
2/12/2024 c1 Babysis64
this was a good chapter I thought. wouldn't Alice seen them together? What about Esme ? What would happen if they found out what happened between Carlusle and Bella?
this was a good chapter I thought. wouldn't Alice seen them together? What about Esme ? What would happen if they found out what happened between Carlusle and Bella?
7/7/2023 c3 Marymary123
My oh my I only feel bad for Esme and Bella. Bella and Carlisle are attracked but did not follow through until Edward ran. Edward is dishonest in every way.
My oh my I only feel bad for Esme and Bella. Bella and Carlisle are attracked but did not follow through until Edward ran. Edward is dishonest in every way.
12/6/2022 c1
20Megara1
Hi !
I trully enjoyed the begining of your story.
You had a great idea with the AU of Breaking Dawn, a lot of Bella/Carlisle's stories begun with New Moon...
The sex scenes was terrific, and we asked you a lot of questions for next chapter : Why did Edward leave ? What is the relationship between Esme and Carlisle ? Friends with benefics, thought they were soulmate ? What will react the other Cullen ?
So I need much more !

Hi !
I trully enjoyed the begining of your story.
You had a great idea with the AU of Breaking Dawn, a lot of Bella/Carlisle's stories begun with New Moon...
The sex scenes was terrific, and we asked you a lot of questions for next chapter : Why did Edward leave ? What is the relationship between Esme and Carlisle ? Friends with benefics, thought they were soulmate ? What will react the other Cullen ?
So I need much more !
12/1/2022 c1
39Lovely Black Butterfly
I hope there is an update and you didn't leave us there hanging sooo good

I hope there is an update and you didn't leave us there hanging sooo good
11/30/2022 c1 Goldielover
Nice start. These two are going to be hot together.
A little puzzled as to why Edward disappeared on their wedding night after going to all the trouble of getting her to marry him, but I guess we will find out.
Carlisle appears to have wanted her for awhile, and I wonder if Edward knew that. Also wondering if he really is married to Esme or if that is just one of their cover stories.
Nice start. These two are going to be hot together.
A little puzzled as to why Edward disappeared on their wedding night after going to all the trouble of getting her to marry him, but I guess we will find out.
Carlisle appears to have wanted her for awhile, and I wonder if Edward knew that. Also wondering if he really is married to Esme or if that is just one of their cover stories.