for To Love a Sword11/21/2022 c1 angrycritique
This is going to test Emiya's sanity in a different way. In the future Lala is going to be the least of his worry, instead he should be worried about her sister Momo.
Emiya may actually hep Rito hookup with the other girl this time.
Rito in canon was very indecisive the engagement but if Archer takes his place here. Then he may actually seriously consider it and have no issues with it. Not his first Rodeo with weird happenings.
1. Angering a Princess of an empire that can blow up earth. Bad.
2. Killing her. Bad end for Earth.
3. Making her dad accept the marriage. That's probably the most normal thing in this situation. Considering how the world is nonchalant about aliens. I don't think the world would be the same if the Aliens just went a drive by in the middle of the day like in canon.
4. Rito was indecisive in canon because of lol"Japanese Anti-polygamy law". Emiya has lived eons and could careless about these laws in the first place. The safety of his family is above those laws, and as the Emperor of the Galaxy hahaha. Galactic laws are significantly more important that what one one tiny country on Earth says what the laws he should follow.
This is going to test Emiya's sanity in a different way. In the future Lala is going to be the least of his worry, instead he should be worried about her sister Momo.
Emiya may actually hep Rito hookup with the other girl this time.
Rito in canon was very indecisive the engagement but if Archer takes his place here. Then he may actually seriously consider it and have no issues with it. Not his first Rodeo with weird happenings.
1. Angering a Princess of an empire that can blow up earth. Bad.
2. Killing her. Bad end for Earth.
3. Making her dad accept the marriage. That's probably the most normal thing in this situation. Considering how the world is nonchalant about aliens. I don't think the world would be the same if the Aliens just went a drive by in the middle of the day like in canon.
4. Rito was indecisive in canon because of lol"Japanese Anti-polygamy law". Emiya has lived eons and could careless about these laws in the first place. The safety of his family is above those laws, and as the Emperor of the Galaxy hahaha. Galactic laws are significantly more important that what one one tiny country on Earth says what the laws he should follow.
11/21/2022 c1 Kamisato Kakeru
also maybe proof read first for spellings and grammar mistakes, just a suggestion, keep up the good work (also waiting for the kuroinu crossover update)
also maybe proof read first for spellings and grammar mistakes, just a suggestion, keep up the good work (also waiting for the kuroinu crossover update)
11/21/2022 c1 Kamisato Kakeru
this has potential, hoping it doesnt get axed or abandoned, ill come back once there are more chapters released...i want more chaos :V
this has potential, hoping it doesnt get axed or abandoned, ill come back once there are more chapters released...i want more chaos :V
11/21/2022 c1 
1Black Fire Born
Well, it's interesting, very interesting, the only thing that maybe I don't like much is that because of the universe Shirou is in right now, everything would be a romantic comedy with a bit of WTF sprinkled on top, if you can balance Action , romance, and just a little comedy would be great!
1Black Fire BornWell, it's interesting, very interesting, the only thing that maybe I don't like much is that because of the universe Shirou is in right now, everything would be a romantic comedy with a bit of WTF sprinkled on top, if you can balance Action , romance, and just a little comedy would be great!
11/20/2022 c1 keybladelight
The story his like the writter bad grammar with Heaven's Feel shirou that failed to save Sakura Matou but I guess this one his with EMIYA which is really curious how you gonna do different since EMIYA well hope he has all the memories of his life of other timelines Fate, UBW, HF when he was summon always in the fifth holy grail war and his own time of that he became a Hero well a CG.
You are now the third author that I read that his doing a to love ru crossover with Fate series.
Hope EMIYA get his dark skin and white hair and steel eyes again because seeing him go back being Shirou his weird so I wonder how you gonna make a ex counter guardian live a normal life and fall in love with the to love ru girls where he has failed in his timeline with a certain beauty king of knights.
The difference is that with you and bad grammar his that he has choose female Rito while you choose the male Rito his so funny to read that their are the same person but with a different gender in different stories.
The story his like the writter bad grammar with Heaven's Feel shirou that failed to save Sakura Matou but I guess this one his with EMIYA which is really curious how you gonna do different since EMIYA well hope he has all the memories of his life of other timelines Fate, UBW, HF when he was summon always in the fifth holy grail war and his own time of that he became a Hero well a CG.
You are now the third author that I read that his doing a to love ru crossover with Fate series.
Hope EMIYA get his dark skin and white hair and steel eyes again because seeing him go back being Shirou his weird so I wonder how you gonna make a ex counter guardian live a normal life and fall in love with the to love ru girls where he has failed in his timeline with a certain beauty king of knights.
The difference is that with you and bad grammar his that he has choose female Rito while you choose the male Rito his so funny to read that their are the same person but with a different gender in different stories.
11/20/2022 c1 E
EMIYA has no idea how much insanity lies ahead of him in the future, Lala and especially Momo is going test the limits of his patience well as sanity and am not even including Mea and Nemesis given that the two would be a long way off from being introduced unless they come in much earlier than usual.
Depending how Lala’s fiancé’s acts, some of them might end up with a few swords in unpleasant places.
Yui and EMIYA are certainly going get along well, can see EMIYA snarks at while her while Yui blushed and tell him to cut it out while EMIYA rolls his eyes smirking thinking such a tsundere that she is.
EMIYA has no idea how much insanity lies ahead of him in the future, Lala and especially Momo is going test the limits of his patience well as sanity and am not even including Mea and Nemesis given that the two would be a long way off from being introduced unless they come in much earlier than usual.
Depending how Lala’s fiancé’s acts, some of them might end up with a few swords in unpleasant places.
Yui and EMIYA are certainly going get along well, can see EMIYA snarks at while her while Yui blushed and tell him to cut it out while EMIYA rolls his eyes smirking thinking such a tsundere that she is.
11/19/2022 c1 Mugen-Blade
Well, it is nice to see people still working with To Love Ru, not many of those nowadays and having EMIYA here feels like an interesting idea to see.
Some corrections though:
1- Thats Servant EMIYA not CG EMIYA and very much like with all the other Servants summoned in a Grail War, he is just a copy of the original in the Throne and whatever happens to this copy, it wouldnt affect the original in any way shape or form beside giving him a rather amusing set of memories upon death.
2- He wouldnt blame Alaya for any of this because the CF is very a no nonsense system that doesnt work like that and he is(or was) Servant, so his soul isnt attached to the CF like his original to be led around by it to end up in a situation like that either.
Well, thats all. Thanks for the chapter.
Well, it is nice to see people still working with To Love Ru, not many of those nowadays and having EMIYA here feels like an interesting idea to see.
Some corrections though:
1- Thats Servant EMIYA not CG EMIYA and very much like with all the other Servants summoned in a Grail War, he is just a copy of the original in the Throne and whatever happens to this copy, it wouldnt affect the original in any way shape or form beside giving him a rather amusing set of memories upon death.
2- He wouldnt blame Alaya for any of this because the CF is very a no nonsense system that doesnt work like that and he is(or was) Servant, so his soul isnt attached to the CF like his original to be led around by it to end up in a situation like that either.
Well, thats all. Thanks for the chapter.
11/19/2022 c1 Guest
Very interesting I do love how Nimthewriter creates their stories so far and I believe this story will also become something that fans will praise.
Very interesting I do love how Nimthewriter creates their stories so far and I believe this story will also become something that fans will praise.
11/19/2022 c1 PSYCongroo
Honestly, I like Archer as a protagonist more than Shirou, it's not that I dislike Shirou, I just want Archer to have some happiness, the guy deserves it.
This is a good start, let's wait for chapter 2 to see the differences that Archer will make, I can already imagine Archer telling the father some stories of the heroic spirits of his previous world so that he can make them a manga or maybe some variation of the Fifth Grail War, a guaranteed success.
Honestly, I like Archer as a protagonist more than Shirou, it's not that I dislike Shirou, I just want Archer to have some happiness, the guy deserves it.
This is a good start, let's wait for chapter 2 to see the differences that Archer will make, I can already imagine Archer telling the father some stories of the heroic spirits of his previous world so that he can make them a manga or maybe some variation of the Fifth Grail War, a guaranteed success.
11/19/2022 c1 daalrece23
Gran capítulo una buena historia y me divirtió la reacción de Emiya chiquito.
Gran capítulo una buena historia y me divirtió la reacción de Emiya chiquito.