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1Sparrownightmare
wow...a lot went down here. I might want to pick your mind for some ideas on how to properly write a combat scene, if you don't mind. This is definitely one my favorites... I look forward to the next installment.
1Sparrownightmarewow...a lot went down here. I might want to pick your mind for some ideas on how to properly write a combat scene, if you don't mind. This is definitely one my favorites... I look forward to the next installment.
12/14/2024 c28 BorisCresnov
Love it! Amazing story! Please finish it to the end where their growing old with their children.
Love it! Amazing story! Please finish it to the end where their growing old with their children.
11/2/2024 c28 Anonymous
Can't wait to see more of this story!
Can't wait to see more of this story!
10/14/2024 c28 poly1
A very good story so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter although I do not want to wait however many months it will take to be published.
There is an error in this last chapter, after the chapter 28 uncensored insert, you have duplicated what was printed earlier in the chapter.
A very good story so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter although I do not want to wait however many months it will take to be published.
There is an error in this last chapter, after the chapter 28 uncensored insert, you have duplicated what was printed earlier in the chapter.
10/5/2024 c16 Guest
So they got away from r*pe attempt but Harry ran away so it's going to happen again. Brilliant. I'm certainly not looking forward to it.
Also, I hope they stop being horny now that they made love. Every single time, they're horny all the time. They were turning into voyeurs if you didn't notice. Jeez, some things are not meant to be shared.
So they got away from r*pe attempt but Harry ran away so it's going to happen again. Brilliant. I'm certainly not looking forward to it.
Also, I hope they stop being horny now that they made love. Every single time, they're horny all the time. They were turning into voyeurs if you didn't notice. Jeez, some things are not meant to be shared.
10/3/2024 c13 Guest
It's uncanny how Fleur is surprisingly calm at the prospect of being mind controlled. In fact she just experienced being mind enslaved and while she was shocked at first she acted like it never happened moments later, if not for Harry being alert. Am I the only one panicking here?
It's uncanny how Fleur is surprisingly calm at the prospect of being mind controlled. In fact she just experienced being mind enslaved and while she was shocked at first she acted like it never happened moments later, if not for Harry being alert. Am I the only one panicking here?