
12/14/2024 c37 gorgo67
Thank you for this view of the battle and all that happened after it from Ewar's POV! It's a great outtake! Can't wait for the next two, as well as the sequel :)
Thank you for this view of the battle and all that happened after it from Ewar's POV! It's a great outtake! Can't wait for the next two, as well as the sequel :)
12/14/2024 c37 Vanilla19
Yay that was awesome.. thanks for writing can't wait till the next chapter is ready
Yay that was awesome.. thanks for writing can't wait till the next chapter is ready
12/12/2024 c37 dearedwardc
poor Ewar, I can’t imagine how helpless he must’ve felt when Bella was unconscious the whole time after she got hurt. anyway, I’m REALLY excited for the next chapter of the outtakes, though I imagine it wouldn’t be all rainbows and fluffs, since Ewar will spend a few months in a distant future (for him at least) ALONE. like I’m really curious how he spent those days alone trying to survive (I’m almost sure it was probably very easy for him, I mean he lived in an era where everything was done by hard manual labor lol) but now that I think about it, it must’ve been so sad and hard for him to be alone in a world he’s Very unfamiliar with. He has no family and he doesn’t even know whether Bella would survive or notthat sounds very depressing to me idk
poor Ewar, I can’t imagine how helpless he must’ve felt when Bella was unconscious the whole time after she got hurt. anyway, I’m REALLY excited for the next chapter of the outtakes, though I imagine it wouldn’t be all rainbows and fluffs, since Ewar will spend a few months in a distant future (for him at least) ALONE. like I’m really curious how he spent those days alone trying to survive (I’m almost sure it was probably very easy for him, I mean he lived in an era where everything was done by hard manual labor lol) but now that I think about it, it must’ve been so sad and hard for him to be alone in a world he’s Very unfamiliar with. He has no family and he doesn’t even know whether Bella would survive or notthat sounds very depressing to me idk
12/12/2024 c36 dearedwardc
I can’t believe I finally finished it. I read through like 4-5 chapters straight in one sitting, so it should tell you how enjoyable this story is. To answer your question- would it be greedy for me to vote for an epilogue AND a sequel? LOL. but I think sequel is a lot better! I’d love to see Ewar getting adjusted to the modern world. but really I’ll be fine with anything you choose to do (or perhaps you already did and I’m too late to the voting?) regardless, I wanna thank you for writing this story. I know the chapter after this is probably an outtake (I’ll read them after I get some sleep haha) but really, this was a very enjoyable ride. I consider this story as underrated so I’ll surely be recommending this to fellow twilight fanfic readers!
I can’t believe I finally finished it. I read through like 4-5 chapters straight in one sitting, so it should tell you how enjoyable this story is. To answer your question- would it be greedy for me to vote for an epilogue AND a sequel? LOL. but I think sequel is a lot better! I’d love to see Ewar getting adjusted to the modern world. but really I’ll be fine with anything you choose to do (or perhaps you already did and I’m too late to the voting?) regardless, I wanna thank you for writing this story. I know the chapter after this is probably an outtake (I’ll read them after I get some sleep haha) but really, this was a very enjoyable ride. I consider this story as underrated so I’ll surely be recommending this to fellow twilight fanfic readers!
12/12/2024 c34 dearedwardc
I swear I’ve never read a chapter so fast in my life LOL I keep wanting to know how the ending would play out! Ugh. Renee is a TERRIBLE mother.
I swear I’ve never read a chapter so fast in my life LOL I keep wanting to know how the ending would play out! Ugh. Renee is a TERRIBLE mother.
12/12/2024 c33 dearedwardc
these last two chapters were intense! i internally flinched when i read the trigger warnings but yeah.. it had to be done. the final battle with Ora was so well written! I loved it
these last two chapters were intense! i internally flinched when i read the trigger warnings but yeah.. it had to be done. the final battle with Ora was so well written! I loved it
12/12/2024 c37 Wutizlyfe
YAY! I can’t wait for the sequel! And I’m excited to read Ewar’s outtakes! You’re so sweet and sad that he waited in the cave for her so long
YAY! I can’t wait for the sequel! And I’m excited to read Ewar’s outtakes! You’re so sweet and sad that he waited in the cave for her so long
12/12/2024 c36 Wutizlyfe
Sequel! This story was Amazing! you are such a talented writer, and the story kept me enthralled the entire time! I never knew what to expect, but I always loved where it went! My heart dropped a few times, i got teary eyed a few times and I laughed a lot. Please write a sequel!
Sequel! This story was Amazing! you are such a talented writer, and the story kept me enthralled the entire time! I never knew what to expect, but I always loved where it went! My heart dropped a few times, i got teary eyed a few times and I laughed a lot. Please write a sequel!
12/11/2024 c29 dearedwardc
OMG! I know I’ve said this a few times before but this story just got MORE interesting againI never imagined myself enjoying adventure genre but here I am, binge reading it for a few days already! I hope their journey goes well
OMG! I know I’ve said this a few times before but this story just got MORE interesting againI never imagined myself enjoying adventure genre but here I am, binge reading it for a few days already! I hope their journey goes well
12/11/2024 c37 frostedglaze
Why couldn't Jessa die?! That woman is just evil and I hope more people heard what she said to Edward and take justice in their own hand. She needs to die horribly... I vote for her being the first person in history to discover poison ivy and uses it as toilet paper.
I just do mot trust Jess, I can see her sneaking in and trying to kill Bella. Oh pretty please let her die. She can be stung to death by bees.
Poor Edward, the man needs food, especially with the arduous journey ahead of him.
I am glad you are feeling better, chronic illness is no joke. Please take care of yourself.
Why couldn't Jessa die?! That woman is just evil and I hope more people heard what she said to Edward and take justice in their own hand. She needs to die horribly... I vote for her being the first person in history to discover poison ivy and uses it as toilet paper.
I just do mot trust Jess, I can see her sneaking in and trying to kill Bella. Oh pretty please let her die. She can be stung to death by bees.
Poor Edward, the man needs food, especially with the arduous journey ahead of him.
I am glad you are feeling better, chronic illness is no joke. Please take care of yourself.
12/11/2024 c27 dearedwardc
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year