11/20/2023 c1 2Go18
I loved your portrayal of Natuto here. He is indeed a bad boy and Jiraya's protégé. What a chad really.
Awesome lemon too. It's very detailed yet flows very well. Never once did I feel you overburden us with descriptions. And of course it's so emotional, really feeling how Naruto snd Kurenai felt here.
I am more of a NaruIno but I can dig this pair too.
I loved your portrayal of Natuto here. He is indeed a bad boy and Jiraya's protégé. What a chad really.
Awesome lemon too. It's very detailed yet flows very well. Never once did I feel you overburden us with descriptions. And of course it's so emotional, really feeling how Naruto snd Kurenai felt here.
I am more of a NaruIno but I can dig this pair too.
10/25/2023 c2 Black-Dragon007
Fuck how have I only found this now man what a fic I fucking love it great job this is one of the best I’ve ever read I can’t wait to look at your other fics I hope you’ll have one or plan to do one with yugao awesome job
Fuck how have I only found this now man what a fic I fucking love it great job this is one of the best I’ve ever read I can’t wait to look at your other fics I hope you’ll have one or plan to do one with yugao awesome job
10/1/2023 c2 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
9/28/2023 c2 serpentacodex
it was pretty good. Not really too much into NTR but I enjoyed this none the less.
it was pretty good. Not really too much into NTR but I enjoyed this none the less.
9/27/2023 c2 Kiraxen
I dont know how can someone be angry after seeing such heavy lemon, also at least for me there was enough dept to think of this as somehow 'excusable?' NTR. Good shit.
I dont know how can someone be angry after seeing such heavy lemon, also at least for me there was enough dept to think of this as somehow 'excusable?' NTR. Good shit.
2/14/2023 c1 34Icarus the Foxkidd
I'm not going to lie, I half expected this to end like that family guy bit where Hinata was just watching from the shadows and enjoying the show.
I'm not going to lie, I half expected this to end like that family guy bit where Hinata was just watching from the shadows and enjoying the show.
1/15/2023 c1 Guest
Good revision of the previous version
Good revision of the previous version
12/18/2022 c1 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
12/16/2022 c1 mpho
make her pregnant
make her pregnant
12/17/2022 c1 13Write Your Wrongs
arkzero Oh I have a few ideas for one shots and two shots. Honestly might do one for every pairing I love, which is a lot xD
arkzero Oh I have a few ideas for one shots and two shots. Honestly might do one for every pairing I love, which is a lot xD