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11/30/2022 c1 simm36
Las series viejas de Disney son mejores que la basura que crean ahora de contenido.
Fue una buena historia.
11/30/2022 c1 Soulless titan
This is a nice story but just a few tips.

You don’t need to put a dash before every paragraph unless you’re having the characters text each other then you would put the name and dash (Ronhey KP)

Another thing don’t be afraid to let an entire chapter take up a page, you squeezed your whole story in the first page, you should let your story breath and grow

But other than that you have a really nice story we’ll done.

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