for Dragon of the morning5/6 c21 Guest
this is an awesome story
this is an awesome story
5/1 c13 Dretnuh
I am so confused. You said in that one AN that you went through and changed everything to say Ned claimed Jon/ Daemon as his own and not Brandon’s. Yet, every time someone talks about him, they say he’s Brandon’s….?
I am so confused. You said in that one AN that you went through and changed everything to say Ned claimed Jon/ Daemon as his own and not Brandon’s. Yet, every time someone talks about him, they say he’s Brandon’s….?
4/29 c6 Dretnuh
Okay wait…. So the whole part where Ned just decided to call him Jon Snow and claim him as his own is being retconned? Lmao
Okay wait…. So the whole part where Ned just decided to call him Jon Snow and claim him as his own is being retconned? Lmao
4/29 c6 Dretnuh
Who tf is Darian….? Because as far as I remember Jon Snow is Jon Snow in this…. And his real name is Daemon…. Soooooo?
Who tf is Darian….? Because as far as I remember Jon Snow is Jon Snow in this…. And his real name is Daemon…. Soooooo?
4/6 c21 Guest
this is an awesome story. please don't stop writing.
this is an awesome story. please don't stop writing.
4/2 c21 Dragon Whistler
I have read this story more than 3 times and absolutely love it. I cannot wait for your next update but true genius and inspiration to get the next the chapter right takes time. Till next time!
I have read this story more than 3 times and absolutely love it. I cannot wait for your next update but true genius and inspiration to get the next the chapter right takes time. Till next time!
3/30 c21 Guest
this is an awesome fic. I hope you continue to write. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
this is an awesome fic. I hope you continue to write. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
3/23 c1 
1LuminouShadowAlt
First: nothing breaks the immersion faster than a 40 year old man blushing.
Second: While canon harry does have saving people thing or as Dumbledore says doing the right thing rather than the easy thing, but clearly your Harry doesn't. Your Harry decided live his own life with his family isolated from the ministry and the wizard world, unlike canon harry who wanted and did become an Auror. So the decision to go with Death's plan is not something your Harry would have done inplace of finally reuniting with his family.
Third: His wife was pregnant when she died so clearly their marriage was a loving one. So him not even try to ask if not the others than atleast bringing Ginny should be allowed. Even if she refuses it atleast he would have asked. But this harry didn't even do that for one thing both canon Harry or your harry wished and would have died for- FAMILY.
1LuminouShadowAltFirst: nothing breaks the immersion faster than a 40 year old man blushing.
Second: While canon harry does have saving people thing or as Dumbledore says doing the right thing rather than the easy thing, but clearly your Harry doesn't. Your Harry decided live his own life with his family isolated from the ministry and the wizard world, unlike canon harry who wanted and did become an Auror. So the decision to go with Death's plan is not something your Harry would have done inplace of finally reuniting with his family.
Third: His wife was pregnant when she died so clearly their marriage was a loving one. So him not even try to ask if not the others than atleast bringing Ginny should be allowed. Even if she refuses it atleast he would have asked. But this harry didn't even do that for one thing both canon Harry or your harry wished and would have died for- FAMILY.
3/22 c6 Freund99
In this chapter is still a small error. In chapter 6 eddard stark claims daemon as the son of brandon and in the latest chapters you wirte that he claims him as his bastad. Other than this small error great story and cant wait for anptzer update.
In this chapter is still a small error. In chapter 6 eddard stark claims daemon as the son of brandon and in the latest chapters you wirte that he claims him as his bastad. Other than this small error great story and cant wait for anptzer update.
3/11 c21 Seananagan
Really hoping this gets updated again soon, i like where it is going. I know alliances are often forged by marriage but I still kind of hope you pair him with Dany. Thanks for sharing your writing!
Really hoping this gets updated again soon, i like where it is going. I know alliances are often forged by marriage but I still kind of hope you pair him with Dany. Thanks for sharing your writing!
3/10 c6 Seananagan
It is a bit confusing that in some chapters he is Jon, Ned's bastard, but in the one where they discussed the plan and this one he isn't. I kind of hope you go back and edit to correct this since I can possibly see myself going back to this for rereads as it gets updated.
It is a bit confusing that in some chapters he is Jon, Ned's bastard, but in the one where they discussed the plan and this one he isn't. I kind of hope you go back and edit to correct this since I can possibly see myself going back to this for rereads as it gets updated.
3/1 c1 KaijuPrime
Stop starting your sentences with "And." It's a conjunction word meant to combine two sentences not start one.
Stop starting your sentences with "And." It's a conjunction word meant to combine two sentences not start one.
2/27 c21 Immaterium
Great chapter, Ned really needs to think about the bigger picture... I look forward for them to visit the Wall
Great chapter, Ned really needs to think about the bigger picture... I look forward for them to visit the Wall