for Capital Crimes6/23 c4 lileep07
I hope all is well in your personal life. I love your stories and what you have done with the characters. I am hopeful that you will be able to finish this story.
I hope all is well in your personal life. I love your stories and what you have done with the characters. I am hopeful that you will be able to finish this story.
10/25/2023 c4 Erin Mansfield
That perfume being rose scented isn't a hint at something to come is it? Good to see Frank can do Joe's job as well!
I wonder what Joe is up too...?
I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!
That perfume being rose scented isn't a hint at something to come is it? Good to see Frank can do Joe's job as well!
I wonder what Joe is up too...?
I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!
5/14/2023 c4 caseykam
It's cute that Frank remembered Joe's trick from their school days. This story line has been good, but I kind of miss Frank taking care of Joe instead of the other way around. I guess they had to grow up sometime. As Collig said in the previous story: not "boys" but "brothers". BTW: Chona is a hoot. Keep her going. :)
It's cute that Frank remembered Joe's trick from their school days. This story line has been good, but I kind of miss Frank taking care of Joe instead of the other way around. I guess they had to grow up sometime. As Collig said in the previous story: not "boys" but "brothers". BTW: Chona is a hoot. Keep her going. :)
5/12/2023 c4 Candylou
It's good frank is starting to feel better. Also, the support system checking on frank and his health is very well arranged. Chet was the best choice for being in charge of that. It would be interesting to find out what biff said about Joe,also. Hopefully, frank is not putting too much of himself too soon. I'm not sure if any of them should take this assignment. Update as soon as you can
It's good frank is starting to feel better. Also, the support system checking on frank and his health is very well arranged. Chet was the best choice for being in charge of that. It would be interesting to find out what biff said about Joe,also. Hopefully, frank is not putting too much of himself too soon. I'm not sure if any of them should take this assignment. Update as soon as you can
5/12/2023 c4 
79Paulina Ann
Don't worry about the delay in chapters (though I do miss them!). Take care of you and the writing will be fine when you get to it. :) I really enjoyed seeing Frank's thought process as he realizes just what he did to himself in order to play the "perfect" role. I also smiled to myself about Joe's eyeball. I could completely visualize that. LOL And I too want to know what Biff told Chona. She's quite the mother hen! I'm also getting a bad vibe for Joe about that workplace. He's sensing something off... and I think he may just stick his nose where someone doesn't want it. And there's Frank half a globe away! I think Frank may have some more stress in his future. Hopefully, Biff will show up soon! I think Joe will need the backup. :) Take care!
79Paulina AnnDon't worry about the delay in chapters (though I do miss them!). Take care of you and the writing will be fine when you get to it. :) I really enjoyed seeing Frank's thought process as he realizes just what he did to himself in order to play the "perfect" role. I also smiled to myself about Joe's eyeball. I could completely visualize that. LOL And I too want to know what Biff told Chona. She's quite the mother hen! I'm also getting a bad vibe for Joe about that workplace. He's sensing something off... and I think he may just stick his nose where someone doesn't want it. And there's Frank half a globe away! I think Frank may have some more stress in his future. Hopefully, Biff will show up soon! I think Joe will need the backup. :) Take care!
5/12/2023 c4 BMSH
I like how you are putting them out of their comfort zones. It sucks about the promotion - and I'm sure it's not something you can let go. Hopefully you don't have to interact with the person who got the job. Glad you were able to find some time to write. I have no words of inspiration - work brings me down too!
I like how you are putting them out of their comfort zones. It sucks about the promotion - and I'm sure it's not something you can let go. Hopefully you don't have to interact with the person who got the job. Glad you were able to find some time to write. I have no words of inspiration - work brings me down too!
5/11/2023 c4 max2013
RL sucks sometimes-hope you've turned a corner-glad Frank is better-hope he can help Joe and Ms. Pierce-Chet is always awesome!
RL sucks sometimes-hope you've turned a corner-glad Frank is better-hope he can help Joe and Ms. Pierce-Chet is always awesome!
5/11/2023 c4 MargaretA66
So sorry about the job thing, that stinks.
I hope that last case does not haunt Frank for long. I think he needs Anna back.
So sorry about the job thing, that stinks.
I hope that last case does not haunt Frank for long. I think he needs Anna back.
2/18/2023 c3 Paulina Ann
Loved your descriptions of Joe and Chona doing the transportation. Very nice details that add a lot to the story! Poor Joe! I'm sure once he gets on the local time, he'll have a better time of it. :) Right now he's either sleeping or tired. LOL Rest up, Joe, I'm sure Leyapearl has quite a trip planned for you! And I'm looking forward to it!
Loved your descriptions of Joe and Chona doing the transportation. Very nice details that add a lot to the story! Poor Joe! I'm sure once he gets on the local time, he'll have a better time of it. :) Right now he's either sleeping or tired. LOL Rest up, Joe, I'm sure Leyapearl has quite a trip planned for you! And I'm looking forward to it!
2/16/2023 c3 Erin Mansfield
Interesting. What's next? Please update when you can, I want to see what happens.
Interesting. What's next? Please update when you can, I want to see what happens.
1/26/2023 c3 max2013
Happy for the update-love that Joe almost got water dumped on him to wake him up-very funny-what an interesting group of co-workers and one is the villian...hmmmm...
Happy for the update-love that Joe almost got water dumped on him to wake him up-very funny-what an interesting group of co-workers and one is the villian...hmmmm...
1/19/2023 c2 medalH
Kapi?Is that how Singaporean pronounce kopi? I'm a nearby neighbour but never have Singaporean as friend. I just found your fics and binge reading them all. You are awesome writer. I just love how pay attention to fine details. Thank you
Kapi?Is that how Singaporean pronounce kopi? I'm a nearby neighbour but never have Singaporean as friend. I just found your fics and binge reading them all. You are awesome writer. I just love how pay attention to fine details. Thank you
1/2/2023 c2 Paulina Ann
Really thought I had reviewed the first chapter but see that I didn't as I finally get around to reviewing this one! Was so happy to see that you are moving right along with the story and already posting so soon after Trust Issues. Looks like both Frank and Joe have some problems at the start of this one. Frank with his health and Joe with going solo in a situation that he's not quite comfortable with. I look forward to seeing how you have each brother deal with their problems. :) Looking forward to the next post!
Really thought I had reviewed the first chapter but see that I didn't as I finally get around to reviewing this one! Was so happy to see that you are moving right along with the story and already posting so soon after Trust Issues. Looks like both Frank and Joe have some problems at the start of this one. Frank with his health and Joe with going solo in a situation that he's not quite comfortable with. I look forward to seeing how you have each brother deal with their problems. :) Looking forward to the next post!