for Devensian12/11/2024 c27 dearedwardc
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year
12/11/2024 c37 bozbaby
Happy you are feeling better. Take your time with these chapters/stories. Do I want to see a new update everyday because the stories are that freaking good? Yes! However, your health comes first. Period.
Sooo I’m looking forward to see how Ewar, Bella and/or the tribe deal with Essa. My suggestion is that she is to be determined to be unmarriageable and/or a social outcast. This would mean she’d have to stay with the Bat People and be a thorn in their side, but casting her out of the tribe is a death sentence. However, I wouldn’t put it past her to try to poison Bella or other types of revenge. Maybe she had some nocturnal fun with Jaiham and he gave her a deadly prehistoric STD? Ugh… Just want her to go away and be miserable. Yes, yes, she’ll make for some good drama in the sequel.
Looking forward to updates! And feel better, sweetie. Rest, relax and chill when needed. Hot cocoa and hot tea work wonders, especially with a cozy blanket on the couch.
Happy you are feeling better. Take your time with these chapters/stories. Do I want to see a new update everyday because the stories are that freaking good? Yes! However, your health comes first. Period.
Sooo I’m looking forward to see how Ewar, Bella and/or the tribe deal with Essa. My suggestion is that she is to be determined to be unmarriageable and/or a social outcast. This would mean she’d have to stay with the Bat People and be a thorn in their side, but casting her out of the tribe is a death sentence. However, I wouldn’t put it past her to try to poison Bella or other types of revenge. Maybe she had some nocturnal fun with Jaiham and he gave her a deadly prehistoric STD? Ugh… Just want her to go away and be miserable. Yes, yes, she’ll make for some good drama in the sequel.
Looking forward to updates! And feel better, sweetie. Rest, relax and chill when needed. Hot cocoa and hot tea work wonders, especially with a cozy blanket on the couch.
12/11/2024 c25 dearedwardc
it’s a relief to know that the language they use here is based off another one that actually exists- for a second i was worried that you had to invent a new one just for this story lol anyway, yay! things are looking up finally. i know this is not the end yet (and i believe ora will make an appearance sooner or later) but this chapter was like a breath of fresh air after all that angst! so happy for Alie and Jas
it’s a relief to know that the language they use here is based off another one that actually exists- for a second i was worried that you had to invent a new one just for this story lol anyway, yay! things are looking up finally. i know this is not the end yet (and i believe ora will make an appearance sooner or later) but this chapter was like a breath of fresh air after all that angst! so happy for Alie and Jas
12/11/2024 c24 dearedwardc
I’m so glad they’re back together but I’m still so frustrated at them for not talking to each other at all during the journey. the misunderstanding was a minor one they could’ve solved in between the few weeks of travel to the cave!
I’m so glad they’re back together but I’m still so frustrated at them for not talking to each other at all during the journey. the misunderstanding was a minor one they could’ve solved in between the few weeks of travel to the cave!
12/11/2024 c22 dearedwardc
I can’t with these two arghhh it’s like they take one step forward, and then two steps backward! their miscommunication is worse than when they didn’t know each other’s language at all oh my god
I can’t with these two arghhh it’s like they take one step forward, and then two steps backward! their miscommunication is worse than when they didn’t know each other’s language at all oh my god
12/10/2024 c37 traceybuie
So many tears... I can barely see to type. It's heartbreaking how Ewar discovered all of the brave amazing things Bella has done while she is now laying unconscious. Thanks for writing and sharing.
So many tears... I can barely see to type. It's heartbreaking how Ewar discovered all of the brave amazing things Bella has done while she is now laying unconscious. Thanks for writing and sharing.
12/10/2024 c37 lillianolivia.white
OMG, THank you, thank you , Thank you! I felt like their adventures were beginning again, and it needed a sequel. I am loving Ewar’s POV, and I cant wait for the Sequel. This is an epic story!
OMG, THank you, thank you , Thank you! I felt like their adventures were beginning again, and it needed a sequel. I am loving Ewar’s POV, and I cant wait for the Sequel. This is an epic story!
12/10/2024 c37 Rita01tx
Thanks for Ewar's POV of the battle and Essa just never changes, does she!? Can't wait for more, especially his journey into the future to be with Bella!
Thanks for Ewar's POV of the battle and Essa just never changes, does she!? Can't wait for more, especially his journey into the future to be with Bella!
12/10/2024 c37 
19FireRed21
That was intense to relive the battle scene. I almost believed Essa had a change of heart for Bella until that last partLets see what hope Alistair has giving Edwar
19FireRed21That was intense to relive the battle scene. I almost believed Essa had a change of heart for Bella until that last partLets see what hope Alistair has giving Edwar
12/10/2024 c37 mysticfighter111
It is good to know that you are feeling netter. Thank you for the outtake. I look forward to learn how Edward prepared for time-travelling.
It is good to know that you are feeling netter. Thank you for the outtake. I look forward to learn how Edward prepared for time-travelling.