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1/12/2023 c1 Guest
I hope you update this story. We need to see more chapters and find out what happens next. Also I think crossing over Sailor Moon with Ever After High is magnificent. I'm sure the students, teachers and staff will be happy to meet Sailor Moon and her fellow Sailor Scouts
1/12/2023 c1 Guest
I hope you update this story soon. I want to see more when the Ever After High students, teachers and staff meet the Sailor Senshi/Scouts.
12/29/2022 c1 4princessofwarriors
Hello Jasmine, you have a lovely concept here and an interesting writing style. I don't favor the screenwriting style that you are utilizing but you are doing the style justice especially with the clever addition of your Narrators. A couple of pieces of hopefully constructive criticisms to consider: the phrase should be 'adding notches to his bedpost' as a notch is a mark cut into wood to keep count or aid in navigation in the woods while nauseous is the feeling a person gets when they are about to vomit. If your character has miss used it to show that she is unfamiliar with Earth culture, you would want to specify this in some way to the reader. Another point to consider is when the characters of Ever After High are voicing their support for Raven you might want to consider either condensing this scene into 'they all voiced their support' or 'they discussed it briefly amongst themselves and everyone agreed to help her' Or differentiate the characters responses by describing their actions for greater impact. Next chapter I would like to know how Sailor Moon and Raven Queen will meet? Will the characters in both worlds get along immediately or have conflict? Describe what state Serena is in after the battle and why she needed to be reunited with Athena at all please? Have fun
11/10/2022 c1 Guest
Pretty good, please update soon I would like to see more in this.

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