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Bittersweet knowing this is the end, encouraged by your promise of futurerakes. As in multipleIn seven years they have matured and were able to remain autonomous in their pursuits but linked as a well grounded family.
Of course Edward would remember the anniversary day of their first official date.
The fact he had Charlie’s help to pull off such an intimate arrangement for his proposal is testament to the fondness for this young man.
Bella will thrive in her studies. Just like her ability to memorize scripts, she will be vigilant in learning all about the legal system. She will be a formidable litigator. After all, she has been negotiating with her parents since a very youn age, lol.
Thank you for this unique look into the lives of two high school students that didn’t fit the norm.
Bittersweet knowing this is the end, encouraged by your promise of futurerakes. As in multipleIn seven years they have matured and were able to remain autonomous in their pursuits but linked as a well grounded family.
Of course Edward would remember the anniversary day of their first official date.
The fact he had Charlie’s help to pull off such an intimate arrangement for his proposal is testament to the fondness for this young man.
Bella will thrive in her studies. Just like her ability to memorize scripts, she will be vigilant in learning all about the legal system. She will be a formidable litigator. After all, she has been negotiating with her parents since a very youn age, lol.
Thank you for this unique look into the lives of two high school students that didn’t fit the norm.
10/10/2024 c73 
13archy12
Thank you for this epilogue. It's exactly what we readers needed, seeing all the characters grow up (and not only in years) and travel further in life.
And their are future takes? Thank you in advance for them!
I'm pretty sure I didn't hate anything. As for improvements and most enjoyed chapters/scenes, I'll read the whole story again and get back to you. :)
Edward and Bella...their worry for each other made me tear up, but I understand it. Of course, they are going to have a long, healthy and happy life together with their kids (and grandkids in later years).
The proposal was beautiful, and the location very appropriate. Edward replacing his defeated king with the ring...Yes, he had lost his heart to Bella a long time ago.
Bella as an advocate would be amazing, with her penchant for detail and her quick grasp on facts. (Will she give up acting for good, by the way?)
So glad Charlie and Renee got to adopt Riley. That little boy has got the best family in the world, with Bella and Edward being part of it.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story!
13archy12Thank you for this epilogue. It's exactly what we readers needed, seeing all the characters grow up (and not only in years) and travel further in life.
And their are future takes? Thank you in advance for them!
I'm pretty sure I didn't hate anything. As for improvements and most enjoyed chapters/scenes, I'll read the whole story again and get back to you. :)
Edward and Bella...their worry for each other made me tear up, but I understand it. Of course, they are going to have a long, healthy and happy life together with their kids (and grandkids in later years).
The proposal was beautiful, and the location very appropriate. Edward replacing his defeated king with the ring...Yes, he had lost his heart to Bella a long time ago.
Bella as an advocate would be amazing, with her penchant for detail and her quick grasp on facts. (Will she give up acting for good, by the way?)
So glad Charlie and Renee got to adopt Riley. That little boy has got the best family in the world, with Bella and Edward being part of it.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story!
10/10/2024 c73 Scorpio11
I was equally thrilled and saddened when I saw this post. thrilled because I always am when you post something, but I knew it was the end, and I never wanted it to end. Loved it, however. I was happy Bella wanted to go to college, and that it was BU so she could be with E. The date he planned and his proposal were so endearing. So looking forward to the futuretakes. I've already reread the story, and will no doubt do so again. Thank you.
I was equally thrilled and saddened when I saw this post. thrilled because I always am when you post something, but I knew it was the end, and I never wanted it to end. Loved it, however. I was happy Bella wanted to go to college, and that it was BU so she could be with E. The date he planned and his proposal were so endearing. So looking forward to the futuretakes. I've already reread the story, and will no doubt do so again. Thank you.
10/10/2024 c73 twiclare
I’m a blubbering mess reading this, but also smiling. Their pure love for each other and the people around them is so special. I’ve loved this fabulous story, and I thank you so much for sharing your hard work and inspiration with us.
I’m a blubbering mess reading this, but also smiling. Their pure love for each other and the people around them is so special. I’ve loved this fabulous story, and I thank you so much for sharing your hard work and inspiration with us.
10/10/2024 c73 BridieM
*sad yet happy tears*. *sniff*…*deep breath*. Oops…*more tears*..where’s a bl**dy tissue when you need one…. I started this epilogue when nobody was around because I love to absorb myself in your words. I’ve started this epilogue 8 times because I swear they come out of the woodwork and they find me! I shall miss these wonderful characters. If you ever publish this work, please let us know. I can’t get the FF email alerts to work, but please let us know. Totally brilliant. Emotionally rich. Layered characters. Perfectly paced. And, the promise of a possibility of a happy ever after. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Damn I need another tissue…xx
*sad yet happy tears*. *sniff*…*deep breath*. Oops…*more tears*..where’s a bl**dy tissue when you need one…. I started this epilogue when nobody was around because I love to absorb myself in your words. I’ve started this epilogue 8 times because I swear they come out of the woodwork and they find me! I shall miss these wonderful characters. If you ever publish this work, please let us know. I can’t get the FF email alerts to work, but please let us know. Totally brilliant. Emotionally rich. Layered characters. Perfectly paced. And, the promise of a possibility of a happy ever after. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Damn I need another tissue…xx
10/10/2024 c73 Grace46
Finally The kids got that happy ending I've been asking for... Beautifully written, thank you for sharing with us
Finally The kids got that happy ending I've been asking for... Beautifully written, thank you for sharing with us
10/10/2024 c73 diana2012
I'm crying! Such a beautiful story and love. I loved all of it and those two. Thank you so much for sharing and posting. Please keep writing anything and I will read!
I'm crying! Such a beautiful story and love. I loved all of it and those two. Thank you so much for sharing and posting. Please keep writing anything and I will read!
10/9/2024 c73 sas
truly one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading. thanks so much for sharing your amazing talent.
truly one of the best stories I have had the pleasure of reading. thanks so much for sharing your amazing talent.
10/9/2024 c73 6redemptionsong
Love that for them! Never imagined where this story would take us but I loved every bit of it. I loved the unrequitedness of Bella’s feelings at the beginning then the growth of Edward’s feelings and the sweetness of the start of their relationship and the eventual merge of their families. This is one of my favourites from you which is saying a lot since I love all your work. Can’t wait for the next one x
6redemptionsongLove that for them! Never imagined where this story would take us but I loved every bit of it. I loved the unrequitedness of Bella’s feelings at the beginning then the growth of Edward’s feelings and the sweetness of the start of their relationship and the eventual merge of their families. This is one of my favourites from you which is saying a lot since I love all your work. Can’t wait for the next one x
10/9/2024 c73 snowjayne
Thank you. I’ve absolutely loved reading this story. It was a real treat. Looking forward to the reread already.
Thank you. I’ve absolutely loved reading this story. It was a real treat. Looking forward to the reread already.
10/9/2024 c73 NeeNee246
HOLYSH*T! I am grinning in tears! This is absolutely perfectly fantastic! I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! ;)
HOLYSH*T! I am grinning in tears! This is absolutely perfectly fantastic! I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! ;)