for Friendship to Home10/11 c52 Guest
I love this story. Thank you so much. I try to check for updates every week.
I love this story. Thank you so much. I try to check for updates every week.
10/8 c52 Reader2505
Thanks for more great chapters and for 2 at once. They were great as always. The puppy will be great for lyndy. Hope more is out soon.
Thanks for more great chapters and for 2 at once. They were great as always. The puppy will be great for lyndy. Hope more is out soon.
9/30 c52 
8Missela
I have my kids track words in sermons sometimes. I did it as a kid, too. But my kids are awesome. Last weekend when there weren't children's programs during 4 of the 8 adult meetings, they said they didn't need to bring anything to keep quiet. They could listen. They sat quietly! I was pleased.
I loved the stone naming ceremony. It's a great idea. I also like how Doc and Ginny's faith is being shared.
8MisselaI have my kids track words in sermons sometimes. I did it as a kid, too. But my kids are awesome. Last weekend when there weren't children's programs during 4 of the 8 adult meetings, they said they didn't need to bring anything to keep quiet. They could listen. They sat quietly! I was pleased.
I loved the stone naming ceremony. It's a great idea. I also like how Doc and Ginny's faith is being shared.
9/27 c52 taucher191266
Thank you for these two chapters. Lyndy's wonderful surprise of a puppy previously promised comes true! I like how she snuck down to sleep with him in his bed...that is so true to life. Jack's reaction to Mitch and Amy moving the stone ceremony to their house was nice. Tradition is important and binds the family factions together. Thanks for continuing your wonderful story.
Thank you for these two chapters. Lyndy's wonderful surprise of a puppy previously promised comes true! I like how she snuck down to sleep with him in his bed...that is so true to life. Jack's reaction to Mitch and Amy moving the stone ceremony to their house was nice. Tradition is important and binds the family factions together. Thanks for continuing your wonderful story.
9/24 c50 Guest
Love this. Please update soon. Its been a while.
Love this. Please update soon. Its been a while.
9/17 c50 Margaret Redmon
This was such a sweet story. Mitch is a very special man ans so sweet and kind. The judge knew how special he was , too!
This was such a sweet story. Mitch is a very special man ans so sweet and kind. The judge knew how special he was , too!
9/15 c50 184nebula2
Awww...what a sweet adoption ceremony. Loved the line where Lyndy asked if Mitch was her Daddy in every way now. So glad that Mitch has the wife and child he so deserves. I loved that you gave the judge a little personality even if he is a minor character. Nice job!
184nebula2Awww...what a sweet adoption ceremony. Loved the line where Lyndy asked if Mitch was her Daddy in every way now. So glad that Mitch has the wife and child he so deserves. I loved that you gave the judge a little personality even if he is a minor character. Nice job!
9/14 c49 nebula2
Seems like everything is coming together for the new family. I love that you put descriptions in about each of the new hires as well as finally gave us a little more information on Charlie and Zeke. Looking forward to seeing how all of this unfolds.
The conversation with Tim and Jessica was well executed. I liked that Mitch shared with Tim his reasoning of not wanting to ask Lou. Giving their past, that would probably have felt awkward but by having the sharing take place you show that Mitch and Tim's relationship has been strengthened some - as well as that act strengthening it.
Though this was very much a filler type chapter, providing readers with information rather than anything exciting happening, you executed it in a way that it flowed well and didn't seem to bog down the story. Nicely done!
Seems like everything is coming together for the new family. I love that you put descriptions in about each of the new hires as well as finally gave us a little more information on Charlie and Zeke. Looking forward to seeing how all of this unfolds.
The conversation with Tim and Jessica was well executed. I liked that Mitch shared with Tim his reasoning of not wanting to ask Lou. Giving their past, that would probably have felt awkward but by having the sharing take place you show that Mitch and Tim's relationship has been strengthened some - as well as that act strengthening it.
Though this was very much a filler type chapter, providing readers with information rather than anything exciting happening, you executed it in a way that it flowed well and didn't seem to bog down the story. Nicely done!
9/13 c50 10Eilie Hunter
Loved the sweet adoption ceremony and that the judge could clearly see and feel the love. Nice to make Lyndy feel an extra connection to the judge with her ring, plus he had another insight into the new family. Lyndy's comments are always a delight!
Mitch is showing us how wonderful a husband and father he is. As the judge commented, we need more like Mitch!
Sweet chapter and now I look forward to the grandparents' arrival and the naming ceremony. Always happy to see new chapters in my inbox, although I apologize for the delayed review! No reflection on quality or content, I just get busy.
Thank you for this story that redeems HL for me!
Every blessing,
Eilie
10Eilie HunterLoved the sweet adoption ceremony and that the judge could clearly see and feel the love. Nice to make Lyndy feel an extra connection to the judge with her ring, plus he had another insight into the new family. Lyndy's comments are always a delight!
Mitch is showing us how wonderful a husband and father he is. As the judge commented, we need more like Mitch!
Sweet chapter and now I look forward to the grandparents' arrival and the naming ceremony. Always happy to see new chapters in my inbox, although I apologize for the delayed review! No reflection on quality or content, I just get busy.
Thank you for this story that redeems HL for me!
Every blessing,
Eilie
9/13 c48 184nebula2
What a packed chapter! Wonderful job. They really did have a full weekend but they are growing strong bonds for their new family.
I like how you portrayed Caleb in this chapter. Giving his bond with Ty, it would be hard for him to hear Lyndy call another man Daddy. However, I like that he allowed himself to feel it, recognize it, and acknowledge it as something he needed to work through on his own terms rather than acting out. The Caleb we first got introduced in the show would probably be making things miserable for Mitch but like all the characters, Caleb has matured over the seasons according to his story arc. You capture that beautifully. I also may have teared up during his talk with Mitch - very well written and emotionally provoking!
Wonderful chapter! Glad I can finally get caught up on this story!
184nebula2What a packed chapter! Wonderful job. They really did have a full weekend but they are growing strong bonds for their new family.
I like how you portrayed Caleb in this chapter. Giving his bond with Ty, it would be hard for him to hear Lyndy call another man Daddy. However, I like that he allowed himself to feel it, recognize it, and acknowledge it as something he needed to work through on his own terms rather than acting out. The Caleb we first got introduced in the show would probably be making things miserable for Mitch but like all the characters, Caleb has matured over the seasons according to his story arc. You capture that beautifully. I also may have teared up during his talk with Mitch - very well written and emotionally provoking!
Wonderful chapter! Glad I can finally get caught up on this story!
9/12 c47 nebula2
What a sweet chapter. I like that they are reconfirming with Caleb and Cass about guardianship. It would be important to make sure Caleb and Cass are okay with keeping Doc and Ginny in the family loop now that they are a part of Lyndy's family. Did you have Caleb and Cass meet Mitch's family yet?
It seems new routines are being formed along with new traditions. Loved that Lyndy wants to do family night every Friday. Mitch and Amy better enjoy it now before she wants to hang out with her friends on Friday nights rather than her parents.
Enjoyed the extra information about the Claddagh ring. fit right into the flow of the story!
What a sweet chapter. I like that they are reconfirming with Caleb and Cass about guardianship. It would be important to make sure Caleb and Cass are okay with keeping Doc and Ginny in the family loop now that they are a part of Lyndy's family. Did you have Caleb and Cass meet Mitch's family yet?
It seems new routines are being formed along with new traditions. Loved that Lyndy wants to do family night every Friday. Mitch and Amy better enjoy it now before she wants to hang out with her friends on Friday nights rather than her parents.
Enjoyed the extra information about the Claddagh ring. fit right into the flow of the story!
8/23 c49 1BetterThanWCTHSeason8WritersJK
Such fun Easter Eggs here. Thanks for including a little bit of 'me' in this story. Especially being Charlie ;)
1BetterThanWCTHSeason8WritersJKSuch fun Easter Eggs here. Thanks for including a little bit of 'me' in this story. Especially being Charlie ;)
8/23 c50 Reader2505
Thanks for more wonderful chapters. Love how Mitch looked after Amy. So glad lyndy is officially his daughter and looking forward to the dog.
Thanks for more wonderful chapters. Love how Mitch looked after Amy. So glad lyndy is officially his daughter and looking forward to the dog.