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10/18/2022 c2 6Oxy27
That was a good one. I am liking the team dynamic between this new team 8. But I do got a question. Since Obito is alive and well. Why is he not the hokage? Cause going by series, Obito is the strongest alive at this point.

But Rin isn't dead so there is the chance Obito doesn't have his MS. And he didn't get trained by Madara Uchiha. So that could be why. Since a huge part of his strength was due to the MS.

But the big question is. Who the fuck killed my shawty Kushina and Minato?!
10/18/2022 c2 SPark681
Hmm, an interesting story so far can't wait to see more so keep up the great work!
10/18/2022 c2 Jimmopolis
Very interesting. With Obito and Rin as well as Kakashi present, things seem different and interesting. Team 8 looks like a great team. As for couples with Naruto, Hinata will be fine but since Naruto is famous and recognized I think a mini cra would be needed. In that case Ino and perhaps Temari would be suitable if there will be an invasion or if there will be different events, a marriage alliance to strengthen the relationship between villages and nations.

The Uchiha massacre and the Kurama attack seem increasingly strange to me now. They give me the impression of traitorous Uchiha wanting to use Kyuubi (failing) and a fake Uchiha massacre (Sasuke doesn't know they're alive and maybe not even Itachi). Or maybe just Fugaku. Fugaku I seem to remember that he had the mangekyou (I could be wrong) and being greedy for power he may have created a plan against Konoha. If he found out about the impending massacre he might have found a solution by faking his own death and possibly that of others. Technically it wouldn't be impossible, but we'll see. Madara I don't think he can be in the attack with Kurama, too old, and a Uchiha Oc or person with transplanted eyes would not be able to do it.
10/15/2022 c1 Naruto nut
You do realize the only ones that could actually control the nine tails was itachi and obito but itachi is “on the run” at this point and your making obito a good guy, so no one is strong enough to control the nine tails and attack the village. More over at this point no one is strong or fast enough to take on Minato not even pain, so you only have one option which would be an OP OC. And I’ve read enough fanfics to know that usually ends in an unfinished story cause of writers block, the author wrote themselves in a hole, or finally an inconsistent story that’s a bad read. I don’t want to see any of these outcomes cause I think this story has amazing potential.
10/16/2022 c1 Oxy27
Well damn, I was not expecting my main man Obito to be alive. But I am all for it since he is my second favorite character.

And as for ships, I really don’t know. Since Naruto is smart and laid back, he should be with someone who can match his energy somewhat. Maybe Shion from the movie. She a princess just like his mom.

Karin, or Kurotsuchi
10/16/2022 c1 13Write Your Wrongs
I might do the canon Naru/Hina pairing. I love that pairing. I also like Naru/Ino. I’m not sure.
10/16/2022 c1 2biginferno
interesting I hope you complete your other stories as well but before I suggest a pairing or pairings is Naruto to have 1 wife or multiple wives
10/16/2022 c1 bankai777
Will naruto meet Yugito or fu.
10/16/2022 c1 Jimmopolis
It looks very interesting. With all the information about Naruto and training for years, Naruto is much stronger than the others and, even if some still hate him because of Kurama, that's not the case for everyone. Obito in Naruto's village and sensei is interesting. Is Rin alive or is she the one who died under the rock? This would make sense and Obito would not leave the village in such a situation. Perhaps the one who Attacked the village was Madara or another Uchiha. Fugaku and the others were assholes and using Kurama to defeat Minato, Kushina and most of the shinobi is something they would have done to take over the village. If it is something like this, it is good that they are dead.

Since Naruto and Sasuke are not friends in this story, if Sasuke tries to escape Naruto should win easily because he won't hold back. With Obito being there, Sasuke loses usefulness if he becomes a traitor and can be killed or at least I think.

As for girlfriends for Naruto you should implement cra because he seems interested in meeting more women and should recreate Uzumaki and Namikaze. In that case Ino and Hinata would be the first and you could add Temari if the story remains similar to the canonical one. For others it is your choice, but the plot should change profoundly if you decide to put Yugito and Fu.
10/15/2022 c1 1UzumakiRamen
Great beginning! Can't wait for the next chapter. Also for pairing, are you going for monogamous or polygamous relationship?

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