for Devensian12/10/2024 c37 lillianolivia.white
OMG, THank you, thank you , Thank you! I felt like their adventures were beginning again, and it needed a sequel. I am loving Ewar’s POV, and I cant wait for the Sequel. This is an epic story!
OMG, THank you, thank you , Thank you! I felt like their adventures were beginning again, and it needed a sequel. I am loving Ewar’s POV, and I cant wait for the Sequel. This is an epic story!
12/10/2024 c37 Rita01tx
Thanks for Ewar's POV of the battle and Essa just never changes, does she!? Can't wait for more, especially his journey into the future to be with Bella!
Thanks for Ewar's POV of the battle and Essa just never changes, does she!? Can't wait for more, especially his journey into the future to be with Bella!
12/10/2024 c37 
19FireRed21
That was intense to relive the battle scene. I almost believed Essa had a change of heart for Bella until that last partLets see what hope Alistair has giving Edwar
19FireRed21That was intense to relive the battle scene. I almost believed Essa had a change of heart for Bella until that last partLets see what hope Alistair has giving Edwar
12/10/2024 c37 mysticfighter111
It is good to know that you are feeling netter. Thank you for the outtake. I look forward to learn how Edward prepared for time-travelling.
It is good to know that you are feeling netter. Thank you for the outtake. I look forward to learn how Edward prepared for time-travelling.
12/10/2024 c17 dearedwardc
oh you weren’t kidding when you said this would be a slow, slow burn. I’m dying here!
oh you weren’t kidding when you said this would be a slow, slow burn. I’m dying here!
12/10/2024 c16 dearedwardc
had the best time of my life reading the fake ritual scene. I don’t think I ever laughed that much reading a fanfiction. Bella (and Alistair) is a genius lol
had the best time of my life reading the fake ritual scene. I don’t think I ever laughed that much reading a fanfiction. Bella (and Alistair) is a genius lol
12/10/2024 c37 LaurelLeafSinger
So happy to see Ewar’s POV chapter up! Thank you! Ugh, that Essa. I’d want to strangle her, too. LOL Dear ordinary Bella (well she thinks she’s ordinary) is becoming more of a legend. Yet, she really did turn the tide of the battle with her archery skills. Poor Ewar. He will be undertaking an adventure not for the faint of heart, all to save Bella, his beloved wife and Damara’s assistant.
Hope you feel better!
So happy to see Ewar’s POV chapter up! Thank you! Ugh, that Essa. I’d want to strangle her, too. LOL Dear ordinary Bella (well she thinks she’s ordinary) is becoming more of a legend. Yet, she really did turn the tide of the battle with her archery skills. Poor Ewar. He will be undertaking an adventure not for the faint of heart, all to save Bella, his beloved wife and Damara’s assistant.
Hope you feel better!
12/10/2024 c37 Juxtaposition001
Oh Ewar! Poor baby angel :,(
I can’t wait for more EPOV though! And I'm so happy there's going to be a sequel too. It'll be interesting to see how Ewar adjusts to the cruelty of the modern world. Hopefully they can have a child and make it back home though! *fingers crossed*
Thank you so much for this story btw. It's the only FF I'm reading/waiting on pins and needles for updates. You're really talented, and should consider publishing when you've finished xoxo
Oh Ewar! Poor baby angel :,(
I can’t wait for more EPOV though! And I'm so happy there's going to be a sequel too. It'll be interesting to see how Ewar adjusts to the cruelty of the modern world. Hopefully they can have a child and make it back home though! *fingers crossed*
Thank you so much for this story btw. It's the only FF I'm reading/waiting on pins and needles for updates. You're really talented, and should consider publishing when you've finished xoxo
12/9/2024 c37 MusetteBlanchard
It breaks my heart seeing Ewar like this !
Thank you for keep on writing in spite of your health problems, I fervently hope you are feeling better by now.
Oh I meant to tell you I was watching the History channel last week and they were showing England and its countryside and guess what came out ? The Lake District !
I was surprised, it's the second time that I have the chance of seeing n RL a place I've never heard before until I read a fanfiction.
The first time was a small city called St Helen in Georgia, USA, where the author "thatwritr" placed her amazing story called "In the blink of an eye".
And now Devensian, wow !
I'm praying for your recovery so you can have your normal life back on track ... and you feel well enough to tell this beautiful tale. I'd consider it a Xmas gift !
Thank you again, welcome back.
It breaks my heart seeing Ewar like this !
Thank you for keep on writing in spite of your health problems, I fervently hope you are feeling better by now.
Oh I meant to tell you I was watching the History channel last week and they were showing England and its countryside and guess what came out ? The Lake District !
I was surprised, it's the second time that I have the chance of seeing n RL a place I've never heard before until I read a fanfiction.
The first time was a small city called St Helen in Georgia, USA, where the author "thatwritr" placed her amazing story called "In the blink of an eye".
And now Devensian, wow !
I'm praying for your recovery so you can have your normal life back on track ... and you feel well enough to tell this beautiful tale. I'd consider it a Xmas gift !
Thank you again, welcome back.
12/9/2024 c12 dearedwardc
this was a long but very enjoyable chapter! Edward’s POV surely helped clear things up. it’s so funny reading the wedding night scene from his pov, like all along Bella thought he was chasing her around to sleep together but he was just concerned about her well being. miscommunication trope at its finest LOL. poor Edward though, imagine getting those bad rumors from your first marriage AND getting them again the second time around? he deserves a break, that’s what I think! i know i should probably save this for the last chapter but really! thank you for writing this story. like I said, I’m REALLY enjoying it that i find myself taking a quick read between breaks throughout the day hahah it’s been a while since i found myself this immersed in a fanfiction. you’re a very talented writer x
this was a long but very enjoyable chapter! Edward’s POV surely helped clear things up. it’s so funny reading the wedding night scene from his pov, like all along Bella thought he was chasing her around to sleep together but he was just concerned about her well being. miscommunication trope at its finest LOL. poor Edward though, imagine getting those bad rumors from your first marriage AND getting them again the second time around? he deserves a break, that’s what I think! i know i should probably save this for the last chapter but really! thank you for writing this story. like I said, I’m REALLY enjoying it that i find myself taking a quick read between breaks throughout the day hahah it’s been a while since i found myself this immersed in a fanfiction. you’re a very talented writer x