for The Outsider's Resolve11/30/2022 c26 Guest
Finally a little plot movement at least. Let’s sem him get more capable. It’s about time. Agree with the other commenter the Harry Potter story was much much better. The multiple chapters or really fast updates will be the only thing that can save this fic if it continues this way
Finally a little plot movement at least. Let’s sem him get more capable. It’s about time. Agree with the other commenter the Harry Potter story was much much better. The multiple chapters or really fast updates will be the only thing that can save this fic if it continues this way
12/1/2022 c29 Greatgriggler
The payoff is really satisfying. The genjutsu mystery cliffhanger (and callback to the bunshin talent that shocked maruboshi) is a really nice setup for the next arc where Takuma may be able to search for his strengths now that he is getting out of 29 chapters of crisis mode.
The payoff is really satisfying. The genjutsu mystery cliffhanger (and callback to the bunshin talent that shocked maruboshi) is a really nice setup for the next arc where Takuma may be able to search for his strengths now that he is getting out of 29 chapters of crisis mode.
12/1/2022 c6 WN-Bruh
yeah no
this story is clearly not for me
you should really consider adding an angst tag and uploading it to ao3
ik the teenage girls are gonna eat this one up
yeah no
this story is clearly not for me
you should really consider adding an angst tag and uploading it to ao3
ik the teenage girls are gonna eat this one up
12/1/2022 c5 WN-Bruh
how can one be so bad at everything when given a whole year to train in which all he has to do is go to school and train? taijutsu i can sort of understand but bro can't even hit a target after all that time? like it won't even take an average person a month to learn how to shoot an arrow with a bow or throw a dart well enough especially if that's all they have to do during the month.
all the ninja academy books were made for children so they should be pretty simple and easy to remember so how is he still having difficulty tf. i'd understand if you made it so that a language barrier was the issue but you didn't
it's like me not being able to understand history books made for children from another country which speaks the same language as me. it's like your mc was "less advanced in mental, physical, or social development than is usual for one's age" both before and after reincarnating
and why does he care about the opinion of literal children so much
also, why doesn't this story have an angst tag?
not trynna insult you or anything and would appreciate if you answered my questions. i am a very agreeable person and will apologize if I've been proven wrong or have offended.
I'm really hoping the future chapters are somewhat better
how can one be so bad at everything when given a whole year to train in which all he has to do is go to school and train? taijutsu i can sort of understand but bro can't even hit a target after all that time? like it won't even take an average person a month to learn how to shoot an arrow with a bow or throw a dart well enough especially if that's all they have to do during the month.
all the ninja academy books were made for children so they should be pretty simple and easy to remember so how is he still having difficulty tf. i'd understand if you made it so that a language barrier was the issue but you didn't
it's like me not being able to understand history books made for children from another country which speaks the same language as me. it's like your mc was "less advanced in mental, physical, or social development than is usual for one's age" both before and after reincarnating
and why does he care about the opinion of literal children so much
also, why doesn't this story have an angst tag?
not trynna insult you or anything and would appreciate if you answered my questions. i am a very agreeable person and will apologize if I've been proven wrong or have offended.
I'm really hoping the future chapters are somewhat better
12/1/2022 c28 
1vishusingh2009
This feels like a most realistic story for an isekai in Naruto world who has only a year before graduation. Honestly, the pacing and learning curve is almost realistic. Achievements come only after hard work. I dont think the story would have been as good at any other age in the setting u have build up. Keep up the good work.
1vishusingh2009This feels like a most realistic story for an isekai in Naruto world who has only a year before graduation. Honestly, the pacing and learning curve is almost realistic. Achievements come only after hard work. I dont think the story would have been as good at any other age in the setting u have build up. Keep up the good work.
11/30/2022 c26 YungTurd
it's like you don't understand how people work. this story is trash. i hope it never updates
it's like you don't understand how people work. this story is trash. i hope it never updates
11/30/2022 c2 W4ND3R1N6 R34D3R
At least not 40K, because I doubt any average human being from 2nd millennium can survive there for one month
At least not 40K, because I doubt any average human being from 2nd millennium can survive there for one month
11/27/2022 c23 Guest
Good fic
Good fic
11/28/2022 c26 AvidReader909
Multiple chapters! Love seeing the build up of actual foundations that will lead to legit growth. Also love the oddity he appears to be to everyone, prodigy tendencies due to having an adult mind and speed of improvement some people see, but a failure in things people consider basic, can’t wait till the higher ups start to wonder what’s going on!
Multiple chapters! Love seeing the build up of actual foundations that will lead to legit growth. Also love the oddity he appears to be to everyone, prodigy tendencies due to having an adult mind and speed of improvement some people see, but a failure in things people consider basic, can’t wait till the higher ups start to wonder what’s going on!
11/28/2022 c25 Arclight001
That's rough. Being the only one who didn't pass. Not unexpected but rough all the same.
Still 2 more tries and shit ton of devil training to do. Not the time to sulk and throw the fight just yet.
That's rough. Being the only one who didn't pass. Not unexpected but rough all the same.
Still 2 more tries and shit ton of devil training to do. Not the time to sulk and throw the fight just yet.
11/28/2022 c26 Insame
Compared to the Harry Potter story, it's night and day of how the stories move in pace and writing. It's seems like you know nothing about Naruto.
Compared to the Harry Potter story, it's night and day of how the stories move in pace and writing. It's seems like you know nothing about Naruto.