for Beyond The Rules5/11 c3 Maginator1
Your grammar needs some serious work. It’s bad enough to stop me from reading. What’s confusing, is that it was just fine at the start. It started to decline in chapter 2 and got even worse in chapter 3. AI tools are free my guy.
Your grammar needs some serious work. It’s bad enough to stop me from reading. What’s confusing, is that it was just fine at the start. It started to decline in chapter 2 and got even worse in chapter 3. AI tools are free my guy.
5/8 c18 guestthebest
Amazing fic. Love a powerful/OP harry and of course the other stuff.
Amazing fic. Love a powerful/OP harry and of course the other stuff.
5/6 c32 SacredKoopa
Yeah, Narcissa I think realizes by this point that Draco is irredeemable. Narcissa will more than likely tell Harry about Draco's plans to kill Dumbledore, and he won't bat an eye at that. However, Harry will most likely be both amused and annoyed when Narcissa said that Draco offered to kill him for Lord Voldemort. I personally hope Harry kills Draco, but only after the gobshite kills Dumbledore, who truly deserves to die. I also can't wait for Amelia and Narcissa to fully pledge themselves to Harry, it'll definitely be a scene to remember. Keep up the great work.
Yeah, Narcissa I think realizes by this point that Draco is irredeemable. Narcissa will more than likely tell Harry about Draco's plans to kill Dumbledore, and he won't bat an eye at that. However, Harry will most likely be both amused and annoyed when Narcissa said that Draco offered to kill him for Lord Voldemort. I personally hope Harry kills Draco, but only after the gobshite kills Dumbledore, who truly deserves to die. I also can't wait for Amelia and Narcissa to fully pledge themselves to Harry, it'll definitely be a scene to remember. Keep up the great work.
5/2 c32 steve
crap chapter no idea who that weak ass crying woman was but it was not Narcissa
crap chapter no idea who that weak ass crying woman was but it was not Narcissa
5/2 c32 magitech
All these fics that try to save Snape and Draco ignore that those scum did to EARN! their dark marks.
How many lives did they destroy through kidnapping, rape, torture, mutilation and murder?
All forgiven because they wimped out? Bah
All these fics that try to save Snape and Draco ignore that those scum did to EARN! their dark marks.
How many lives did they destroy through kidnapping, rape, torture, mutilation and murder?
All forgiven because they wimped out? Bah
4/2 c31 magitech
Why do I suspect spoiled brat Draco will not swear that oath as he has done everything others think he has, and with glee.
Sick of the "Save Draco" mania that JK shoved down everyone's throats.
Wonder how many muggles he tortured learning the Unforgivables?
How many girls he raped learning the Imperio and Obliviate combination both before and while at Hogwarts
Why do I suspect spoiled brat Draco will not swear that oath as he has done everything others think he has, and with glee.
Sick of the "Save Draco" mania that JK shoved down everyone's throats.
Wonder how many muggles he tortured learning the Unforgivables?
How many girls he raped learning the Imperio and Obliviate combination both before and while at Hogwarts
4/2 c4 lukeanimelover
Hes trying to be charming, but honestly, this is really, really cringe. To an oursider itll be blatantly obvious hes trying to bed any women who looks at him twice.
Hes trying to be charming, but honestly, this is really, really cringe. To an oursider itll be blatantly obvious hes trying to bed any women who looks at him twice.
4/2 c2 lukeanimelover
Jeez already..? Im conflicted. I knew what i was getting into when i first started reading, but i cant help but hope this’ll be more then just power fantasy bullshit and smut.
Jeez already..? Im conflicted. I knew what i was getting into when i first started reading, but i cant help but hope this’ll be more then just power fantasy bullshit and smut.
4/2 c2 lukeanimelover
Does he have Harrys memorys then ir..? Also, i cant help but feel like its cheating for death to muddle with his personality. It feels like hell now be the perfect hero, one wholl do everything perfectly right, where every plan will go smoothly and hell learn spells overnight.
Does he have Harrys memorys then ir..? Also, i cant help but feel like its cheating for death to muddle with his personality. It feels like hell now be the perfect hero, one wholl do everything perfectly right, where every plan will go smoothly and hell learn spells overnight.
4/2 c1 lukeanimelover
Im going to he honest, after seeing how the multiverse seems to work in a similar way to the Infinity stones if MCU, id have been very interested to see how hed go. Maybe the Infinity Stones are, in reality, just a copy of the higher beings stones? That wouod be cool…
Im going to he honest, after seeing how the multiverse seems to work in a similar way to the Infinity stones if MCU, id have been very interested to see how hed go. Maybe the Infinity Stones are, in reality, just a copy of the higher beings stones? That wouod be cool…
3/30 c2 tylor13roney
did this idiot really destroy the cabinet that can transport people seamlessly from place to place.
how fucking stupid.
should gave to mione and got her to learn how to make them then sell them shile voldemort isnrampaging haha.
or as an escape
did this idiot really destroy the cabinet that can transport people seamlessly from place to place.
how fucking stupid.
should gave to mione and got her to learn how to make them then sell them shile voldemort isnrampaging haha.
or as an escape