for A Third Rose9/7/2024 c14 Blackmetalzane22
The moments with Emerald, Nix and Glynda were cute and heartwarming. I'm just waiting for Emerald to call Glynda "Mommy" and Glynda scooping her up for a hug. I liked Mercury's comments. Zwei's here! Ruby and Yang definitely need that pupper. Cinder's doing her best for her little sisters, and having Zwei around to help her feel better will help.
The moments with Emerald, Nix and Glynda were cute and heartwarming. I'm just waiting for Emerald to call Glynda "Mommy" and Glynda scooping her up for a hug. I liked Mercury's comments. Zwei's here! Ruby and Yang definitely need that pupper. Cinder's doing her best for her little sisters, and having Zwei around to help her feel better will help.
9/7/2024 c14 
29Iron117Prime
This chapter is nice and heartwarming, but it also feels a tad incomplete. Mostly because we don't have a moment with Ironwood and Mercury like you said, but hopefully we'll get that in the next chapter.
But we got to see Zwei. :)
29Iron117PrimeThis chapter is nice and heartwarming, but it also feels a tad incomplete. Mostly because we don't have a moment with Ironwood and Mercury like you said, but hopefully we'll get that in the next chapter.
But we got to see Zwei. :)
8/26/2024 c5 Trainz
I thought that is was the ninja chopping onions
I thought that is was the ninja chopping onions
6/27/2024 c13 UnofficialProductionsOfficial
I have been enjoying this story, the moment with Tai and Cinder was heart wrenching, I simply adore this concept and loving seeing it explored. I fully predict at some point Cinder is gonna go Mark Grayson on someone or some poor grimm who fucked around too much and found it to protect Ruby and Yang.
Keep it up, look forward to seeing the rest
I have been enjoying this story, the moment with Tai and Cinder was heart wrenching, I simply adore this concept and loving seeing it explored. I fully predict at some point Cinder is gonna go Mark Grayson on someone or some poor grimm who fucked around too much and found it to protect Ruby and Yang.
Keep it up, look forward to seeing the rest
6/1/2024 c13 Doc
Finally got around to this one, been on my radar for a bit now
Gotta say, terrible day for rain huh. Excellent work, got a tear outta me.
Finally got around to this one, been on my radar for a bit now
Gotta say, terrible day for rain huh. Excellent work, got a tear outta me.
5/27/2024 c13 1Ultimatrix bearer
5 stages of grief complete. Can't wait for the general and good witch to have their custody battle.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
1Ultimatrix bearer5 stages of grief complete. Can't wait for the general and good witch to have their custody battle.
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
5/27/2024 c12 Ultimatrix bearer
Hopefully he doesn't go Depression mode this time .
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
Hopefully he doesn't go Depression mode this time .
KEEP BEING AWESOME!
5/27/2024 c13 23Earth Dragon Arnighte
Now I see why you threw in Nix. For a complete Team CMSN (Crimson)... I hope I hit that right.
Good chapter, really feels like RT shut down influenced this. But sometimes, you just gotta let out.
23Earth Dragon ArnighteNow I see why you threw in Nix. For a complete Team CMSN (Crimson)... I hope I hit that right.
Good chapter, really feels like RT shut down influenced this. But sometimes, you just gotta let out.