
5/5/2023 c32 Guest
Edward kisses like you write…wait, what? Your writing doesn't feel like writing.
Edward kisses like you write…wait, what? Your writing doesn't feel like writing.
5/5/2023 c32
1Alice's White Rabbit
Well, that was the easy part of the conversation. Now, she's going to have to explain why Emmett is her bodyguard.
Thanks!
Sally

Well, that was the easy part of the conversation. Now, she's going to have to explain why Emmett is her bodyguard.
Thanks!
Sally
5/5/2023 c32 Guest
I can’t stop rereading this. Just this chapter. Before, I kept rereading the while story until the new chapter. Now, just keep reading this over and over again. Please don't end it too soon. I mean, I don't expect 10 seasons of Bella’s series or anything (unless you feel moved to do so), but I was hoping for at least a foray into everyone knowing about it. I didn’t want Maybe a Dance to end either, but it worked. Every story you write is better than the last.
I can’t stop rereading this. Just this chapter. Before, I kept rereading the while story until the new chapter. Now, just keep reading this over and over again. Please don't end it too soon. I mean, I don't expect 10 seasons of Bella’s series or anything (unless you feel moved to do so), but I was hoping for at least a foray into everyone knowing about it. I didn’t want Maybe a Dance to end either, but it worked. Every story you write is better than the last.
5/5/2023 c32 lillianolivia.white
Wellll, we all want to know the reaction of the friends when the series comes out and everyone knows. That could be the Epilog , I guess. Now Edward’s question about the body guard is loaded, because he will be very protective when he finds out she was stalked. I loved this chapter so much. Young love…sigh. It was so sweet.
Wellll, we all want to know the reaction of the friends when the series comes out and everyone knows. That could be the Epilog , I guess. Now Edward’s question about the body guard is loaded, because he will be very protective when he finds out she was stalked. I loved this chapter so much. Young love…sigh. It was so sweet.
5/5/2023 c32 innerdrummergirl
Your compelling and evocative writing has sent me up in flames! Fantastic chapter - thoroughly engaging and very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and superb writing with us.
Your compelling and evocative writing has sent me up in flames! Fantastic chapter - thoroughly engaging and very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and superb writing with us.
5/4/2023 c32 Narges
When he said "and you have an NDA" I thought he understood that the bodyguard is because of her acting thingy. Why's he asking " why do you need a bodyguard" for?
And don't you dare finish this now! If you do, I will have to train and train for years to write the most addictive story and post it for you, and then cut it off at it's highest point, just to get back at you :DDDDDDD
Please have mercy on me and yourself. I don't want to become a writer XD
When he said "and you have an NDA" I thought he understood that the bodyguard is because of her acting thingy. Why's he asking " why do you need a bodyguard" for?
And don't you dare finish this now! If you do, I will have to train and train for years to write the most addictive story and post it for you, and then cut it off at it's highest point, just to get back at you :DDDDDDD
Please have mercy on me and yourself. I don't want to become a writer XD
5/4/2023 c32 Michele P.C
Since you asked, I would like a futuretake maybe 10 years after this and where they are and how Bella’s career went with her big break and what Edward ended up doing as a career.
I really enjoyed this story and I was initially not going to read it since they are high school kids, but I said WTH and read it. Super cute and funny and sweet and I am really enjoying this. You make awesome stories and I have such a great time with them. I hope you enjoy them as well. Take carethank you again!
Since you asked, I would like a futuretake maybe 10 years after this and where they are and how Bella’s career went with her big break and what Edward ended up doing as a career.
I really enjoyed this story and I was initially not going to read it since they are high school kids, but I said WTH and read it. Super cute and funny and sweet and I am really enjoying this. You make awesome stories and I have such a great time with them. I hope you enjoy them as well. Take carethank you again!
5/4/2023 c32 Guest
I’m so glad for this chapter….I can finally breathe. I’ve read it a dozen times today already. Now I’m scouring your list of stories to see if you have a usual number of chapters or words per story…..because I’m worried about this one ending anytime soon. There is so much left to tell. But, as always, we need to trust in you and the way you tell it. So far, you haven’t failed us in other stories.
I’m so glad for this chapter….I can finally breathe. I’ve read it a dozen times today already. Now I’m scouring your list of stories to see if you have a usual number of chapters or words per story…..because I’m worried about this one ending anytime soon. There is so much left to tell. But, as always, we need to trust in you and the way you tell it. So far, you haven’t failed us in other stories.