for Devensian8/27/2024 c33 Amelia S James
You need to fix this ASAP, great writting you had on the edge of my seat.
You need to fix this ASAP, great writting you had on the edge of my seat.
8/27/2024 c33 AnakinSmom
But she realizes they intend to send her back to her time. Will Ewar go with her? Or can she convince him to let her stay?
But she realizes they intend to send her back to her time. Will Ewar go with her? Or can she convince him to let her stay?
8/27/2024 c33 edwards-debussy
Oh what - he’s sending her back for medical help? I hope she can make it back to Ewar. Thank you!
Oh what - he’s sending her back for medical help? I hope she can make it back to Ewar. Thank you!
8/26/2024 c33 Guest
Oh no! Is it brain damage!? Just when I was thinking the story is winding down to a happy ending! But wait even if Bella was sent back to her time wouldn't that mean she's still basically paralyzed in a cave?... unless Ewar went with her? ... or they found the wreckage of the previous chair in Damara's forest and put her there...? So many questions! Please update soon love!
Oh no! Is it brain damage!? Just when I was thinking the story is winding down to a happy ending! But wait even if Bella was sent back to her time wouldn't that mean she's still basically paralyzed in a cave?... unless Ewar went with her? ... or they found the wreckage of the previous chair in Damara's forest and put her there...? So many questions! Please update soon love!
8/26/2024 c33 lillianolivia.white
But Alistair is sending her back to the future! I thought Bella was so brave. I was on the edge of my seat. Great battle and chapter. Im just glad that Ora is dead.
But Alistair is sending her back to the future! I thought Bella was so brave. I was on the edge of my seat. Great battle and chapter. Im just glad that Ora is dead.
318/26/2024 c33 Rita01tx
Bloody hell...literally! I assume Alistair sent Bella "home" to get the medical treatment she needs since he has no way of helpin' her *sigh!*
Bloody hell...literally! I assume Alistair sent Bella "home" to get the medical treatment she needs since he has no way of helpin' her *sigh!*
8/26/2024 c33 frostedglaze
I have faith in you, and I know Bella will gain consciousness and kick out her leg and destroy the chair. There is no way she is going forward in time. Alistair and Edward must currently have mush for brains. If they sent an unconscious Bella back to her time, she will still be unconscious in a cave. away from people.
I have faith in you, and I know Bella will gain consciousness and kick out her leg and destroy the chair. There is no way she is going forward in time. Alistair and Edward must currently have mush for brains. If they sent an unconscious Bella back to her time, she will still be unconscious in a cave. away from people.
8/26/2024 c32 frostedglaze
I am loving bloodthirsty Bella, but my heart almost stopped when sweet little muffin Afrin wanted to fight. It made me damn every person named Victoria and Jessica to the sewers of hell. I still have not forgiven Jessica for anything she did. If she wants to atone, dying is the only way to do that.
Stupid and it's glitches kept me away... and now I am off to read the next chapter, but first I am going to have a glass of wine to calm myself down.
I am loving bloodthirsty Bella, but my heart almost stopped when sweet little muffin Afrin wanted to fight. It made me damn every person named Victoria and Jessica to the sewers of hell. I still have not forgiven Jessica for anything she did. If she wants to atone, dying is the only way to do that.
Stupid and it's glitches kept me away... and now I am off to read the next chapter, but first I am going to have a glass of wine to calm myself down.