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10/1/2024 c35 traceybuie
Bella has worked so hard to recooperate, and the meanie writer just pulled thhe rug from under her. grrr... That was one evil cliffy. But I'm sure those teenage boys didn't find Bella under water. Hmmm... Thanks for writing and sharing.
10/1/2024 c35 AnakinSmom
Maybe she should have called one of the boys who found her.
10/1/2024 c35 lillianolivia.white
Oh my goodness!. I believe she will find it somehow. And why did she not get that birth control reversed so that she and Edwar could have a baby? While she was in the hospital would have been a good time. She was transported back to that cave, so there must be another entrance! Oh I do hope Edwar has not taken another wife, maybe Alstair told him she would return, as soon as she was healed.
10/1/2024 c35 MusetteBlanchard
Ok ok, hold on. When Bella travelled back in time, the chair went with her and it was destroyed by the mammoth.
So where is the chair she travelled in this time ?
Isn't this chair the same one she's looking for except this one is the past of the one in the future ... oh ... *Muse completely dizzy*
I'm counting the days *singsongs*
Thank you !
10/1/2024 c35 15Cullen Cousin
good chapter
10/1/2024 c35 Juxtaposition001
Looks like we gotta call the kids to get to their secret illegal camping ground so Bella can go home!
I'm so excited for her to see Ewar again! Start a family! Can't wait for the update! Hope it comes soon!
xoxo
10/1/2024 c35 bozbaby
The archeologist and metallurgist in me are SCREAMING! The metal! All the metal! How will they get rid of it?! I’m assuming in a deep lake or sea, but aaaaarrrrgg! Volcanoes are the only things hot enough at that time to melt metal and the nearest ones were(are) in Iceland and Italy. The various plastics can be melted into nothing from a regular campfire, enough that archeologists could overlook it if found, but not the metal, especially nonferrous metals. And any teeth fillings Bella may have! If her bones are ever discovered…. Ugh. My scientific brain is a PITA at times. The right brain is trying to shush it, to push the I Believe button, to go along with the story. I know, I know. Just breathe. Believe in the fanfic magic, Boz, trust the magic. Maaaaybe they’ll put all the modern stuff on the chair and send it back without anyone? STFU, Left Brain!

Sooo she needs to talk to the boys. Looking forward to the next chapter! I hope she brought chocolate for everyone to try. Darama’s Devine Delicacy. No one should ever not try chocolate once in their lives.
10/1/2024 c35 nzjojo
Yes yes yes - another chapter ASAP pleassssseee!
10/1/2024 c35 MsLiss
Yikes
9/30/2024 c35 asam75
Thanks.
9/30/2024 c35 AngeliqueMasen
She forgot something important, to have her iud removed.
9/30/2024 c35 biblepam
Thanks for updating. Bella made a great recovery. I hope she's able to figure out how to navigate her return trip to the ice age. The marks inside the phone case were great.
9/30/2024 c35 Melcatt
Omg! I was so excited when I saw the update. Bella beat her you a new cell phone and start calling the boys! Great chapter.
9/30/2024 c35 Rita01tx
Aaaargh!
9/30/2024 c35 cctwilight
Oh no, Bella was so ready to go home! Bella will have to ask the boys that found her where it was. Surely the chair is near there.
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