for The Outsider's Resolve1/6 c318 Tony McNucklz
Fugaku is right. The Corruption position comes with MASSIVE lattitude and access, and more importantly protection from other village elements. It even comes with a massive boon of him getting to look at shinobi records and figure out who was and was not reliable. It might be isolating, but used right it's also a titanic power both inside the Uchiha and out. If he can get access to the B rank jutsu immediately, that plus this position on its surface seem like huge boons. When he leaves, he'll know going into any other place what sort of people he would be working with. He can carve out his own reliable agents, build a network of acfive shinobi that have his private stamp of approval. And Fugaku's gain is obvious. Having a non-Uchiha in that force significantly sabotages any claims the Corruption officers might be the Uchihas police over Village shinobi. One clan having the power to investigate like the Corruption force probably can would be irritating to other clans and regular shinobi even more than the regular Police. And Fugaku has a personal connection to the new Corruption agent, one he and his family get to personally mold.
Fugaku entering this contest for Takuma swinging haymakers.
Fugaku is right. The Corruption position comes with MASSIVE lattitude and access, and more importantly protection from other village elements. It even comes with a massive boon of him getting to look at shinobi records and figure out who was and was not reliable. It might be isolating, but used right it's also a titanic power both inside the Uchiha and out. If he can get access to the B rank jutsu immediately, that plus this position on its surface seem like huge boons. When he leaves, he'll know going into any other place what sort of people he would be working with. He can carve out his own reliable agents, build a network of acfive shinobi that have his private stamp of approval. And Fugaku's gain is obvious. Having a non-Uchiha in that force significantly sabotages any claims the Corruption officers might be the Uchihas police over Village shinobi. One clan having the power to investigate like the Corruption force probably can would be irritating to other clans and regular shinobi even more than the regular Police. And Fugaku has a personal connection to the new Corruption agent, one he and his family get to personally mold.
Fugaku entering this contest for Takuma swinging haymakers.
1/6 c60 Nofun99
If you are into reading 100k words of constant struggle and madeup canon as a baseline prologue of 2 arcs, then you are welcome to enjoy this.
I read Invicible and got the same vibes from this. Most of the characters are OC. I do not undertsand the plotline. Like what is so special about MC, apart from his knowledge. Will not continue, personally.
If you are into reading 100k words of constant struggle and madeup canon as a baseline prologue of 2 arcs, then you are welcome to enjoy this.
I read Invicible and got the same vibes from this. Most of the characters are OC. I do not undertsand the plotline. Like what is so special about MC, apart from his knowledge. Will not continue, personally.
112/31/2024 c277 CharmingButIrrational
Have you seen who the other chunin in your universe are? Are you seriously going to continue the story pretending chunin are gods instead of takuma already having done enough to be chunin 3 times over?
Have you seen who the other chunin in your universe are? Are you seriously going to continue the story pretending chunin are gods instead of takuma already having done enough to be chunin 3 times over?
12/31/2024 c317 sguti392
I cant wait to see the direction this goes! Of course i have my favorite but im honestly have no clue what direction you might take this in.
I cant wait to see the direction this goes! Of course i have my favorite but im honestly have no clue what direction you might take this in.
12/31/2024 c268 CharmingButIrrational
I cant...let me guess...when naruto is fighting kaguya takuma will be fighting the twin kids in the background as his ultime final showdown?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH holy shit you need to stop writing such funny shit before i bust a gut
I cant...let me guess...when naruto is fighting kaguya takuma will be fighting the twin kids in the background as his ultime final showdown?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH holy shit you need to stop writing such funny shit before i bust a gut
12/31/2024 c266 CharmingButIrrational
Kon is the ultimate bad guy...HAHAHAHAH holy fucking shit this is hilarious. A guy who couldnt even kill the si with 3 other shinobi with him is supposed to be this ultimate bad guy? Holy fuck you cant even keep your own made up power levels straight.
Kon is the ultimate bad guy...HAHAHAHAH holy fucking shit this is hilarious. A guy who couldnt even kill the si with 3 other shinobi with him is supposed to be this ultimate bad guy? Holy fuck you cant even keep your own made up power levels straight.
12/31/2024 c264 CharmingButIrrational
Can someone wake me up when something other than a cliche is used? Last sec save by a teammate who dies even though if you can jump in front of a sword you can also kick the person using it but suuuure lets go with this overdone storyline...what do we have next oh yeah the bad guy gets away of course even though they're bleeding heavily af in enemy territory while there's a war and it takes a second to chase him and knock him out / kill him...have you ever thought about you know thinking before you write...or i should say just copy and paste overused plotlines?
Can someone wake me up when something other than a cliche is used? Last sec save by a teammate who dies even though if you can jump in front of a sword you can also kick the person using it but suuuure lets go with this overdone storyline...what do we have next oh yeah the bad guy gets away of course even though they're bleeding heavily af in enemy territory while there's a war and it takes a second to chase him and knock him out / kill him...have you ever thought about you know thinking before you write...or i should say just copy and paste overused plotlines?
12/31/2024 c252 CharmingButIrrational
He just tried to walk out of the room he killed the yakuza leader in without checking if anyone was behind it...HHAHAHAHHAHAHA
He just tried to walk out of the room he killed the yakuza leader in without checking if anyone was behind it...HHAHAHAHHAHAHA
12/31/2024 c235 CharmingButIrrational
What a fucking idiot hahahah. Showing your face when you're supposed to be hidden. So terrible at explaining the situation. This muthafucker really went to a meeting with civilians with his real face under the mask instead of a genjutsu...i get it the character is only as smart or in this case as dumb as the writer but fucking hell this is stupid
What a fucking idiot hahahah. Showing your face when you're supposed to be hidden. So terrible at explaining the situation. This muthafucker really went to a meeting with civilians with his real face under the mask instead of a genjutsu...i get it the character is only as smart or in this case as dumb as the writer but fucking hell this is stupid
12/31/2024 c317 averywoods53
I hope he joins ANBU. There aren't many good fanfics left that focus on the ANBU, and they are probably one of my favorite types of ninja in the Naruto universe. Also, I would love to see more of a boost in strength for Takuma, but keep it realistic like you've been doing because it's great.
I hope he joins ANBU. There aren't many good fanfics left that focus on the ANBU, and they are probably one of my favorite types of ninja in the Naruto universe. Also, I would love to see more of a boost in strength for Takuma, but keep it realistic like you've been doing because it's great.
12/31/2024 c177 CharmingButIrrational
Oh so youre doubling down on your assassination plot hole...good to know
Oh so youre doubling down on your assassination plot hole...good to know