for The Hope of the Namikaze Clan6/27/2024 c11 Narwin92
keep the pairing with just the three. Naruto x Sakura x Ino has so much potential to work with
keep the pairing with just the three. Naruto x Sakura x Ino has so much potential to work with
6/26/2024 c3 football78
Ok so Minato and Obito 2 of the strongest ninja alive couldn't beat the akatsuki that literally either one could beat in thier sleep so everyone in the leaf villiage has been nerfed and sucks got it.
Ok so Minato and Obito 2 of the strongest ninja alive couldn't beat the akatsuki that literally either one could beat in thier sleep so everyone in the leaf villiage has been nerfed and sucks got it.
6/26/2024 c2 football78
Um Mebuki sould have been executed by now. I really hate how you wrote the ninja of this village and i hate how you wrote Kushina.
Um Mebuki sould have been executed by now. I really hate how you wrote the ninja of this village and i hate how you wrote Kushina.
6/26/2024 c1 football78
You mean to tell me Hiruzen and itachi couldnt stop one jonin from attacking naruto and sakura. 2 s rank ninja
You mean to tell me Hiruzen and itachi couldnt stop one jonin from attacking naruto and sakura. 2 s rank ninja
6/26/2024 c1 football78
Why is Kushina's charecter so psychologically and emotional weak in this, this is a person who is known for her fiery behavior and her strength as a ninja
Why is Kushina's charecter so psychologically and emotional weak in this, this is a person who is known for her fiery behavior and her strength as a ninja
6/25/2024 c11 solitare1
I definitely agree with you too it's definitely enough to start to plan all over again you don't need a whole bunch of women to problematic. Plus, you should save some women for the rest of the group I mean you have more boys there to know make the clan bigger.
I definitely agree with you too it's definitely enough to start to plan all over again you don't need a whole bunch of women to problematic. Plus, you should save some women for the rest of the group I mean you have more boys there to know make the clan bigger.
6/25/2024 c11 Guest
Having it strictly Naruto x sakura x ino be great in my opinion especially with the connections and history these 3 alone share and how much they have in common and u could rewrite some of the chapters so it be bit better and have it make more sense for the 3 of them plus having it just sakura and ino with Naruto would definitely make it alot easier for u instead of having alot of girls plus Sakura and ino are definitely my favorite girls who I like seeing being paired up with him and those two can definitely make things more entertaining and fun when it's just them with Naruto and another thing that should change in the story is have both sakura and ino be nice to Naruto and not act like fan girls like they done at the beginning of the story because of sauske also make them not have crushes on sauske but on Naruto instead and they become his friend also act like there trueslves and not act like a useless stupid fan girl like we seen in the anime that's the one thing I hated about ino and sakura especially when they were around sauske it was even worse for them
Having it strictly Naruto x sakura x ino be great in my opinion especially with the connections and history these 3 alone share and how much they have in common and u could rewrite some of the chapters so it be bit better and have it make more sense for the 3 of them plus having it just sakura and ino with Naruto would definitely make it alot easier for u instead of having alot of girls plus Sakura and ino are definitely my favorite girls who I like seeing being paired up with him and those two can definitely make things more entertaining and fun when it's just them with Naruto and another thing that should change in the story is have both sakura and ino be nice to Naruto and not act like fan girls like they done at the beginning of the story because of sauske also make them not have crushes on sauske but on Naruto instead and they become his friend also act like there trueslves and not act like a useless stupid fan girl like we seen in the anime that's the one thing I hated about ino and sakura especially when they were around sauske it was even worse for them
10/15/2023 c1 Guest
Why so many stories giving Naruto a harem? The only thing that's going to happen is you're going to burn out from writing, and I won't be surprised... Just the idea of crafting a plot for each character in the harem gives me a headache. It's no coincidence that the best stories on this site are all monogamous.
Why so many stories giving Naruto a harem? The only thing that's going to happen is you're going to burn out from writing, and I won't be surprised... Just the idea of crafting a plot for each character in the harem gives me a headache. It's no coincidence that the best stories on this site are all monogamous.
10/7/2023 c1 NaruCrazy
Why do you keep writing your opinion after everything? Its your fic, you know what is going to happen. You are basically spoiling your own fic by giving spoilers.
Some no name ANBU said something that would make Madara shiver from fear... facepalm.
You really need a beta reader.
Why do you keep writing your opinion after everything? Its your fic, you know what is going to happen. You are basically spoiling your own fic by giving spoilers.
Some no name ANBU said something that would make Madara shiver from fear... facepalm.
You really need a beta reader.
10/3/2023 c9 Guest
Could you add ayme she's the girl who and her father who has been giving Naruto his favorite food since they first met and who's like a sister to Naruto) amaru sasame shizuka Sara(lost tower movie) and ten ten
Could you add ayme she's the girl who and her father who has been giving Naruto his favorite food since they first met and who's like a sister to Naruto) amaru sasame shizuka Sara(lost tower movie) and ten ten
10/3/2023 c2 equinoxhun
God see my soul a tried several times, but the dialogues are so ooc. Danzo, Hiruzen, and random nursees cussing like a sailor for no reason. It is not funny or edgy its just cringe. Itachi speaking about nukeing konoha . How do they know what a nuke is. This fic is not for me.
God see my soul a tried several times, but the dialogues are so ooc. Danzo, Hiruzen, and random nursees cussing like a sailor for no reason. It is not funny or edgy its just cringe. Itachi speaking about nukeing konoha . How do they know what a nuke is. This fic is not for me.
10/2/2023 c10 UnsanMusho
Always prioritize your actual real life obligations dude. Wish you the best of luck in Med School.
Always prioritize your actual real life obligations dude. Wish you the best of luck in Med School.