for A Third Rose5/27/2024 c13 Blackmetalzane22
Poor kids. Cinder's doing her best to be the strong big sister, but even she has her limits. Emerald and Mercury's moments were good too. I have feeling they might be split though. Like Emerald goes with Goodwitch and Mercury goes with Ironwood. Nix has new arms, and it was nice to see Pietro, even if brief. I can only imagine what'll happen next.
Poor kids. Cinder's doing her best to be the strong big sister, but even she has her limits. Emerald and Mercury's moments were good too. I have feeling they might be split though. Like Emerald goes with Goodwitch and Mercury goes with Ironwood. Nix has new arms, and it was nice to see Pietro, even if brief. I can only imagine what'll happen next.
5/26/2024 c13 
1bardockskywalker1991
:Though i do hope that someone picks up RWBY and if nothing else does it in the way that it's creator Monty would have wanted it to have been done."
Ah... So one of those... Great...
1bardockskywalker1991:Though i do hope that someone picks up RWBY and if nothing else does it in the way that it's creator Monty would have wanted it to have been done."
Ah... So one of those... Great...
3/28/2024 c12 15Vanessa Masters
"…by the time I woke up they had taken her body, I don't know why but they did. The only thing left was her sword and the clasp for her cloak. I had to return it and, and tell you I'm sorry…that I'm the reason she's dead, that it was my fault." There were tears streaming down his face now.
By the end of the story, Ozpin had an expression that was a mixture of resignation and sadness at it all; Glynda had an expression that none of them had ever seen expressed on the normally taciturn woman. It was a strange mix of horror, sadness, and sympathy. The one that looked the most devastated however was Taiyang himself. He looked as though all life had been leached from him, his eyes were dull and for several long seconds he found it impossible to say so much as a word.
For several long seconds nobody said a word to the man but eventually Tai simply stated in a voice that was as broken as it was hoarse "I-I need to go check on the girls. Thank you, for telling me." He then left the room without another word.
After he left Nix tried to wipe away the tears on his face but he only found that he could bat his bandaged stumps against the side of his face uselessly. Realizing this, the young boy looked down at his stumps he once again cursed himself for being the one who had lived.
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Ugh rook me weeks to finish this, cause I kept ugly crying at a lot. Ur it's intense!
Bur they're safe, more or less.
Bur at the cost of Nix arms
15Vanessa Masters"…by the time I woke up they had taken her body, I don't know why but they did. The only thing left was her sword and the clasp for her cloak. I had to return it and, and tell you I'm sorry…that I'm the reason she's dead, that it was my fault." There were tears streaming down his face now.
By the end of the story, Ozpin had an expression that was a mixture of resignation and sadness at it all; Glynda had an expression that none of them had ever seen expressed on the normally taciturn woman. It was a strange mix of horror, sadness, and sympathy. The one that looked the most devastated however was Taiyang himself. He looked as though all life had been leached from him, his eyes were dull and for several long seconds he found it impossible to say so much as a word.
For several long seconds nobody said a word to the man but eventually Tai simply stated in a voice that was as broken as it was hoarse "I-I need to go check on the girls. Thank you, for telling me." He then left the room without another word.
After he left Nix tried to wipe away the tears on his face but he only found that he could bat his bandaged stumps against the side of his face uselessly. Realizing this, the young boy looked down at his stumps he once again cursed himself for being the one who had lived.
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Ugh rook me weeks to finish this, cause I kept ugly crying at a lot. Ur it's intense!
Bur they're safe, more or less.
Bur at the cost of Nix arms
3/14/2024 c12 pyrojack25
Considering what he's been through, I understand why he doesn't think about that but.
But Jesus...10,000 miles to bring back a weapon and a pin. Right you reach the finish line... Someone comes close to snuff you out. Now you have to live with the guilt and the pain you endure just to apologize to them. That's some shit bro.
Though I'm curious. What happens now? The runaways are in Vale now and Nix was dismembered... So much curiosity in so little time.
Considering what he's been through, I understand why he doesn't think about that but.
But Jesus...10,000 miles to bring back a weapon and a pin. Right you reach the finish line... Someone comes close to snuff you out. Now you have to live with the guilt and the pain you endure just to apologize to them. That's some shit bro.
Though I'm curious. What happens now? The runaways are in Vale now and Nix was dismembered... So much curiosity in so little time.
2/27/2024 c11 Lorenzo Ferrari
Update A.S.A.P.!
Update A.S.A.P.!
1/23/2024 c12 hirshja
I really appreciate you focusing on the "how" rather than the "who". I didn't realize how forced it can feel when writers put too much emphasis on the "who". As readers, we don't need to be given every little detail; it often makes the text feel unnatural.
I really appreciate you focusing on the "how" rather than the "who". I didn't realize how forced it can feel when writers put too much emphasis on the "who". As readers, we don't need to be given every little detail; it often makes the text feel unnatural.
1/23/2024 c12 KHARAKI TAKAN
Sweet chapter.
Curious to see how much Ruby will remember. Be interesting to see if Yang ever remembers, doubt she will though.
Sweet chapter.
Curious to see how much Ruby will remember. Be interesting to see if Yang ever remembers, doubt she will though.
1/22/2024 c12 DavisSento
Man oh man, seeing Nix's reaction of him waking up to the fact that he no longer has arms was heartbreaking. He can't help but really feel bad for him for what has happened, and that the fact that he finally completed what he wanted to do and tell Tai what happened to Summer had to been so much weight added on instead of being lifted.
Man oh man, seeing Nix's reaction of him waking up to the fact that he no longer has arms was heartbreaking. He can't help but really feel bad for him for what has happened, and that the fact that he finally completed what he wanted to do and tell Tai what happened to Summer had to been so much weight added on instead of being lifted.