for A Third Rose3/16/2023 c3 
2the mysterious Mr.E
I'm glad she is getting the family she needs. I am curious about how she meets Salem in Canon.
2the mysterious Mr.EI'm glad she is getting the family she needs. I am curious about how she meets Salem in Canon.
3/16/2023 c3 29Iron117Prime
This was very wholesome.
Cinder still has issues she needs to work out, but she's starting to feel more comfortable around her new family. A good first step.
29Iron117PrimeThis was very wholesome.
Cinder still has issues she needs to work out, but she's starting to feel more comfortable around her new family. A good first step.
2/28/2023 c2 70OmegusXIII
This is the most precious thing I've ever seen. :) I hope to see more chapters of this in the future.
70OmegusXIIIThis is the most precious thing I've ever seen. :) I hope to see more chapters of this in the future.
12/31/2022 c2 7Batomys2731
A little short like you said, but still a very good chapter. Love the interactions so far, and I don't feel like Cinder is too out of character. She's been through hell, and it shows. She'll need time to open up and trust again, which I'm definitely looking forward to seeing.
Can't wait for more.
7Batomys2731A little short like you said, but still a very good chapter. Love the interactions so far, and I don't feel like Cinder is too out of character. She's been through hell, and it shows. She'll need time to open up and trust again, which I'm definitely looking forward to seeing.
Can't wait for more.
11/29/2022 c2 15Vanessa Masters
Yeah, overwhelming for poor Cindy.
Oh, s there were other staff, I kinda assumed it was all poor Cinder
But given animation costs, they didn't have more appear.
Poor girl, ruby can be
So far, this is a great read, and eager to see more updates.
15Vanessa MastersYeah, overwhelming for poor Cindy.
Oh, s there were other staff, I kinda assumed it was all poor Cinder
But given animation costs, they didn't have more appear.
Poor girl, ruby can be
So far, this is a great read, and eager to see more updates.
11/29/2022 c1 Vanessa Masters
Summer had seen enough, more than enough. She kicked the grate down and all but lunged at the Madame who turned scant seconds too late to try and either escape or even defend herself. The woman was tackled to the ground as Summer rained down blow after blow into the woman's face with her fists. She wasn't as physically strong as Raven but she was still a Huntress and as a result was in much better shape than the average person.
As Summer continued to punch the woman in the face she screamed "WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! THAT'S A CHILD YOU'RE TORTURING!" Summer didn't receive a response as the repeated punches to the face prevented the bitch from forming a single syllable let alone a sentence.
The huntress stopped when she noticed that the woman wasn't even conscious anymore. Summer checked the woman's pulse and found that she was still alive. While Summer didn't want to become a murderer; she still held no sympathy for the monster she had just beaten into unconsciousness.
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I wanted to do the same.
I actually, didn't see anything to imply the abuse happened in the open.
Otherwise, why disguise the shock collar as a necklace?
Course, rich types tend to overlook things like that, the ckinetrlle.
My main issues was the stupid huntsman, how he let cineer wallow in there until she was eighteen, he could've taken proof, reported trh madame, anything.
And yet he tried to arrest her for killing the madame and her daughters.
He should've known she couldn't handle that,she was a child.
Well, better summer than that guy, I didn't know there were other fics, I'll have to search and try to find them
Great start, very well done.
Summer had seen enough, more than enough. She kicked the grate down and all but lunged at the Madame who turned scant seconds too late to try and either escape or even defend herself. The woman was tackled to the ground as Summer rained down blow after blow into the woman's face with her fists. She wasn't as physically strong as Raven but she was still a Huntress and as a result was in much better shape than the average person.
As Summer continued to punch the woman in the face she screamed "WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! THAT'S A CHILD YOU'RE TORTURING!" Summer didn't receive a response as the repeated punches to the face prevented the bitch from forming a single syllable let alone a sentence.
The huntress stopped when she noticed that the woman wasn't even conscious anymore. Summer checked the woman's pulse and found that she was still alive. While Summer didn't want to become a murderer; she still held no sympathy for the monster she had just beaten into unconsciousness.
-
I wanted to do the same.
I actually, didn't see anything to imply the abuse happened in the open.
Otherwise, why disguise the shock collar as a necklace?
Course, rich types tend to overlook things like that, the ckinetrlle.
My main issues was the stupid huntsman, how he let cineer wallow in there until she was eighteen, he could've taken proof, reported trh madame, anything.
And yet he tried to arrest her for killing the madame and her daughters.
He should've known she couldn't handle that,she was a child.
Well, better summer than that guy, I didn't know there were other fics, I'll have to search and try to find them
Great start, very well done.
11/25/2022 c2 16ahsoei
Kind of reminds me of Couer's Relic of The Future, where adult Jaune adopted younger Emerald off the street. XD
16ahsoeiKind of reminds me of Couer's Relic of The Future, where adult Jaune adopted younger Emerald off the street. XD
11/24/2022 c2 Guest
It's always funny to see RWBY fans fool themselves, even more fun to call Cinder one-dimensional xd As if there were complex characters or some depth in RWBY, well, the worst blind person is the one who doesn't want to see.
It's always funny to see RWBY fans fool themselves, even more fun to call Cinder one-dimensional xd As if there were complex characters or some depth in RWBY, well, the worst blind person is the one who doesn't want to see.