for Devensian10/4/2024 c36 insertnamehere123
Sequel please. It would be interesting to see how bella traches Ewar about modern things.
Sequel please. It would be interesting to see how bella traches Ewar about modern things.
510/4/2024 c36 lwb
Definitely a sequel! I love this story so much. I’m glad they found each other again but I’m sad it is complete.
Definitely a sequel! I love this story so much. I’m glad they found each other again but I’m sad it is complete.
10/4/2024 c36 Marymary123
Sequel!
Sequel!
10/4/2024 c36 frostedglaze
I was so nervous when I saw that this story was complete. You are lucky my heart heath is excellent. So they are together and right now that is all that matters. Bella teaching Edward how to swim was her best idea ever, well besides sitting on a time machine chair.
Of course this means Bella will have to sue the museum for more than the paltry dollars or sterling they are offering, maybe they can sweeten the deal with some " worthless" journals of Alistair? They can rebuild the chair, or scuba around the reservoir to find it.
Sequel, you say? A chance to keep reading about my favorite prehistoric couple and Edward's greetings? Why would I say no? I would love to see them go back home, because yes, they belong in the past. The present is so unkind to Bella, and her mother is a human roach.
Not knowing what happened to the Bat people in the past, is making me come up with so many different scenarios. Will I finally get my wish and have Jessica eaten by the remaining cannibals? Will someone invent the wheel? And who will show then the 11 herbs and spices that go on chicken?!
Ahem, right back to the sequel. If you feel up to it and don't think their story has ended, go for it. Only if you feel up to it. Many authors are pushed to churn out sequels against their will and end up hating their story and never finish it. I want to read stories that you enjoy writing and putting out, and don't want to obligate you for more.
I was so nervous when I saw that this story was complete. You are lucky my heart heath is excellent. So they are together and right now that is all that matters. Bella teaching Edward how to swim was her best idea ever, well besides sitting on a time machine chair.
Of course this means Bella will have to sue the museum for more than the paltry dollars or sterling they are offering, maybe they can sweeten the deal with some " worthless" journals of Alistair? They can rebuild the chair, or scuba around the reservoir to find it.
Sequel, you say? A chance to keep reading about my favorite prehistoric couple and Edward's greetings? Why would I say no? I would love to see them go back home, because yes, they belong in the past. The present is so unkind to Bella, and her mother is a human roach.
Not knowing what happened to the Bat people in the past, is making me come up with so many different scenarios. Will I finally get my wish and have Jessica eaten by the remaining cannibals? Will someone invent the wheel? And who will show then the 11 herbs and spices that go on chicken?!
Ahem, right back to the sequel. If you feel up to it and don't think their story has ended, go for it. Only if you feel up to it. Many authors are pushed to churn out sequels against their will and end up hating their story and never finish it. I want to read stories that you enjoy writing and putting out, and don't want to obligate you for more.
10/4/2024 c36 Trainspotter1440
We as readers are lucky to have brilliant writers like you.
What a phenomenal story. I can see the potential for a sequel especially because even though Ewar was more than capable of excelling in his time, I always sensed that had he been given a choice, he would have pursued art (I'm recalling his hand painting in the caves, the carvings he made, etc...). I think there is an interesting parallel in the way the demands of his time obstructed the full pursuit of art for him, and similarly I think modern society's capitalist demands don't make it easy for contemporary artists to make a living.
Either way, I am on board for whatever direction you take and for your next story as well. Forever a fan of yours. Thank you.
We as readers are lucky to have brilliant writers like you.
What a phenomenal story. I can see the potential for a sequel especially because even though Ewar was more than capable of excelling in his time, I always sensed that had he been given a choice, he would have pursued art (I'm recalling his hand painting in the caves, the carvings he made, etc...). I think there is an interesting parallel in the way the demands of his time obstructed the full pursuit of art for him, and similarly I think modern society's capitalist demands don't make it easy for contemporary artists to make a living.
Either way, I am on board for whatever direction you take and for your next story as well. Forever a fan of yours. Thank you.
10/4/2024 c35 frostedglaze
Nooo! Oh wait, Bella lives in the present, so she can take money from Eleazar and get scuba gear... unless did Edward's tribe pass down word of mouth stories until modern day descendants were ready and helped Bella? She would have drowned if she was unconscious and in a lake.
OK, so she has time, to go buy botanical picture books, a survivalist quide and a bow and arrows...and maybe some throwing knives as well.
Of course she also has to frame Eleazar and the board for her murder. Those douches deserve it.
Nooo! Oh wait, Bella lives in the present, so she can take money from Eleazar and get scuba gear... unless did Edward's tribe pass down word of mouth stories until modern day descendants were ready and helped Bella? She would have drowned if she was unconscious and in a lake.
OK, so she has time, to go buy botanical picture books, a survivalist quide and a bow and arrows...and maybe some throwing knives as well.
Of course she also has to frame Eleazar and the board for her murder. Those douches deserve it.
10/4/2024 c36 sas
SEQUEL PLEASE! thanks either way
SEQUEL PLEASE! thanks either way
10/4/2024 c36 Erin Faracca
As i was reading, i immediately was ready to vote for epilogue, and then you threw out a possibility for even more Bella/Ewar in a SEQUEL?
1 vote for SEQUEL!
As i was reading, i immediately was ready to vote for epilogue, and then you threw out a possibility for even more Bella/Ewar in a SEQUEL?
1 vote for SEQUEL!
10/4/2024 c36 IsabellaSwan6
SEQUEL
DEFINITELY A SEQUEL PLEASE
I've followed and loved this story from the start.
So I would love to read more.
SEQUEL
DEFINITELY A SEQUEL PLEASE
I've followed and loved this story from the start.
So I would love to read more.