the Magic Circuits. Reinforcement is all about applying Magical Energy, NOT Mana, into things to enhance their existnce. And all of Emiya's projections are formed from Magical Energy and activated by the same energy. Noble Phantasms aren't made out of Mana or whatever. The only thing the Mana-dense environment would do for Shirou would be giving his Circuits more Mana to convert so he can recover his Magical Energy reserves a bit faster.
Also, since the Human Order doesn't exist there, maintaning and bringing out Shirou's projected Reality Marble would be much easier, less costly, and would last far longer. The Human Order is what actually tries to crush projected Reality Marbles and makes normal Projections not last long (Emiya's Tracing is unaffected by this), NOT Gaia nor the Planet itself. Why would Gaia put pressure on Mystery and Magecraft when it uses mystical beings as its defense mechanism; aka True Ancestors, Nature Spirits, Elementals, Fae, etc.
Gotta somewhat agree with Masterx01 there, the Mana density of the environment does absolutely nothing to Reinforcement and Noble Phantasms. Reinforcement and most Noble Phantasms ONLY use Magical Energy, aka Mana that was converted by the Magic Circuits. Reinforcement is all about applying Magical Energy, NOT Mana, into things to enhance their existnce. And all of Emiya's projections are formed from Magical Energy and activated by the same energy. Noble Phantasms aren't made out of Mana or whatever. The only thing the Mana-dense environment would do for Shirou would be giving his Circuits more Mana to convert so he can recover his Magical Energy reserves a bit faster.
Also, since the Human Order doesn't exist there, maintaning and bringing out Shirou's projected Reality Marble would be much easier, less costly, and would last far longer. The Human Order is what actually tries to crush projected Reality Marbles and makes normal Projections not last long (Emiya's Tracing is unaffected by this), NOT Gaia nor the Planet itself. Why would Gaia put pressure on Mystery and Magecraft when it uses mystical beings as its defense mechanism; aka True Ancestors, Nature Spirits, Elementals, Fae, etc.
2/23/2023 c2 Mugen-Blade
"When he heard of magic, Shirou decided to try how his magecraft would behave. The redhead noticed how dense this world's energy was when he tried to apply Reinforcement on a knife he used to chop vegetables. The result was a very sharp knife that could easily cut through the vegetables… the cutting board… and left a noticeable divot in the countertop. Shirou could only apologize to a very confused, surprised, and angry Jessica for "not paying attention to his strength" as he continued the prep work that night. This led to the redhead's current predicament, him taking stock and replenishing low supplies today while Jessica was out to buy a replacement countertop."
That isnt how it work.
A high mana density environment would do shit to improve any of Shirou's magic because all of it is either self contained or has hard limits.
In Reinforcement's case the object would only improve based in the amount of mana you can inject in it (and how skillfuly you can do it) and any given object can only hold so much mana before it breaks so having more mana around to work with wouldnt suddenly turn it into Medea's Super Reinforcement.
And even then if Shirou landed in a place that has such dramatic effect on his magic he then should be worrying then about not dying from suffocation because moderm people do not handle well environments with Age of Gods levels of mana.
In the Noble Phantasms' case, the canon explanation says that they are 'self-contained mysteries', meaning, that those things arent effected by high or low is the mana density on the air and it is only a matter if the user can pump mana into them to make them work and thats it. FGO gives enough proof of that seeing as Servants(and their NPs) do not get any stronger or weaker by being summoned in a place in or out the Age of Gods. Although being in a high mana density environment would certaintly give the user more mana to work with or refill their own tank faster so there is at least that.
High mana density environment would be way more useful to regular magi than Shirou because usually their big spells works by using the mana in the environment to power it up and thus, the power of said spells would shot up due the over-abaundance of energy around.
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That aside, i think it was a bit too much to make Shirou and Henrietta's talk about such topic in their first interaction and that this would have been better to do so at a later date when they have at least become acquaintances so they would have been a bit more emotionaly invested with each other at the time asking and answering that question.
"When he heard of magic, Shirou decided to try how his magecraft would behave. The redhead noticed how dense this world's energy was when he tried to apply Reinforcement on a knife he used to chop vegetables. The result was a very sharp knife that could easily cut through the vegetables… the cutting board… and left a noticeable divot in the countertop. Shirou could only apologize to a very confused, surprised, and angry Jessica for "not paying attention to his strength" as he continued the prep work that night. This led to the redhead's current predicament, him taking stock and replenishing low supplies today while Jessica was out to buy a replacement countertop."
That isnt how it work.
A high mana density environment would do shit to improve any of Shirou's magic because all of it is either self contained or has hard limits.
In Reinforcement's case the object would only improve based in the amount of mana you can inject in it (and how skillfuly you can do it) and any given object can only hold so much mana before it breaks so having more mana around to work with wouldnt suddenly turn it into Medea's Super Reinforcement.
And even then if Shirou landed in a place that has such dramatic effect on his magic he then should be worrying then about not dying from suffocation because moderm people do not handle well environments with Age of Gods levels of mana.
In the Noble Phantasms' case, the canon explanation says that they are 'self-contained mysteries', meaning, that those things arent effected by high or low is the mana density on the air and it is only a matter if the user can pump mana into them to make them work and thats it. FGO gives enough proof of that seeing as Servants(and their NPs) do not get any stronger or weaker by being summoned in a place in or out the Age of Gods. Although being in a high mana density environment would certaintly give the user more mana to work with or refill their own tank faster so there is at least that.
High mana density environment would be way more useful to regular magi than Shirou because usually their big spells works by using the mana in the environment to power it up and thus, the power of said spells would shot up due the over-abaundance of energy around.
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That aside, i think it was a bit too much to make Shirou and Henrietta's talk about such topic in their first interaction and that this would have been better to do so at a later date when they have at least become acquaintances so they would have been a bit more emotionaly invested with each other at the time asking and answering that question.