for Finding Her11/16/2024 c19 Cknsw
Great first story. I enjoyed reading it. I’ve read your other two amd I can see your development as a writer. I look forward to reading more.
Great first story. I enjoyed reading it. I’ve read your other two amd I can see your development as a writer. I look forward to reading more.
7/13/2024 c1 musemum
absolutely fabulous first chapter as a fanfic writer ! Well done , can't wait read more .
absolutely fabulous first chapter as a fanfic writer ! Well done , can't wait read more .
14/28/2023 c18 ChristyWIX
Yup, definitely preferred the jealous Tanya over the attempted rapist Felix. Truly loved this story, with the exception of Felix's chapter, from start to finish. Really loved the instant and unwavering mate connection Bella and Edward shared throughout. Just realized you never answered why their hearts hurt when away from each other, hmmm. Well, anyway, what a great story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
Yup, definitely preferred the jealous Tanya over the attempted rapist Felix. Truly loved this story, with the exception of Felix's chapter, from start to finish. Really loved the instant and unwavering mate connection Bella and Edward shared throughout. Just realized you never answered why their hearts hurt when away from each other, hmmm. Well, anyway, what a great story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
4/28/2023 c17 ChristyWIX
I’m thinking I would’ve rather the Denalis visiting with a catty Tanya in lieu of the attempted rape. It still has me really creeped out even though it didn’t happen. If it would’ve been the two of them back in New Hampshire at their cabin, she would’ve been lost to Edward forever. I'm glad she is okay. I’m glad they reconnected and everything, but I’ve kind of been tossed out of the story over what went down last chapter. The lightheartedness of it is simply gone. Poof. :(
I’m thinking I would’ve rather the Denalis visiting with a catty Tanya in lieu of the attempted rape. It still has me really creeped out even though it didn’t happen. If it would’ve been the two of them back in New Hampshire at their cabin, she would’ve been lost to Edward forever. I'm glad she is okay. I’m glad they reconnected and everything, but I’ve kind of been tossed out of the story over what went down last chapter. The lightheartedness of it is simply gone. Poof. :(
4/28/2023 c16 ChristyWIX
Well, color me wrong then. Bummer this was thrown in there. The only thing I can see for it is so they can teach Bella how to fight. More importantly, teach her how to throw her shield to protect in the future, if they come across any other vamps with ruthless tendencies and powers. I’m very glad they found her so quickly and she was unharmed. Though quite odd he’d wait until they were in a cabin to begin his assault. At least the family got there in time. Happy they killed and disposed of all three of them. Though I imagine Aro will not be happy about this in the slightest. Though I cannot imagine how he’d find out it was any of them, short of touching one of them one day down the road.
Well, color me wrong then. Bummer this was thrown in there. The only thing I can see for it is so they can teach Bella how to fight. More importantly, teach her how to throw her shield to protect in the future, if they come across any other vamps with ruthless tendencies and powers. I’m very glad they found her so quickly and she was unharmed. Though quite odd he’d wait until they were in a cabin to begin his assault. At least the family got there in time. Happy they killed and disposed of all three of them. Though I imagine Aro will not be happy about this in the slightest. Though I cannot imagine how he’d find out it was any of them, short of touching one of them one day down the road.
4/28/2023 c15 ChristyWIX
Thinking since this has been a light hearted story so far, these new people showing up just may be the Denalis. They’ve not popped in here yet. Is it time for a catty Tanya to pop in? Fun times at the pool with all the siblings. The bikini Bella wore nearly killed Edward. Surprised there was still water left in the pool with all their cannonballs and splashing around. Esme speaking one on one with Edward was a great scene. Bella’s s giggle at Esme’s compliment was fun.
Thinking since this has been a light hearted story so far, these new people showing up just may be the Denalis. They’ve not popped in here yet. Is it time for a catty Tanya to pop in? Fun times at the pool with all the siblings. The bikini Bella wore nearly killed Edward. Surprised there was still water left in the pool with all their cannonballs and splashing around. Esme speaking one on one with Edward was a great scene. Bella’s s giggle at Esme’s compliment was fun.
4/28/2023 c14 ChristyWIX
Loved the bonding of the boys. Sharing their stories. Interesting about Bella and Edward's super connection. I’m glad they’ve got such a great bond. The girls all had a good time too with planning the wedding. I’m glad Bella got Rosalie to come around from her selfishness and get closer to her. So happy they’ve all bonded so well. Esme and Carlisle must be over the moon to have their whole family there with them. Was so worried the whole time they were playing baseball. So glad it was only just them playing baseball and no rogue evil vamps swinging through. I liked her thinking her dad was looking down upon her and being impressed. Sweet scene.
Loved the bonding of the boys. Sharing their stories. Interesting about Bella and Edward's super connection. I’m glad they’ve got such a great bond. The girls all had a good time too with planning the wedding. I’m glad Bella got Rosalie to come around from her selfishness and get closer to her. So happy they’ve all bonded so well. Esme and Carlisle must be over the moon to have their whole family there with them. Was so worried the whole time they were playing baseball. So glad it was only just them playing baseball and no rogue evil vamps swinging through. I liked her thinking her dad was looking down upon her and being impressed. Sweet scene.
4/28/2023 c13 ChristyWIX
Yay, it was Emmett. I like how seeing Edward’s amber eyes had him standing up out of his attack crouch. It made me laugh when he asked if Edward could turn off the 'annoying' reading of the minds. Wondering if Bella will eventually be able to pull Edward into her shield and he won’t hear the others. They’ll have the peace they had when alone, just with the others around. Interesting how you took away Alice and Jasper being able to see and feel Bella. You must have a reason for this switch, as their gifts never really did much to Bella and Edward. Would be nice if Alice can see their future in the future, when/if they do need her gift. Rosalie was awfully quick to judge. I was elated Bella was NOT taking her shit at all. Good. Ooh, another great rec in Creature of Habit. I definitely liked it a lot.
Yay, it was Emmett. I like how seeing Edward’s amber eyes had him standing up out of his attack crouch. It made me laugh when he asked if Edward could turn off the 'annoying' reading of the minds. Wondering if Bella will eventually be able to pull Edward into her shield and he won’t hear the others. They’ll have the peace they had when alone, just with the others around. Interesting how you took away Alice and Jasper being able to see and feel Bella. You must have a reason for this switch, as their gifts never really did much to Bella and Edward. Would be nice if Alice can see their future in the future, when/if they do need her gift. Rosalie was awfully quick to judge. I was elated Bella was NOT taking her shit at all. Good. Ooh, another great rec in Creature of Habit. I definitely liked it a lot.
4/28/2023 c12 ChristyWIX
I loved their swim into the falls and his proposal from behind them. I’m thinking nobody on earth can say they got proposed to in this particular spot at Nigel Falls. The US side of Canada. They’re there now. I think this can only be EMMETT! Oh I was hoping the others would be with Esme and Carlisle. I hope I’m right. *happy claps*
I loved their swim into the falls and his proposal from behind them. I’m thinking nobody on earth can say they got proposed to in this particular spot at Nigel Falls. The US side of Canada. They’re there now. I think this can only be EMMETT! Oh I was hoping the others would be with Esme and Carlisle. I hope I’m right. *happy claps*