9/24 c72 Guest
You mentioned Potemkin villages and being an immigrant. My money goes on Russian or Romanian. Not many people outside of Eastern Europeans are aware of Potemkin. Your English is flawless and your writing is brilliant. I really loved reading this beautiful story! Please publish it.
(Potemkin village: comes from stories of a fake portable village built by Grigory Potemkin, the younger lover of Russian Empress Catherine the Great, solely to impress the Empress during her journey to Crimea in 1787. The term has come to describe an elaborate facade designed to hide an undesirable reality.)
You mentioned Potemkin villages and being an immigrant. My money goes on Russian or Romanian. Not many people outside of Eastern Europeans are aware of Potemkin. Your English is flawless and your writing is brilliant. I really loved reading this beautiful story! Please publish it.
(Potemkin village: comes from stories of a fake portable village built by Grigory Potemkin, the younger lover of Russian Empress Catherine the Great, solely to impress the Empress during her journey to Crimea in 1787. The term has come to describe an elaborate facade designed to hide an undesirable reality.)
9/23 c72 Borntocontest
I still have hope for a sequel <3
thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us xxx
I still have hope for a sequel <3
thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us xxx
9/23 c72 MusetteBlanchard
I had to brave this atrocius world of apps (since my pc died and my cel won't accept my words) to leave my review to this beautiful, enchanting, loving story.
Once again you gift us with your talent and your creativity.
I was in tears reading your story (so you're not American eh) and living it with you.
Miss M thank you for another amazing tale. It is a testament to your brilliancy (does this word exist? Lol) that I read it, since "high school" is not my cup of tea
There are none, absolutely no similarities between Americans and Brazilians HS systems so I miss a lot - well maybe not the teenage attitude but hey, it's been over 50 years, I don't remember, so probably there was no harm done lol.
Congratulations for another gem.
tôi muốn bạn tốt (see what I did here ? )
*clapping and whistling*
I had to brave this atrocius world of apps (since my pc died and my cel won't accept my words) to leave my review to this beautiful, enchanting, loving story.
Once again you gift us with your talent and your creativity.
I was in tears reading your story (so you're not American eh) and living it with you.
Miss M thank you for another amazing tale. It is a testament to your brilliancy (does this word exist? Lol) that I read it, since "high school" is not my cup of tea
There are none, absolutely no similarities between Americans and Brazilians HS systems so I miss a lot - well maybe not the teenage attitude but hey, it's been over 50 years, I don't remember, so probably there was no harm done lol.
Congratulations for another gem.
tôi muốn bạn tốt (see what I did here ? )
*clapping and whistling*
9/23 c72 Guest
Awesome story! Awesomer AN! This story has infinite layers of possibilities, not in the least "Underground Memories", which I need to read stat. And sequels! Oh boy, the sequels! Congratulations on writing the most heartwarming story with the most lovable protagonists - I can't wait to see it made into a movie. Can you imagine who will play the blue-eyed boy and the biracial girl? I really hope you consider pitching it to a production company.
Awesome story! Awesomer AN! This story has infinite layers of possibilities, not in the least "Underground Memories", which I need to read stat. And sequels! Oh boy, the sequels! Congratulations on writing the most heartwarming story with the most lovable protagonists - I can't wait to see it made into a movie. Can you imagine who will play the blue-eyed boy and the biracial girl? I really hope you consider pitching it to a production company.
9/22 c72 fuz
That is a wonderful sentiment to dedicate a story to them.
What a gem of a story.
And I truly admire your resilience.
Thank you.
That is a wonderful sentiment to dedicate a story to them.
What a gem of a story.
And I truly admire your resilience.
Thank you.
9/22 c72 30Rebadams7
Prom and sillyness and life!
They have been thru the fire
Now on to the joy…grab it when
It lands
Prom and sillyness and life!
They have been thru the fire
Now on to the joy…grab it when
It lands
9/22 c72 Flippysten
Wow this whole story was absolutely amazing and your an amazing writer! Loved loved it through the ups and downs. You brought this story to life and all from your experience when you were just 21. All I can say is thank you thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with all of us!
Looking forward to as many future takes you can give us, really wanting to see how their future turns out : )
I'm so sad for this to come to a close.
Til next time
Wow this whole story was absolutely amazing and your an amazing writer! Loved loved it through the ups and downs. You brought this story to life and all from your experience when you were just 21. All I can say is thank you thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with all of us!
Looking forward to as many future takes you can give us, really wanting to see how their future turns out : )
I'm so sad for this to come to a close.
Til next time
9/22 c72 NeeNee246
OMG! I love this story so much! I am so sad this is their end! I know there is an epi coming but, it's still the end. :( I am very excited for the EPI! ;)
OMG! I love this story so much! I am so sad this is their end! I know there is an epi coming but, it's still the end. :( I am very excited for the EPI! ;)
9/22 c72 2anyagal
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I remember when I first started reading it and was instantly hooked. For obvious reasons, their first kiss stands out the most in my memory…ahhh. Looking forward to the epilogue! And what’s going on with the new story? I need more of that, too))
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I remember when I first started reading it and was instantly hooked. For obvious reasons, their first kiss stands out the most in my memory…ahhh. Looking forward to the epilogue! And what’s going on with the new story? I need more of that, too))
9/22 c72 1Hyacinth85
the cahpter was excelent, but tour st ory, wow, it gave a new light to the whole thing.
thanks for sharing not only the story but this piece of your memories as well
the cahpter was excelent, but tour st ory, wow, it gave a new light to the whole thing.
thanks for sharing not only the story but this piece of your memories as well