for Argus Magus - case Atlas10/1 c30 philosopher13
First i am a fan of your story its great continue the good job. Secondly your previous story magus of dust wasn't bad per say but you messed up when Rin summoned a servant the problem with that was the difference of power of a servant and a hunter even someone weak as Jason can defeat most hunters and we don't speak about top tiers servants here all of them can solo the RWBY. This is the reason why most crossovers fail powerlevels are important as long as you are mindful of that the quality of your story will not decline.
First i am a fan of your story its great continue the good job. Secondly your previous story magus of dust wasn't bad per say but you messed up when Rin summoned a servant the problem with that was the difference of power of a servant and a hunter even someone weak as Jason can defeat most hunters and we don't speak about top tiers servants here all of them can solo the RWBY. This is the reason why most crossovers fail powerlevels are important as long as you are mindful of that the quality of your story will not decline.
10/1 c30 philosopher13
First of all i am a fan of your story its truly good and definitely an improvement from your previous story. When you are writing a crossover the most difficult part is the power levels of the universes that you want to combine such as some crossovers are impossible to write at all whithout them been categorised as cracfics. Magus of dust was a good story and especially i liked the interaction that Rin had with Yang but when Rin summoned
First of all i am a fan of your story its truly good and definitely an improvement from your previous story. When you are writing a crossover the most difficult part is the power levels of the universes that you want to combine such as some crossovers are impossible to write at all whithout them been categorised as cracfics. Magus of dust was a good story and especially i liked the interaction that Rin had with Yang but when Rin summoned
8/16 c28 
1framfrit
Rin is right to not trust them possibly due to retcons the Ainsworth constantly lie. For example aside from them all having different intentions and separate plans Pandora lied here because Julain can bust open with pithos with force on his own as can others using the cards they needed the grail for the wish to deal with the contents that will destroy the world though.
There's also the large problem of Darius's corruption and just their attitude in general of not being good to their allies and what they did to canon Miyuverse Sakura and Prillya Rin.
1framfritRin is right to not trust them possibly due to retcons the Ainsworth constantly lie. For example aside from them all having different intentions and separate plans Pandora lied here because Julain can bust open with pithos with force on his own as can others using the cards they needed the grail for the wish to deal with the contents that will destroy the world though.
There's also the large problem of Darius's corruption and just their attitude in general of not being good to their allies and what they did to canon Miyuverse Sakura and Prillya Rin.
8/16 c26 BlindAsABat95
As much as I enjoy Remnant Holy Grail Wars (because it means that the cast get smacked in the face by what it means to be real heroes from real heroes. Sometimes, they even learn from it *le gasp*), I can completely understand your reasoning. I have never seen Prisma Illya because the lewded loli's squicked me TF out, but the Class Cards have always sounded fascinating.
...also, that bit about Rin returning to Earth? *Very* interesting.
As much as I enjoy Remnant Holy Grail Wars (because it means that the cast get smacked in the face by what it means to be real heroes from real heroes. Sometimes, they even learn from it *le gasp*), I can completely understand your reasoning. I have never seen Prisma Illya because the lewded loli's squicked me TF out, but the Class Cards have always sounded fascinating.
...also, that bit about Rin returning to Earth? *Very* interesting.
8/15 c27 1Waterflames3
This was not what I was expecting. I was expecting Darius, not Pandora… but if this is the world that within the box, then what does it mean for Darius and his plans? I already suspected that this was the world within the box. 6000 years is a very specific number and the Noble Phantasms, as well as other factors did give away what was going on. In all honesty, props to you for managing this all, I thought that Jax was the possessed one, not Gillian. So what’s Pandora’s plan now? I have a suspicion that she intends to bring somebody back from the Miyuverse, and I’m guessing it’s most likely Darius or Illya, but I’m leaning towards Darius in this situation. I’m looking forward to seeing more about this.
1Waterflames3This was not what I was expecting. I was expecting Darius, not Pandora… but if this is the world that within the box, then what does it mean for Darius and his plans? I already suspected that this was the world within the box. 6000 years is a very specific number and the Noble Phantasms, as well as other factors did give away what was going on. In all honesty, props to you for managing this all, I thought that Jax was the possessed one, not Gillian. So what’s Pandora’s plan now? I have a suspicion that she intends to bring somebody back from the Miyuverse, and I’m guessing it’s most likely Darius or Illya, but I’m leaning towards Darius in this situation. I’m looking forward to seeing more about this.
8/15 c22 Waterflames3
I KNEW IT! It is Darius! Authoritarian Personalism was an NP he used during one of his first appearances. The Headless Giants’ King is another reference to Darius. I thought they had some lesser connection to Darius, but to think that Jax might be possessed… this is really interesting, in all honest. I wanna see how this unfolds.
I KNEW IT! It is Darius! Authoritarian Personalism was an NP he used during one of his first appearances. The Headless Giants’ King is another reference to Darius. I thought they had some lesser connection to Darius, but to think that Jax might be possessed… this is really interesting, in all honest. I wanna see how this unfolds.
8/15 c10 1Waterflames3
This is interesting… now, why is Authoritarian Personalism here? This just confirms that Jax and the Crown have some connection to Darius and his works… the riddle does point to an interesting possibility, but I’ll have to continue reading to see what goes down.
1Waterflames3This is interesting… now, why is Authoritarian Personalism here? This just confirms that Jax and the Crown have some connection to Darius and his works… the riddle does point to an interesting possibility, but I’ll have to continue reading to see what goes down.
8/15 c8 Waterflames3
Headless giants’ king, huh… very interesting. If this is referring to what I think it is, then I’m very surprised to find it here. I wasn’t expecting a reference to that of all things.
Headless giants’ king, huh… very interesting. If this is referring to what I think it is, then I’m very surprised to find it here. I wasn’t expecting a reference to that of all things.
8/15 c27 2Frank-K-L
Since I'm not particularly familiar with Prisma, so I know very little about the Ainzworth or Pandora, but I'm excited to see more.
2Frank-K-LSince I'm not particularly familiar with Prisma, so I know very little about the Ainzworth or Pandora, but I'm excited to see more.
8/15 c27 1samuel lilithson
amazing, I definitely did not expect this. Very good. thanks for the story
1samuel lilithsonamazing, I definitely did not expect this. Very good. thanks for the story