for Two Unbowed Crows4/22 c29 Sahamosveb
The author of this fanfic is definitely talented. I have never felt such a vivid disgust for Daphne Greengrass and Potter. Not in any other fanfic. Daphne is just a piece of shit willing to do anything for herself and some superficial and empty goals under the guise of ‘The bad system must be destroyed’. And Potter is an absolutely pathetic simp who is willing to go to any lowlife for the sake of the girl who smiled at him.
I'm telling the truth, not many authors can write about antagonists for long without trying to whitewash them or make them appealing to the reader. The author is really Very talented!
The author of this fanfic is definitely talented. I have never felt such a vivid disgust for Daphne Greengrass and Potter. Not in any other fanfic. Daphne is just a piece of shit willing to do anything for herself and some superficial and empty goals under the guise of ‘The bad system must be destroyed’. And Potter is an absolutely pathetic simp who is willing to go to any lowlife for the sake of the girl who smiled at him.
I'm telling the truth, not many authors can write about antagonists for long without trying to whitewash them or make them appealing to the reader. The author is really Very talented!
3/30 c33 Ashboi2611
Okay so it seems I’ve put my foot in my mouth too soon, that being said I think the point still applies with their practice early on being on conjured animals.
Okay so it seems I’ve put my foot in my mouth too soon, that being said I think the point still applies with their practice early on being on conjured animals.
3/30 c33 Ashboi2611
With conjured animals how would that “feed” the impetus? A lot of the early blood magic before had to do with the spirit within, that seems to imply the soul (further seen by Daphne’s disdain for horcruxes) so do conjured animals have souls? I would imagine they don’t as if wizards had the ability to just create a soul willy-nilly there would be a dozen and a half Voldemorts throughout the years harnessing those souls
With conjured animals how would that “feed” the impetus? A lot of the early blood magic before had to do with the spirit within, that seems to imply the soul (further seen by Daphne’s disdain for horcruxes) so do conjured animals have souls? I would imagine they don’t as if wizards had the ability to just create a soul willy-nilly there would be a dozen and a half Voldemorts throughout the years harnessing those souls
3/11 c45 
9zugrian
It's really interesting seeing how their little group is starting to grow- Tracey feels like she's becoming sort of a Bellatrix analogue in her dedication to following Daphne & Harry.
Harry's thoughts about his parents and how they might feel about him were very nicely done & I love how you've kept up this balance with the portrayal of Dumbledore, who is trying his best in spite of how betrayed & angry Harry and Daphne secretly are.
Keep up the great work! :)
9zugrianIt's really interesting seeing how their little group is starting to grow- Tracey feels like she's becoming sort of a Bellatrix analogue in her dedication to following Daphne & Harry.
Harry's thoughts about his parents and how they might feel about him were very nicely done & I love how you've kept up this balance with the portrayal of Dumbledore, who is trying his best in spite of how betrayed & angry Harry and Daphne secretly are.
Keep up the great work! :)
3/11 c45 Sophiamay
Hello! I wanted to say how much I admire your writing—it’s truly captivating. I think your story has incredible potential for a comic adaptation, and I’d love to help bring that vision to life.
I’m a commission-based digital artist who collaborates with authors to create visually stunning comics. If this idea resonates with you, I’d be thrilled to discuss the project further.
Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90) if you’re interested in exploring this collaboration. Let’s create something amazing together!
Hello! I wanted to say how much I admire your writing—it’s truly captivating. I think your story has incredible potential for a comic adaptation, and I’d love to help bring that vision to life.
I’m a commission-based digital artist who collaborates with authors to create visually stunning comics. If this idea resonates with you, I’d be thrilled to discuss the project further.
Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90) if you’re interested in exploring this collaboration. Let’s create something amazing together!
3/10 c45 2uchiha cat
Honestly, Dumbledore isn't that far off when he considers our two crows like him and grindelwald, he is just wrong on what choice will be made. Though admittedly, an argument could certainly be made that life under Harry and Daphne may actually be a lot better than under the current ministry. Hermione and Ron should be now have given up on Harry. It's honestly kind of funny watching them desperately try to convince harry to see their point of view, something made even funnier because it's not entirely clear what their point of view is other than Daphne being a bad influence. In the mean time you can see just how bloodlusted Daphne has truly become, saying that Pansy should be grateful to still breath just because Daphne finds her a bit better than Draco. I am definitely seeing Tracey becoming the next Bellatrix LeStrange.
On another note I like seeing the subtly signs of just how incredibly powerful they have become, with Daphne casually performing wandless non-verbal healing to an incredible degree on Tracey there at the end. Not to mention the absurdity of crow magic, dear God that has to be terrifying for susan to just realize she was magically disarmed by a freaking bird of some kind. I am curious as to what will happen next, because this is certainly the calm before the storm, but with Cannon being thrown out I truly have no idea what to expect next. A great chapter, and I love how Susan and Neville think they haven't sold their souls yet when its pretty clear that they have, though not to the same degree as Tracey. As always I look forward to seeing what happens next.
2uchiha catHonestly, Dumbledore isn't that far off when he considers our two crows like him and grindelwald, he is just wrong on what choice will be made. Though admittedly, an argument could certainly be made that life under Harry and Daphne may actually be a lot better than under the current ministry. Hermione and Ron should be now have given up on Harry. It's honestly kind of funny watching them desperately try to convince harry to see their point of view, something made even funnier because it's not entirely clear what their point of view is other than Daphne being a bad influence. In the mean time you can see just how bloodlusted Daphne has truly become, saying that Pansy should be grateful to still breath just because Daphne finds her a bit better than Draco. I am definitely seeing Tracey becoming the next Bellatrix LeStrange.
On another note I like seeing the subtly signs of just how incredibly powerful they have become, with Daphne casually performing wandless non-verbal healing to an incredible degree on Tracey there at the end. Not to mention the absurdity of crow magic, dear God that has to be terrifying for susan to just realize she was magically disarmed by a freaking bird of some kind. I am curious as to what will happen next, because this is certainly the calm before the storm, but with Cannon being thrown out I truly have no idea what to expect next. A great chapter, and I love how Susan and Neville think they haven't sold their souls yet when its pretty clear that they have, though not to the same degree as Tracey. As always I look forward to seeing what happens next.
3/8 c44 Zenith97
Really great chapter. Starting to really like the new gang you’ve made. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Really great chapter. Starting to really like the new gang you’ve made. Can’t wait to see what happens next
2/19 c30 4JoshPlater
This has to be one if the most unique fics ive read in quite some time. I dont think ive ever seen Sirius kissed before, and I definitely have never seen a 'bad' Madame Bones before, I really like it.
4JoshPlaterThis has to be one if the most unique fics ive read in quite some time. I dont think ive ever seen Sirius kissed before, and I definitely have never seen a 'bad' Madame Bones before, I really like it.
1/28 c44 Guest
How is Ron the most reasonable person in this entire fic I still don't know
How is Ron the most reasonable person in this entire fic I still don't know
1/26 c44 BMS
Another good one.
Loved how Daphne added that yet when she agreed they didn't have to kneel. 8)
Another good one.
Loved how Daphne added that yet when she agreed they didn't have to kneel. 8)