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23Essiter1987
You know, when I read the chapter title I was expecting something different. Glad I was wrong.
Also, glad to see even in this the Lancaster came out, if only briefly. (It still the best ship!)
I do hope we get some kind of super Dream Chapter where Jaune and his friends get to hang out in some capacity.
23Essiter1987You know, when I read the chapter title I was expecting something different. Glad I was wrong.
Also, glad to see even in this the Lancaster came out, if only briefly. (It still the best ship!)
I do hope we get some kind of super Dream Chapter where Jaune and his friends get to hang out in some capacity.
11/15/2024 c17 Essiter1987
I would say good on Jaune for somehow surviving the date with Cinder, but then we get Neo being Neo. I'm not sure if she infatuated with him, or merely bloodthirsty. Knowing her, it could one or the other or both.
I would say good on Jaune for somehow surviving the date with Cinder, but then we get Neo being Neo. I'm not sure if she infatuated with him, or merely bloodthirsty. Knowing her, it could one or the other or both.
11/12/2024 c16 Essiter1987
The part where Jaune finally told his friends was adorable, and I want more of that. Glad he and Pyrrha had that talk.
Also, oh, shit! I was not expecting Cinder to know already about his Semblance. Oh, no!
The part where Jaune finally told his friends was adorable, and I want more of that. Glad he and Pyrrha had that talk.
Also, oh, shit! I was not expecting Cinder to know already about his Semblance. Oh, no!
11/12/2024 c15 Essiter1987
Havin seen enough of these stories, I'm not surprised by Cardin's dream. Well, other than the Ruby part, that is.
As For Trivia and Neo. At some point that boy is going to have realize that they really want only one of two things with him, it seems.
And, Cinder, Cinder's going to be a hard one to fix Jaune. Well, to change. I'm not a therapist, but I've watched enough media to know that you don't "fix" a person, you merely try and change their perspective. Good luck there.
hopefully, we'll have the admission to his friends next chapter.
Havin seen enough of these stories, I'm not surprised by Cardin's dream. Well, other than the Ruby part, that is.
As For Trivia and Neo. At some point that boy is going to have realize that they really want only one of two things with him, it seems.
And, Cinder, Cinder's going to be a hard one to fix Jaune. Well, to change. I'm not a therapist, but I've watched enough media to know that you don't "fix" a person, you merely try and change their perspective. Good luck there.
hopefully, we'll have the admission to his friends next chapter.
11/9/2024 c18 Of the Worst 3
Found this story again after a while. I like the direction and how you handle dreams. Keep it up!
Found this story again after a while. I like the direction and how you handle dreams. Keep it up!
11/7/2024 c14 Essiter1987
A most excellent, and entertaining, chapter. Probably my favorite so far.
Also, who WOULD be the one to say Jinkies or even Zoinks! I'm guessing Jaune for the Zoinks, he's basically the Shaggy of this, right? Weiss is the smart one, but for some reason I'm thinking it would be Ruby, and I don't know why... Thoughts?
A most excellent, and entertaining, chapter. Probably my favorite so far.
Also, who WOULD be the one to say Jinkies or even Zoinks! I'm guessing Jaune for the Zoinks, he's basically the Shaggy of this, right? Weiss is the smart one, but for some reason I'm thinking it would be Ruby, and I don't know why... Thoughts?
11/4/2024 c18 8Mengsk
I suppose those details are going to come in to play later. Setting up for endgame?
8MengskI suppose those details are going to come in to play later. Setting up for endgame?
11/3/2024 c18 gmhribrahimsoleh89
Jaunne starting to disgusts me.? He’s 17. He should be more aware of the world or is he one of those low iq person?
Jaunne starting to disgusts me.? He’s 17. He should be more aware of the world or is he one of those low iq person?
11/2/2024 c16 Guest
tall-white guys sure are handsome, huh?
tall-white guys sure are handsome, huh?
11/1/2024 c18 Kitsuna G
Wow it's been a minute since I seen you last I hope all is well with you. Take care and have a good day.
Wow it's been a minute since I seen you last I hope all is well with you. Take care and have a good day.
11/1/2024 c18 12Lealius
so that'd Nero's purpose huh? also yes, Jaune has a type
quite interesting then the last person she thought passing out, as well as revealing what had transpired was Ruby... Dont give me hope
seems Jaune is having an effect on Amber... I feel like we've been here before, have we been here before?
anyway, good chapter as always, great work
12Lealiusso that'd Nero's purpose huh? also yes, Jaune has a type
quite interesting then the last person she thought passing out, as well as revealing what had transpired was Ruby... Dont give me hope
seems Jaune is having an effect on Amber... I feel like we've been here before, have we been here before?
anyway, good chapter as always, great work
11/1/2024 c18 nachalliw
Ok, the idea of Neo knowing about and anticipating Jaune using his semblance on her scares me. With her semblance, she has effectively been practicing making the world around her change to fit her imagination for her entire life. That would give her a tremendous advantage in a "dream world" induced by Jaune's semblance, even over Jaune himself.
Ok, the idea of Neo knowing about and anticipating Jaune using his semblance on her scares me. With her semblance, she has effectively been practicing making the world around her change to fit her imagination for her entire life. That would give her a tremendous advantage in a "dream world" induced by Jaune's semblance, even over Jaune himself.