for Understanding Does Not Presage Peace5/14 c17 LongSongSilver
nah. the inability to clearly write any action scene is whats going to make or break the novel.
when its focused and limited in scope the writing is fine, but when it reaches a bit to far trying to cover a large group of people or depict a tense fight it really starts to dip in quality.
nah. the inability to clearly write any action scene is whats going to make or break the novel.
when its focused and limited in scope the writing is fine, but when it reaches a bit to far trying to cover a large group of people or depict a tense fight it really starts to dip in quality.
5/14 c16 LongSongSilver
Just cant stop with this weird format can you?
pov 1/narrator
pov2 /actual story
pov1
pov2
...
nothing is gained by doing it this way, the narrator style sections could easily be an inital block of text all by itself, then the rest following after its done. Instead we get this confusing jumble of story that doesnt let you focus on anything. like a conversation where people are talking over each other instead of taking turn to speak.
Just cant stop with this weird format can you?
pov 1/narrator
pov2 /actual story
pov1
pov2
...
nothing is gained by doing it this way, the narrator style sections could easily be an inital block of text all by itself, then the rest following after its done. Instead we get this confusing jumble of story that doesnt let you focus on anything. like a conversation where people are talking over each other instead of taking turn to speak.
5/14 c13 LongSongSilver
the constantly switching POV without indication is really not a fun read. needs some indication of what is a thought/alt POV and everything else.
the constantly switching POV without indication is really not a fun read. needs some indication of what is a thought/alt POV and everything else.
5/14 c8 LongSongSilver
Oh, yeah arbitrarily switching between translated terms and just using the romaji version (with no little indication of what it actually means) is really not a smooth read.
Oh, yeah arbitrarily switching between translated terms and just using the romaji version (with no little indication of what it actually means) is really not a smooth read.
4/29 c28 TheVelvetPen
Hey! I wanted to reach out and say how much your story "Understanding Does Not Presage Peace" resonated with me it’s genuinely inspiring. I’d be excited to translate it into my comic art style and bring your vision to life. I truly believe you'll be happy with the outcome.
I’m a professional digital artist and offer paid services only, but I ensure top-tier quality in every project. If you're open to it, we can chat about pricing and other details feel free to connect with me on Discord at velvet_pen or on Twitter VelVet_Pen. Looking forward to the opportunity to collaborate!
Hey! I wanted to reach out and say how much your story "Understanding Does Not Presage Peace" resonated with me it’s genuinely inspiring. I’d be excited to translate it into my comic art style and bring your vision to life. I truly believe you'll be happy with the outcome.
I’m a professional digital artist and offer paid services only, but I ensure top-tier quality in every project. If you're open to it, we can chat about pricing and other details feel free to connect with me on Discord at velvet_pen or on Twitter VelVet_Pen. Looking forward to the opportunity to collaborate!
3/1 c28 
3Darth Vegan99
I've been reading fanfictions ever since 2016 and 80% of them being Self Insert. Never have i stumble across a story whose freshness and creativity even come close to the shadow of what you've written.
Congratulations on this story,
Your brilliance is commendable.
3Darth Vegan99I've been reading fanfictions ever since 2016 and 80% of them being Self Insert. Never have i stumble across a story whose freshness and creativity even come close to the shadow of what you've written.
Congratulations on this story,
Your brilliance is commendable.
2/25 c28 Guest
It's quite the masterpiece, with a genuine happy ending. I am glad that you found within you the strength to finish writting it. It encompasses both technicality and spirituality, a much truer humanism than that of certain modern political and cultural movements which I disapprove of (such as Zionism), and further proves that I am right in reading all of your fictions.
It's quite the masterpiece, with a genuine happy ending. I am glad that you found within you the strength to finish writting it. It encompasses both technicality and spirituality, a much truer humanism than that of certain modern political and cultural movements which I disapprove of (such as Zionism), and further proves that I am right in reading all of your fictions.
1/21 c18 Gale13
I may not understand all that is classified as technobable but I do appreciate it. It is mor interesting than when the list all the skills and point levels in a gammers story. ThoseI often skip after the first them. I have never skipped over any of your story.
I may not understand all that is classified as technobable but I do appreciate it. It is mor interesting than when the list all the skills and point levels in a gammers story. ThoseI often skip after the first them. I have never skipped over any of your story.
12/29/2024 c13 Guest
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No predator animal goes hunting thinking 'I'll only hunt what I need'.
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Actually, wolves understand this concept. They avoid over-hunting, and don't kill all the humans they Come accross. Wotan is represented with two wolves (dogs in the christian medieval parts) and crows, because the wolves were following human nomadic society and eating the leftovers : they domesticated themselves.
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No predator animal goes hunting thinking 'I'll only hunt what I need'.
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Actually, wolves understand this concept. They avoid over-hunting, and don't kill all the humans they Come accross. Wotan is represented with two wolves (dogs in the christian medieval parts) and crows, because the wolves were following human nomadic society and eating the leftovers : they domesticated themselves.
12/24/2024 c6 Angeloux
MC does and says stuff that will bring attention. Suprise pikachu face when he gets said attention…
MC does and says stuff that will bring attention. Suprise pikachu face when he gets said attention…