1/28 c75 etenightstar
I'm loving how this version of Jon seems to be one step ahead all the time and outthinks his opposition. This felt like the end of an arc so I can see why it took so long but im really looking forward to seeing where this keeps evolving to.

Hope your enjoying yourself writing this as much as I am reading it.

1/19 c75 2Home of the Brave
Wow, don't forget about that chest.

1/14 c5 Church21
Could turn interesting dont really want to judge this until i’ve read further into it. So far i think the dialogue needs a little work Robs 3 and you have him talking like hes about 10. Toddlers dont act that way Jon you could make the excuse for but not Rob it also doesnt make sense why’d they take what are essentially toddlers on a dangerous hunt. And Robs and Jons back talk wouldnt really be tolerated. Rob even as an adult rarely stood up to his mother. Also kind if wish you’d have left the otoku crap out. Image training is dumb. Next he will be carrying a katana and frowing a neck beard

1/13 c75 insanecoop
Oh wow, brutal but expected.
Looking forward to more

1/13 c75 Wrixel
Wonderfull chapter, thank you.

1/13 c75 the only one original username
Cool, but Kraken taking his box first in front of him could be even more cool

12/30/2024 c74 Guest
I love