for RISE OF THE PHEONIX9/19 c2 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story RISE OF THE PHEONIX and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story RISE OF THE PHEONIX and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
9/18 c1 ZoyeZest
Hi!
I just finished reading "RISE OF THE PHEONIX", and it left a lasting impression. The depth of your characters and the vivid world you’ve created has serious potential for a visual comic. As a professional digital artist, I specialize in transforming stories like yours into engaging visual experiences, and I can already see how the emotions and scenes would come to life on the page.
I’ve worked with many authors to adapt their written works into comics, always making sure to keep the essence of the story front and center. If you're open to it, I'd love to chat more about turning your story into a comic. I can provide more info on pricing and the process—let's collaborate and bring your vision to life.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
Hi!
I just finished reading "RISE OF THE PHEONIX", and it left a lasting impression. The depth of your characters and the vivid world you’ve created has serious potential for a visual comic. As a professional digital artist, I specialize in transforming stories like yours into engaging visual experiences, and I can already see how the emotions and scenes would come to life on the page.
I’ve worked with many authors to adapt their written works into comics, always making sure to keep the essence of the story front and center. If you're open to it, I'd love to chat more about turning your story into a comic. I can provide more info on pricing and the process—let's collaborate and bring your vision to life.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord : baran59354
8/25 c8 
4Sakhi2009
To be honest, I really have enjoyed this chapter. It had so much mysteries, secrets, tragics and humor. Chapter by chapter my desire to see Crystal in beyblade anime is increasing.
I didn't know that her past has this much secrets and mysteries and the main question is that why anyone wants to create problems for her? And the ending was really suspicious. I mean, I really want to know what happen later in the story. I can see this is going to be a long and epic fic after all...
And at last I was a little shock to know that Dr. CK and Hiro dated during their college life and I liked the humor, Ray's question was hilarious that made me laugh like crazy.
Btw, great chapter...!
Regards,
Sakhi2009
4Sakhi2009To be honest, I really have enjoyed this chapter. It had so much mysteries, secrets, tragics and humor. Chapter by chapter my desire to see Crystal in beyblade anime is increasing.
I didn't know that her past has this much secrets and mysteries and the main question is that why anyone wants to create problems for her? And the ending was really suspicious. I mean, I really want to know what happen later in the story. I can see this is going to be a long and epic fic after all...
And at last I was a little shock to know that Dr. CK and Hiro dated during their college life and I liked the humor, Ray's question was hilarious that made me laugh like crazy.
Btw, great chapter...!
Regards,
Sakhi2009
12/31/2023 c7 Sakhi2009
Well, when the chapter was over , my reaction was HOW CAN YOU DO THIS WITH US?... ahem! sorry, but I was really wanting to see their reactions at all. But it's okay, I will wait. And I want to ask you something, where was the 4th position? Maybe it could be my mistake. But if you don't mind then can you solve my confusion at this point?
Btw, I should wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR 2024!
Regards,
Sakhi2009 :D
Well, when the chapter was over , my reaction was HOW CAN YOU DO THIS WITH US?... ahem! sorry, but I was really wanting to see their reactions at all. But it's okay, I will wait. And I want to ask you something, where was the 4th position? Maybe it could be my mistake. But if you don't mind then can you solve my confusion at this point?
Btw, I should wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR 2024!
Regards,
Sakhi2009 :D
11/22/2023 c6 James Birdsong
Cool and excellent fanfic!
Cool and excellent fanfic!
11/14/2023 c6 Sakhi2009
Well, first of all Happy Diwali (I know a little late) now talking about this chapter. To be honest, I loved Crystal very much! She's just full of attitude. You know what, I always prefer those girls who are enough confident on themselves to do anything. And Tyson has finally forgiven Hironow I can't hold back my happiness anymore. The ending is a bit mysterious.
Btw, take your time to write amazing chapters like this one and I will be waiting for next chapter.
Regards,
Sakhi2009:D
Well, first of all Happy Diwali (I know a little late) now talking about this chapter. To be honest, I loved Crystal very much! She's just full of attitude. You know what, I always prefer those girls who are enough confident on themselves to do anything. And Tyson has finally forgiven Hironow I can't hold back my happiness anymore. The ending is a bit mysterious.
Btw, take your time to write amazing chapters like this one and I will be waiting for next chapter.
Regards,
Sakhi2009:D
10/30/2023 c5 Yugi1567
When you will update next chapter? I just can't wait more.
When you will update next chapter? I just can't wait more.
8/18/2023 c5 Sakhi2009
coughs* Ahem!
Attention readers! a new little sister has come to review. *joints hands*
As you said, I will start from the beginning. Well..
. Let out a deep sigh... Finally! I have finished it. Really? Now I understand why my older brother always scolds me for saying that I don't have enough patience. If I were even a little later in finishing it, then my Kanha would probably scold me too.
Okay, so, let me tell you a fact that out of all the Beyblade characters, Tyson is my favorite character. In the beginning, I didn't like Kai at all. But after V-Force, I started liking him and by the end, he became my second favorite character of all time.
Well, I always had a doubt as to what exactly happened after Dranzer broke into pieces; after some research, I discovered that only three people would know about Dranzer's death, which were Mr.D, Tala, and Tyson. This is the reason why Tala was crying and Tyson was so frustrated before his match against Garland.
In the last episode they showed us that Dranzer had come back but from where? No one was able to give me a satisfying answer.
Now, if I were to describe yours, it was great...no, I mean it was really, really great! I loved the way you explained everything step by step and connected each point one by one.I can feel the pain of Kai.
And about Crystal, it's really true that every brother or sister is our second mom and dad.I've laughed at Kenny and Ray's moment and also at Tyson and Daichi's.
Who said, Kaihil fandom is dead!? It's not like that at all.
So, please keep it up and update. I also liked the mini version of 'Rise of the phoenix', I mean, 'The true leader'.
Yeah, so that's it..
.*notices my comment*
Wow! Really? I have never written such a long comment before. So, now I need to go and get some sleep as it's already 10:30 pm. And thank you for inspiring me too. See you in my next chapter. Goodbye!
coughs* Ahem!
Attention readers! a new little sister has come to review. *joints hands*
As you said, I will start from the beginning. Well..
. Let out a deep sigh... Finally! I have finished it. Really? Now I understand why my older brother always scolds me for saying that I don't have enough patience. If I were even a little later in finishing it, then my Kanha would probably scold me too.
Okay, so, let me tell you a fact that out of all the Beyblade characters, Tyson is my favorite character. In the beginning, I didn't like Kai at all. But after V-Force, I started liking him and by the end, he became my second favorite character of all time.
Well, I always had a doubt as to what exactly happened after Dranzer broke into pieces; after some research, I discovered that only three people would know about Dranzer's death, which were Mr.D, Tala, and Tyson. This is the reason why Tala was crying and Tyson was so frustrated before his match against Garland.
In the last episode they showed us that Dranzer had come back but from where? No one was able to give me a satisfying answer.
Now, if I were to describe yours, it was great...no, I mean it was really, really great! I loved the way you explained everything step by step and connected each point one by one.I can feel the pain of Kai.
And about Crystal, it's really true that every brother or sister is our second mom and dad.I've laughed at Kenny and Ray's moment and also at Tyson and Daichi's.
Who said, Kaihil fandom is dead!? It's not like that at all.
So, please keep it up and update. I also liked the mini version of 'Rise of the phoenix', I mean, 'The true leader'.
Yeah, so that's it..
.*notices my comment*
Wow! Really? I have never written such a long comment before. So, now I need to go and get some sleep as it's already 10:30 pm. And thank you for inspiring me too. See you in my next chapter. Goodbye!
7/26/2023 c5 6cc992
Okay so my dumb self accidentally clicked the send button
*continuation of my previous review*
and how the plot is going. She's definitely a powerful character and has a lot of impact on the story.
BTW while reading the latest ch I spotted one mistake
that part where Kenny was to shy/shocked to see C.K and could not talk properly someone asked 'Are you okay' or something like that and after that you put [Asked concerned Kenny] I think you meant someone else or I misunderstood it.
however waiting for the next ch so pls update fast T-T
Bbye
~Munia
6cc992Okay so my dumb self accidentally clicked the send button
*continuation of my previous review*
and how the plot is going. She's definitely a powerful character and has a lot of impact on the story.
BTW while reading the latest ch I spotted one mistake
that part where Kenny was to shy/shocked to see C.K and could not talk properly someone asked 'Are you okay' or something like that and after that you put [Asked concerned Kenny] I think you meant someone else or I misunderstood it.
however waiting for the next ch so pls update fast T-T
Bbye
~Munia
7/26/2023 c5 cc992
OMG YOUR OC FEMALE CHARACTERS ARE SO POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN
I've to agree with Kenny choosing Crystal as his crush... I mean her brother is so fine so she's fine too (you know the genetic beauties)
I loved Hiro's Trial.. . it's well written too and cried to know that Kai had to use Dranzer for the last time
I love Mystique and Romero's funny yet lovely relationship and how
OMG YOUR OC FEMALE CHARACTERS ARE SO POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN
I've to agree with Kenny choosing Crystal as his crush... I mean her brother is so fine so she's fine too (you know the genetic beauties)
I loved Hiro's Trial.. . it's well written too and cried to know that Kai had to use Dranzer for the last time
I love Mystique and Romero's funny yet lovely relationship and how
4/10/2023 c4 16kaihil fanfiction
AHH! FUUK! tbh, first thing first, I'm very satisfied with the length of chapter. lengthy chapter are just my thing when it comes to multi-shot.
second, I liked the grammar, vocabulary and clean chapter. although, characters were quite OOC but I guess this much is fine (I feel like I should be the least person to point it out). anyways, good one.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
16kaihil fanfictionAHH! FUUK! tbh, first thing first, I'm very satisfied with the length of chapter. lengthy chapter are just my thing when it comes to multi-shot.
second, I liked the grammar, vocabulary and clean chapter. although, characters were quite OOC but I guess this much is fine (I feel like I should be the least person to point it out). anyways, good one.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
3/28/2023 c3 kaihil fanfiction
I kinda want to read next chapter. we'll, I also like the interactions of the characters, so yeah! keep going.
idk why I always look forward for comedy or anything funny, so if things go even a little more serious. I get bored easily (I'm just telling you my case, everyone can have their own preferences)
Anyways, Upload soon.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
I kinda want to read next chapter. we'll, I also like the interactions of the characters, so yeah! keep going.
idk why I always look forward for comedy or anything funny, so if things go even a little more serious. I get bored easily (I'm just telling you my case, everyone can have their own preferences)
Anyways, Upload soon.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
3/27/2023 c2 kaihil fanfiction
aww~ you shouldn't have mentioned intresting details already and about shipping your OC with hiro. it could be more fun for us readers to find out during plot.
Anyways, I see where you are going. I like the intro and so far, good.
going to read next chapter.
byeRiti
aww~ you shouldn't have mentioned intresting details already and about shipping your OC with hiro. it could be more fun for us readers to find out during plot.
Anyways, I see where you are going. I like the intro and so far, good.
going to read next chapter.
byeRiti
3/25/2023 c3 3myevilsoul
I really felt bad for Kai when he had to part with Dranzer. It really gets me but I am happy seeing that Hilary is with him. I also like Mystique...I am excited to know what happens ahead with her. I hope you update it soon. All the best!
3myevilsoulI really felt bad for Kai when he had to part with Dranzer. It really gets me but I am happy seeing that Hilary is with him. I also like Mystique...I am excited to know what happens ahead with her. I hope you update it soon. All the best!
10/20/2022 c2 121Droplets of blue rain
Oh Gosh! Kai's situation is really very critical, but I know he will make it.
I could literally feel Hilary, and how she wasn't ready to leave his side right then...was so true and pure of her. Then again, Mystique is also right.
And yeah...Dranzer is also no more...but c'mon, she's a phoenix! She'll also come back, so will our Kai! All the best to both :')
Update soon! :D
-Misty _
121Droplets of blue rainOh Gosh! Kai's situation is really very critical, but I know he will make it.
I could literally feel Hilary, and how she wasn't ready to leave his side right then...was so true and pure of her. Then again, Mystique is also right.
And yeah...Dranzer is also no more...but c'mon, she's a phoenix! She'll also come back, so will our Kai! All the best to both :')
Update soon! :D
-Misty _