for Life Goes On6/18 c1 alexqjonathan
This is one of those stories that pulls you in right away whether it’s the characters, the vibe,or the ideas behind it. It’s fun, it’s thoughtful, and it really sticks with you. No matter what you’re into, there’s something here that’ll catch your eye.
This is one of those stories that pulls you in right away whether it’s the characters, the vibe,or the ideas behind it. It’s fun, it’s thoughtful, and it really sticks with you. No matter what you’re into, there’s something here that’ll catch your eye.
5/30/2024 c1 
23ArctisShox
You seem to have some issues with not using commas where they're needed, especially in cases of parenthetical expressions. You also have some issues with having sentences that are only made up of dependent clauses. Remember, all sentences require an independent clause to be considered complete. There are also some issues here where you used "you're" rather than "your." Remember, "you're" is a contraction between the words you and are. There's probably a myriad of other issues I couldn't be bothered to read.
Rather than wasting your time patronisingly criticising my grammar, consider revising your own first. People who live in glass houses and all that.
23ArctisShoxYou seem to have some issues with not using commas where they're needed, especially in cases of parenthetical expressions. You also have some issues with having sentences that are only made up of dependent clauses. Remember, all sentences require an independent clause to be considered complete. There are also some issues here where you used "you're" rather than "your." Remember, "you're" is a contraction between the words you and are. There's probably a myriad of other issues I couldn't be bothered to read.
Rather than wasting your time patronisingly criticising my grammar, consider revising your own first. People who live in glass houses and all that.
5/16/2023 c1 Guest
Cute
Cute
3/31/2023 c1 4GinnyPotter6891
Very cute one-shot! Don't know how I missed your posting this, but I'm glad to see you haven't given up writing fanfiction.
4GinnyPotter6891Very cute one-shot! Don't know how I missed your posting this, but I'm glad to see you haven't given up writing fanfiction.
12/31/2022 c1 Guest
Amazing! I really enjoyed this!
Amazing! I really enjoyed this!
12/19/2022 c1 MissKnowItAll
Perfect. Just Perfect. I have no other words.
Perfect. Just Perfect. I have no other words.
12/6/2022 c1 lojosmom
Welcome back! I was thrilled when I found this. There is something special about the way you write Hinny stories that I always enjoy.
Welcome back! I was thrilled when I found this. There is something special about the way you write Hinny stories that I always enjoy.
12/2/2022 c1 caro
ESTO MERECE UN CAPITULO 2
ESTO MERECE UN CAPITULO 2
12/4/2022 c1 3mdauben
A lovely little reunion fic! I'm sure Ginny would be upset with Harry after everything that happened, but she was still worried about him. Thanks for sharing!
3mdaubenA lovely little reunion fic! I'm sure Ginny would be upset with Harry after everything that happened, but she was still worried about him. Thanks for sharing!
11/30/2022 c1 PunksterNL
Don't quite get why both Ginny and Pomfrey are basically mean and uncaring towards him, treating him with disregard for his state of mind and injuries.
Ginny purposefully makes him laugh and then scolds him for doing so. Which is a bit wtf.
Pomfrey should be aware of what's happened and still manages to ask him what 'he's gotten himself into'? Also very wtf.
There's a line between fiery and assertive, and violent and abusive, and I fear this one is on the wrong side. Which I say within the context of counting many of your stories among my favourites.
Just an opinion though.
Cheers!
Don't quite get why both Ginny and Pomfrey are basically mean and uncaring towards him, treating him with disregard for his state of mind and injuries.
Ginny purposefully makes him laugh and then scolds him for doing so. Which is a bit wtf.
Pomfrey should be aware of what's happened and still manages to ask him what 'he's gotten himself into'? Also very wtf.
There's a line between fiery and assertive, and violent and abusive, and I fear this one is on the wrong side. Which I say within the context of counting many of your stories among my favourites.
Just an opinion though.
Cheers!
11/26/2022 c1 scrappy8
great job
great job